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If $pitacular wins....he gets a hand shake.
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Last edited by $pitacular; August 29th, 2004 at 10:29 PM
check 14 sure
really didnt see my self getting into this match
gl
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I keyed this to grymee... beats crap, just want you to know
thought ya text was the model for wackness... 'til I heard your audio
sorry hoe..... I usually have an arsenal to break bones
& right now I'm out.... but just wait til your father gets home
split dome, doubt you got the tolerance to suffer
n' stryk's such a fuckin fag, he even blows his cover.....
but he still loves his mother... literally, dick in the cunt
I'm either crampin stryk's style... or it's that time of the month
let me be blunt.... it's just the facts, of course I'ma beat him
but I don't hate his guts... matter of fact, I even freed 'em
peep 'em, stryk's in style... the kid's fashionable to boot
in the head... & a rigid black bustier is his strong suit
s'long dude.... bitch's garbage, I'm sick of his junk rhymes
& he past his prime.... rib to me when I punked em at lunch time
's enough
Last edited by $pitacular; August 26th, 2004 at 03:46 AM
of course you keyed your verse bitch get ready to be whored
but not in real life cuz the extent of yours is in your keyboard
dipped in pot holes, tired of your squad thats always quick to cock hold
name opposite your dickriding to make em wonder if you spit or swallow
sad and light.... heavyweights crush you until your mad at life
grabing a guys dick is the only way youd ever grab a mike
were just scratching the surface of this thread only a post or two
thats how many seconds before your whole crew comes and votes for you
seems modesty lacks spouting off in the beef thread....i can tell
your steering away from the fact........ youve never been good in LLL
your not a rapper youve never spat a fucking battle song
only way your blowin up in text is when your sucking avalon
weak and clueless i dont give a shit how your peeps will view this
seeking ruthless? till you rap in real life your completly useless
Last edited by Stryk9; August 27th, 2004 at 12:54 AM
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pretty close..
stryke's imporved, but his lines were prety stretched, and the concepts wern't flipped very well..
good battle...
v/spit
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
$pit
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I keyed this to grymee... beats crap, just want you to know
thought ya text was the model for wackness... 'til I heard your audio
Ok..but played.
sorry hoe..... I usually have an arsenal to break bones
& right now I'm out.... but just wait til your father gets home
Eh.
split dome, doubt you got the tolerance to suffer
n' stryk's such a fuckin fag, he even blows his cover.....
Heh..funny flip on a gay joke.
but he still loves his mother... literally, dick in the cunt
I'm either crampin stryk's style... or it's that time of the month
Played.
let me be blunt.... it's just the facts, of course I'ma beat him
but I don't hate his guts... matter of fact, I even freed 'em
Ok..not really hard-hitting..but ok.
peep 'em, stryk's in style... the kid's fashionable to boot
in the head... & a rigid black bustier is his strong suit
Naw.
s'long dude.... bitch's garbage, I'm sick of his junk rhymes
& he past his prime.... rib to me when I punked em at lunch time
Not really $pit.
Stryk9
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of course you keyed your verse bitch get ready to be whored
but not in real life cuz the extent of yours is in your keyboard
Bad wording..punch didn't really make sense..if the computer is his life and you're sonning him on it..then you'd be sonning him IRL right?
dipped in pot holes, tired of your squad thats always quick to cock hold
name opposite your dickriding to make em wonder if you spit or swallow
Naw..stretched.
sad and light.... heavyweights crush you until your mad at life
grabing a guys dick is the only way youd ever grab a mike
Aight flip for a played gay joke.
were just scratching the surface of this thread only a post or two
thats how many seconds before your whole crew comes and votes for you
Awful wording.
seems modesty lacks spouting off in the beef thread....i can tell
your steering away from the fact........ youve never been good in LLL
Ok.
your not a rapper youve never spat a fucking battle song
only way your blowin up in text is when your sucking avalon
Naw..played.
weak and clueless i dont give how your peeps will view this
seeking ruthless? till you rap in real life your completly useless
Naw.
$pit came alright..not great but obviously he wasn't trying too hard. Stryk came mediocre. He wasn't ready for a title match..but he is improving. Work on your wording..you had some ok concepts but the ass wording killed 'em.
/v $pit.
vote- spit...
Both verses were horrid.... Period...
Seriously... that wasnt good at all....
Spit came with 1 good bar... stryk had nothing.
v/ $pit
better verse...i didnt like stryks at all
spit didnt come to hard but ehh i guess there wasnt really
a reason for it.
pz
thanks for the feedback
macabre
and for those who are stupid at least give an attempt to leave feedback
Last edited by Stryk9; August 27th, 2004 at 01:06 AM
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Stryk9's elevated alot. He came kinda played with a few punches.
$pit obviously didn't give a shit. But still enough to win.
V/$pit
v/ $pit
Just a better verse Stryk9 had some ok punches..
which could be developed but they were to weak in this battle..
pz.
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I don't know but uuuhh some didn't get this punch...
"peep 'em, stryk's in style... the kid's fashionable to boot
in the head... & a rigid black bustier is his strong suit"
Quote:$pit
Unless I see something else but dope concept and punch...
Ok Both had nice verses.
However $pit comes up with clever things to say,
and good wording, but try to stay away from the
blow and dic lines....cause to me no matter how you
word them is just played. You did however manage
to use them good.
Stryk9:
Nice verse never seen you drop before was pretty good.
Nothing that was lik WOW but pretty consistent.
nice....
My vote goes to $pit because he Spit more consistent clever
punches.
Peace
thx for the votes
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sorry i can't give good feeback to this battle but i'm lucky to even be voting so
vote spit harder shit 2 me
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