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    One Of A Kind (My Last Piece For A While)

    One Of A Kind
    Written By Timeless


    A precious one of tender years
    Sat crying by my side,
    I asked:"Whatever can I do,
    To make your tears subside?"
    ::
    "I heard somebody say" said she,
    "God makes us all the same,
    If that is so, then all I have,
    Is just a different name!"
    ::
    She looked at me with her brown eyes,
    And asked if this were so,
    "You wipe your tears; I said to her,
    I'll tell you what I know."
    ::
    "Each one of us, without a doubt,
    A precious piece of Art,
    So do not fret, you are unique,
    You were right from the start";
    ::
    "Each one of us, just like the trees,
    We reach a different height,
    Some stay quite low, to touch the ground,
    And some reach for the sky";
    ::
    "Each one of us, just like the birds,
    We sing a different song,
    We leave the nest and fly away,
    But know where we belong";
    ::
    "Each one, like snowflakes falling down,
    When winter has arrived,
    No two are ever quite the same,
    Though they may look alike";
    ::
    "Each one, like pearls inside a shell,
    A bright and shining treasure,
    But each a deep and mystic glow,
    To hold a different pleasure";
    ::
    "Each one of us, just like the flowers,
    Bare colors of many shades,
    Each one an equal to the other,
    But never quite the same";
    ::
    And when it rains, my little one,
    Each drop's a special tear,
    That falls upon our mother earth,
    Who holds us all so dear";
    ::
    She left me then, this ponderous child,
    I'd eased her troubled mind,
    Her tears dried up, by Myself,
    Each one,......one of a kind!
    .

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    i did the last piece for a while thing for a while once...we'll see how long this lasts....ill read this later and edit my post with a response
    Bittersweet

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    that was quite a nice read! i really enjoyed that! ithas great emotion that is felt all the way through. it also had some good imagey in it that held some pretty nice pictures. the overall flow of this peice was great! and i really enoyed this peice cause it gets me thinkin about certain things....great job timeless!

    ........fav part...........

    And when it rains, my little one,
    Each drop's a special tear,
    That falls upon our mother earth,
    Who holds us all so dear";
    ::
    She left me then, this ponderous child,
    I'd eased her troubled mind,
    Her tears dried up, by Myself,
    Each one,......one of a kind!

    keep droppin

    ....bless

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    Wonderful use of similes. You used your words exquisitely well to really get the point across. The tone you used was incredible, I felt as though you were actually saying the words to me and I understood perfectly what you were talking about. The tone was soft, understanding, caring, but most of all, that of a mentor. You are definetely one of the most skilled poets on this site when it comes to technical aspects of poetry. You put enough imagery in the poem to make picture after picture of wonderful similes of how we are all different. You picked great similes, all different yet all the same. I think this is something that most people have once thought about. I know I find myself thinking the same thing. And people ask me these questions also, this is true insight into your thoughts and I see it as right. Everything was great about this poem but I loved the similes. Very creative, great use of similes, stringed nicely with imagery, good moral, nice story, everything is on point.
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    Timeless thats a BITEN poem
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    ^^^Yup

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    You see what type of person it is that tries excessivly to get into legends, he was never trusted on this site. His work was suspcious and his intentions were painfully obvious. Someone like that in a crew kills the credibility of the entire crew! Timeless you disgust me man, never again will you be allowed to comeback to RB! You were banned along time ago for much the same. You're a pathetic peice of shit man, a shame to any REAL poet, and an embarement to your crew! To think some of you beefed with me over his legends nominations, second guessing my opinions and those of the other respected menbers here on RB. Well if it were up to YOU (and you idiots know who you are) we would have several biten peices in legends contributed by timeless and many other who do the same damn thing. That would have impacted our credibitly as a site, so I hope you ALL now understand why we protect the legends forum so aggressivly. Embarrasing!

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