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    Write To This Picture Week XV

    Hm...
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    Just marking my territory, I want to drop on this since it seems to fit some of my poltical rants... I will write the drop at a later time (expect some heavy metaphores), since it's now time for a SchmoK-BrayK...




    ~Political Vampires~



    Vampires lurk within society, consuming moral splendor
    & the freedoms that it brings, opposed to separate gender
    They’re spiritually unclean, devouring hopes and dreams
    Guzzling down a life’s force endorsed by the wrong course
    Old school political gangsters or pale fang faced pranksters
    Drain veins dry like a modern day Dracula feasts on coagula
    Fresh blood scouted, lost boys are routed through conformity
    Unaware and uninformed educated in the ways of uniformity
    Treasonous devils redefine evil, a true cause of US upheaval
    Faceless predators sink razor edged teeth into societal mains
    Pained remains explain the game,*hint* INIQUITY blamed
    Starlit back drops, where bold ‘eagle’s of ‘old’ once soared
    Outline the sky rise now disguised to the fallen eyes of men
    A ’worlds’ ‘trade’ & ‘center’ of the modern age has been laid
    To eternal rest in the hearts and minds of ‘most’ humankind
    Gentle waters depicted from the putrid mouth of the undead
    Calm in the storm is only a buffer whilst the norm swarms in
    Soldiers of the damn'd long command such wayward lambs
    He creeps in the shadow of night a lonesome warriors’ plight
    Strong & able he fights for the 'right' cause & justice despite
    The claws and sharp fangs of those who secretly hold reigns
    In the Shark & Vampire infested waters of a political domain
    His name will forever remain unclaimed……………………..........
    ……………………………................For reasons I can’t explain


    Last edited by Bounce; August 18th, 2004 at 06:38 PM

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    Painted people
    We’re a painted people it’s been said.
    We are a painted people it’s been read,
    into history in lieu of glorification,
    we’ve seen capture, abuse and abjuration.
    Our intentions covert, to garble the flag,
    devour the eagle and eventually drag
    this state to the depths of our origin,
    to bestow upon thou, macabre fortune.
    From whence to hence we are told as such,
    that destroy, great towers with blackened touch.
    This damning paint we’ll never remove
    though, before I’ve seen that great bird mew.
    We place this rose upon the eagle’s chest.
    He’s now laid to rest forever lest,
    the power within this painted guild,
    be somehow used to revive, rebuild
    a home for people paints or none,
    who refuse to watch freedom undone.
    Last edited by Scarcasm; August 27th, 2004 at 12:34 PM
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    Your face looks really nice today

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    Looking into the mouth of NYC on a dark night
    Vampires lurking causing a heart burning fright
    People sleeping for once feeling the warmth of starlight
    But the world is horrible full of butcher like teeth
    Ripping through bodys and bodys of tender beef
    Terrorism and lying bringing God to such grief


    (Blah....Dont know. Keyed it. And its kind of earlier best I can think of. )
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    smile wide and discover your insides,
    truth is painted within you.
    the love you own and a heart you'll find,
    is nothing but purely beautiful.

    swollow me whole and take me within,
    your inner beauty calls to me.
    god has spoken he calls for your sin,
    see he set the eagles free.

    A lonely time in a whispered night,
    has sent your spirit home.
    given you wings to take you aflight,
    thou you travel all alone.

    bare your teeth and close your lips,
    it's nothing but a feeling.
    pull back your hand and burn the tips,
    for it's the devil's way of healing.

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    Damn.. Come to think of it thats every mans dream..
    To stand in the light but everything isnt what it seems..
    NYC could chew the greatest and spit them back out..
    Wall street could the brightest minds into ten story drop outs..
    Only the strongest will survive and that take plenty of time..
    You depend on lifes structure sometimes it fails but thats the design..

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    Back to your rightful place, sickly disgust is your name
    "America, the greatest country in the world"-What a shame..
    Greatness and senseless pride are not one in the same
    The country is attacked by terrorism, but who's to blame?
    Yourselves, you voted for a man with no fuckin' brain
    Kerry and Bush are both brothers of the same man slaughter
    You all fucked America and crushed her aborted daughter
    Conspiracy theories tell me that this country is run by nazis
    I can say what I want, they tell me it's a free country
    I'm paranoid of colors, was it red, orange, yellow or purple?
    Get ready for heavy shit, the kind that's hard to hurtle
    The U.S. government wants to take control over your mind
    Search MK-Ultra and you wont believe what you'd find
    They deserve what they got and I got what they deserve
    But hell, this country will fall, mark my fuckin' words


    Edit: Just my thoughts. I am just stating my feelings.
    Last edited by Neruda II; August 27th, 2004 at 04:57 PM
    murder murder

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    *loses it*
    *rubs sharp off of cool list*

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    Last edited by Bounce; August 26th, 2004 at 01:55 AM
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    how long do these pics stay up?
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    Your face looks really nice today

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    1 week dubois.

    Next week is up.
    Thanks to all who participated.
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