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    feelings unknown

    vibrantly shivering as i put all of my weight onto the plastic
    creating a joint connecting the oval of people the gloom is drastic
    one by one each verbalizing their problems as others intently listen and stare
    containging problems although different kinds is why everyone was there
    my jaws now vibrating producing numbing effects
    skull slowly turning as i receive the glance of the rest
    yet as if this was jsut a short interruption the process continues on
    of telling the problems of their lives and what went wrong
    though this helps no one for now everyone will know
    and the thought isnt realeased, for it will always be in your soul
    once in the mind, an assesory cannot possibly escape
    the verbal sounds slowly grow louder as i wait
    for i know soon that i to must confess of wrongdoing
    but i no not of wrongdoing i have done no two thoughts begin glueing
    without links where is one to learn of his mastakes
    now my turn has arose as the others patiently wait
    "i have been convicted of a wrongdoing i do not know"
    with each word beign said the nubness and vibrations begin to grow
    brain contracting sharp pains vision appearing cloggy
    i close and open my eyes only to find myself staring at my own body


    -code

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    Glitta
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    that is hot when i read da 1st line i thought u were gonna talk bout sex ( mind n da gutta) and there could have been a unexpected pregancy futher more i like it come back with more....

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