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Voting Ends Sunday
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Checkin in...g'luck man...10-14 lines?
Last edited by Laureate; August 16th, 2004 at 04:02 PM
A few achievements here and there
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14, sure. good luck
Wants to dominate me… but he always feels scared
gave L his walkin papers…. so he’d step out the wheelchair
doesn’t seem fair… like a cancer patient stripped of meds
leave lyric breathin in short pants…. Attire ripped to shreds
elevate ‘em from sick to dead…. there the clown lies
but Lyric’s packin punches… expandin his mouth size
time to downsize… a Jr. sacrifice, let the blood pour
shit, kid’s only gotta screw loose… cuz his bitch is a whore
got me rollin on the floor… he’s so dumb it’s just funny
Lyric tried to tip the scales… & wasted his bus money
Crushed dummy…. but I never rhyme without reason
There comes a time for every fruit, & lyric’s out of season…
State that he’s in…..You can’t help the kid, leave him be
Seeing is believing…. That’s why Lyric don’t believe in me
Bye.
You can't stop my punches, I pose a triple threat in this game
My lines will pierce you 3 times....jus like the S in your name
Yeah they always hittin hard, like ya verse your a disgrace
Pussy had to put on a helmut....jus so he could save face
Undisputed title match, but bet $pit won't stop complaining
Elevation was apparent, he looked up to me while praying
You really aint got shit, played punches won't win you this
You're just way overmatched, like Fire hoses versus $pit
You tried flickin me off, but my punches left ya twisting
The bird's flying in circles, and obviously it's missing
I know I seen ya bars before, it aint no accidental typo
How you live wit your self? Even your papers recycled
This battle's already over, faggots bending at the creases
Like sayin 'Bye' multiple times, I leave you in peaces's
pz
pz
pz
A few achievements here and there
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Um.... Neither came as dope as I've seen them do before, but $pitacular took this for better concepts. That's the only reason. Nice by Lyric, but I wasn't getting enough wittiness. Good job there, $pit.
Vote: $pitacualr
spitacular
Wants to dominate me… but he always feels scared
gave L his walkin papers…. so he’d step out the wheelchair
weak
doesn’t seem fair… like a cancer patient stripped of meds
leave lyric breathin in short pants…. Attire ripped to shreds
not the best, not the worst punch
elevate ‘em from sick to dead…. there the clown lies
but Lyric’s packin punches… expandin his mouth size
good
time to downsize… a Jr. sacrifice, let the blood pour
shit, kid’s only gotta screw loose… cuz his bitch is a whore
ok
got me rollin on the floor… he’s so dumb it’s just funny
Lyric tried to tip the scales… & wasted his bus money
okay
Crushed dummy…. but I never rhyme without reason
There comes a time for every fruit, & lyric’s out of season…
average
State that he’s in…..You can’t help the kid, leave him be
Seeing is believing…. That’s why Lyric don’t believe in me
so/so
not your best verse, pretty average, consistant too.
lyric
You can't stop my punches, I pose a triple threat in this game
My lines will pierce you 3 times....jus like the S in your name
nah
Yeah they always hittin hard, like ya verse your a disgrace
Pussy had to put on a helmut....jus so he could save face
good
Undisputed title match, but bet $pit won't stop complaining
Elevation was apparent, he looked up to me while praying
nah
You really aint got shit, played punches won't win you this
You're just way overmatched, like Fire hoses versus $pit
wack wording
You tried flickin me off, but my punches left ya twisting
The bird's flying in circles, and obviously it's missing
weak
I know I seen ya bars before, it aint no accidental typo
How you live wit your self? Even your papers recycled
average
This battle's already over, faggots bending at the creases
Like sayin 'Bye' multiple times, I leave you in peaces's
nothing special
one or two weal punches lost you this.
vote-spit
comign slightly better
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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lyric - to many self hype, filler lines, u had a few good bars...
only a few good punches... a few small effecting personals...
nothing special.... come harder...
spit - ....a tad of wordplay... some witty concepts..
good flow... punches connected mostly... easy win.
vote - spit.
vote spit
why
lyric ur verse was good no odubt, but u had alil too much self glorification in ur verse, u had decent hitting punches but not hard enuff to beat spit
spit on the other hand, u had some good punches, didnt see many personals from u guys, but the walkin out the whellchair line was nice, u definitlet had the better amount of wordplay
keep this is up u guys
Ya Dig?!
this was pretty good battle
i think spit just came with more consistence and harder hitting punches
i luaghed at the wheel chair line
the bitch whore line sucked but still the rest was good enough for the win
lyric had a few good lines
i liked your closer -witty
overall close but vote spit
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battl was aight, lyric ya opener was super wack... you pulled it back up but SPit won this one out. The best bar was either the closer or the expanding mouth size
Vote Spit
Still In this Hoes Sig.
Anyway. Vote $pit.
Lyric has so much Bullshit in his verse..
The self lines..the filler..
It was all to much to beat $pit.
Hd his verse been punch after punch..
and not Ego after punch.
He Coulda won.
$pit's verse sucked...
.....For him that is..Still won.
V/$pit
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
vote spit.
Lyric seemed to hype himself a little bit..
both were good but spit was just that little bit better..
pz.
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yeah spit got this.. lyrics shaking the rust off though..
v/spit
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
^or maybe y'all don't get his punches?..... that could be lol cuz he won this hehe
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