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    Judgement day

    I am the light sent to earth to make things right/
    see i dont need arms to fight and u dont need teeth to bite/
    fucken disaster discrases to the master/
    cuz he lost his father it dont mean he a bastard/
    and dont fucken try to press me like im a piano chord/
    yea ive seen it all b4 but this time i got the blue swords/
    ready to chop ya fucken ass,cut u in half/
    im insane in the membrane and ill pop ya ass like shaft/
    see every MC envy's M-O-E/
    so now this industry's got problems mentally/
    im on a fucken journey to make it to the top/
    but the blocks hot,this fucken violence gotta stop/
    here i am heres the plan God damn/
    forgive me for my sins but i fear no man/
    im a warrior stories heard cuz stories told/
    revenge is a dish, best served cold/
    feel the rain and hear the thunders pain/
    or feel the thunders pain and hear the rain/
    the projects,where snitches is vermin/
    and itll be a miracle to find any projects where bitches is virgins/
    aint no one that can fuck with me!, i neva back down!/
    i dont need weapons bitch!,u think ima be scared cuz u got a gat now?!/
    life is precious but i risk it all the time!/
    this beef will mothafucken end, im the punisher of crime!/
    (chorus)-im still workin on it
    only god can judge me me,and i know im good hearted/
    so i aint doubten that im goin to heaven,im goin up marchin/
    but i aint ready for death,i have so much to live for/
    im the rap savior,a hero,cool to the core/
    my block aint that hot,and i plan to keep it that way/
    fucka,get mad at me for profanity,but u let ya family fade/
    cuz they lost respect for u,but thats pretty common/
    and u stay protected too,u betta finish with an amen/
    fuck out my way,white rhino and smirnoff/
    cuz im tryna maintain focused,my thoughts aint soft/
    tell me who da boss,ill aim right for his membrane/
    u can say im that wolf/that has neva been tamed/
    fuck symbolizen myself as a lion,theres a new king in this jungle/
    my crew sneaky as hell,50 niggas and a wooden floor wont even rumble/
    u can say im subliminal and hard to comprehend/
    but then ill say,fuck u,u simple minded,u can neva be my friend/
    my rates brake scales,cuz im way over ten/
    once again,ill drop any sucka u send/
    my style aint mixed fuzion,its new and one of a kind/
    watch my rhymes get bit in my famous future times/
    big deal,pig squeelz, lets cook up cop swine!/
    fuck nicks and dimes,i aint that desperate,my finger's the sign!/
    and it simply says,fuck ya,and it leaves 4 points left!/
    just like a fork,ill stab the bad guy just to earn my respect!/
    (chorus)
    outro-4x
    theres nuten left to say, i will conquer everyday!/
    sinnaz betta pray, before its judgement day!/


    feedback plz........if u dont like it be nice about it but dont diss me 1

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    First off I like it, it was cool, could have been a lot better, especially with this topic....
    If this was a song you'll probably have to set it to bars, and from what I'm seeing you
    could've added like 4 more bars in the both verses....
    The hook
    ""theres nuten left to say, i will conquer everyday!/
    sinnaz betta pray, before its judgement day!/""
    I think it'll flow better this way....
    There's nothin left to say, I'm gonna conquer 2day!!!
    Sinnerz better pray...Right not its Judgement Day!!!///
    Yours was good but the one i did will flow out yor mouth better...try it....
    Anyway your lyrics was ok, but ok aint ok, OK....knawmean
    Shit tight, but you want it tight to def.....Turn it up a notch
    BeWaRe ThE hEaT......


    WiTnEss Da

    Nu GeNeRaTioN

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    Oooppss typo"Right Now Its Judgement Day" my bad,
    BeWaRe ThE hEaT......


    WiTnEss Da

    Nu GeNeRaTioN

  5. #5
    The MC
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    Ill-logical-F.U.C.K.
    feedback here from me^

  6. #6
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    just something i wrote while i was bored today.
    By muto4lyphe...more feedback^ 1

  7. #7
    The MC
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    uppin for more feedback plz thx

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