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Check Ins Due Wednesday
Verses Due Friday
Voting Ends Sunday
If you successfully win the title this week and also defend the title and win next week...you will move on to the next title.
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check. Let's make it 14-16. 2nd person matches whatever 1st person posts.
G/L
I'm ready to drop. Go 12 actually.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141976
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post1629330
Last edited by >Inertia>; August 18th, 2004 at 04:17 PM
You're a bitch son, 'n you look like those lawn gnomes,
So i'll send my punches broad-way, like Sean Puffy Combs.
Kid's wack, I'm pretty sure he's a tubby coward and a ho,
..'n yea he loves beef alot..with gravy and potatoes.
I can give you pointers, your punches are played, but I can help,
..cuz you couldn't break new water, if your name was Michael Phelps.
Fat kid with weak lungs, and he's stupid; ignore his claims
Cuz I'll run circles around him, 'n leave him coffin' like Rick James.
Lack of substance, your rhymes are weightless so I'm the winner,
..because I ate his verse alive..and somehow got thinner.
When you spit it's like a breeze, something I hardly even felt,
You'll be called the greedy champ, the way you no-show the belt.
I know you have shit to deal with, but I hope you show.
I'll drop in a little bit....
gotta run out right now, but didn't want to forget to check in
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&postcount=22
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&postcount=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&postcount=16
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...92&postcount=9
Last edited by Kon Quest; August 22nd, 2004 at 08:33 PM
Dawg, that verse was embarrasing.....shit, I'll set it ablaze
Even from the looks of your sig....you seem red in the face
Shit, he tried cheating in his check in...but this cat's leaving toasted
He couldn't bring any heat....so he asked me to match what he posted
Dawg...I'll leave you flat on your back when attacking you Jack
No Big Puns Intended....when packin this Mac in back of the Ac
Got him showing devotion by default.....check out this patriotic kid
Cause he tried raising a white flag.....but his blood stained a lot of it
He's showing his dyslexia......he made a mistake, a blunder
Claiming to be underrated.....what he meant was he's rated under
Dawg, I had some shit to do........but I decided to spit this early
So I ended it like Eminem......cause my Dozen just did you Dirty
Let's get some votes in here.
vote, you lazy bastards.
Fair and square like God's hair
You're a bitch son, 'n you look like those lawn gnomes,
So i'll send my punches broad-way, like Sean Puffy Combs.
good idea BUT the wording wrecked the impact somewhat
Kid's wack, I'm pretty sure he's a tubby coward and a ho,
..'n yea he loves beef alot..with gravy and potatoes.
nope Mac
I can give you pointers, your punches are played, but I can help,
..cuz you couldn't break new water, if your name was Michael Phelps.
setup was kinda eh...but punch was..um..recent.okay
Fat kid with weak lungs, and he's stupid; ignore his claims
Cuz I'll run circles around him, 'n leave him coffin' like Rick James.
seems to work..not sure about circles/caughin
Lack of substance, your rhymes are weightless so I'm the winner,
..because I ate his verse alive..and somehow got thinner.
no way
When you spit it's like a breeze, something I hardly even felt,
You'll be called the greedy champ, the way you no-show the belt.
this is a bit of a...um...damn *can't remember that figure of speech*..anyway the punch hits half way since you're saying he's got the belt but at the same time doesn't have it..thats how I see it. Instead of "you'll be called" you could of used a "like" it might of helped..Idk :^(...
Dawg, that verse was embarrasing.....shit, I'll set it ablaze
Even from the looks of your sig....you seem red in the face
not really Kon
Shit, he tried cheating in his check in...but this cat's leaving toasted
He couldn't bring any heat....so he asked me to match what he posted
match lines are becoming played...blame Av he uses them every other battle.LOL.
Dawg...I'll leave you flat on your back when attacking you Jack
No Big Puns Intended....when packin this Mac in back of the Ac
I think I saw a Big Pun from...um...Quill? Somewhere recently
Got him showing devotion by default.....check out this patriotic kid
Cause he tried raising a white flag.....but his blood stained a lot of it
this was brutally nice
He's showing his dyslexia......he made a mistake, a blunder
Claiming to be underrated.....what he meant was he's rated under
okay
Dawg, I had some shit to do........but I decided to spit this early
So I ended it like Eminem......cause my Dozen just did you Dirty
seems somewhat corny to me.Didn't like
Close.Mac.
Last edited by Kaput Mundi; August 19th, 2004 at 02:21 PM
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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break it down. I don't care as long as you're fair.
Hmm... This was pretty close, but I've defintely seen both come better. My vote is gonna go Kin's way cuz he had one punch that was wittier than Macabre's witty punch:
Shit, he tried cheating in his check in...but this cat's leaving toasted
He couldn't bring any heat....so he asked me to match what he posted
That was good. This was the only thingh that separated Macabre's verse from his, cuz they both had one good punch. Here was Macabre's:
Lack of substance, your rhymes are weightless so I'm the winner,
..because I ate his verse alive..and somehow got thinner.
But yeah, Kon came a little better here.
Vote: Kon Quest
Wow, I thought Kon beat him by a landslide. More creativity and wit. Mac used a potatoe line and a Sean Puffy Combs line. Why? I wasn't feeling it. You could of came harder. All these name references. Rick James and Michael Phelps? No...no creativity.
Kon, I liked your verse. You showed wit.
Shit, he tried cheating in his check in...but this cat's leaving toasted
He couldn't bring any heat....so he asked me to match what he posted
Dawg...I'll leave you flat on your back when attacking you Jack
No Big Puns Intended....when packin this Mac in back of the Ac
Got him showing devotion by default.....check out this patriotic kid
Cause he tried raising a white flag.....but his blood stained a lot of it
He's showing his dyslexia......he made a mistake, a blunder
Claiming to be underrated.....what he meant was he's rated under
That basically did it for me.
Vote-Kon Quest.
AI. Legendary.
19x HOF. Seven Titles. 50.
macabre
You're a bitch son, 'n you look like those lawn gnomes,
So i'll send my punches broad-way, like Sean Puffy Combs.
weak
Kid's wack, I'm pretty sure he's a tubby coward and a ho,
..'n yea he loves beef alot..with gravy and potatoes.
nah
I can give you pointers, your punches are played, but I can help,
..cuz you couldn't break new water, if your name was Michael Phelps.
so/so
Fat kid with weak lungs, and he's stupid; ignore his claims
Cuz I'll run circles around him, 'n leave him coffin' like Rick James.
not the best, not the worst
Lack of substance, your rhymes are weightless so I'm the winner,
..because I ate his verse alive..and somehow got thinner.
weak
When you spit it's like a breeze, something I hardly even felt,
You'll be called the greedy champ, the way you no-show the belt.
okay
some nice ideas, sometimes your wording stops the punch from making the full connection.
kon quest
Dawg, that verse was embarrasing.....shit, I'll set it ablaze
Even from the looks of your sig....you seem red in the face
weak
Shit, he tried cheating in his check in...but this cat's leaving toasted
He couldn't bring any heat....so he asked me to match what he posted
okay played though
Dawg...I'll leave you flat on your back when attacking you Jack
No Big Puns Intended....when packin this Mac in back of the Ac
good
Got him showing devotion by default.....check out this patriotic kid
Cause he tried raising a white flag.....but his blood stained a lot of it
lol, nice
He's showing his dyslexia......he made a mistake, a blunder
Claiming to be underrated.....what he meant was he's rated under
good
Dawg, I had some shit to do........but I decided to spit this early
So I ended it like Eminem......cause my Dozen just did you Dirty
not the best not the worst
vote-kon
slightly more consistant, and a few better punches.
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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mac - lines seemed kinda basic, disses werent hitting to hard, punches were there.... few good concepts... not in abundance tho... come wittier..
kon - thought u did well, beat him in every catagory down to flow. punches connected much better. concepts were creative... and witty..
therefore. u won easily.
vote - kon
This battle to me, was pretty one sided.... especially now that I know what you're capable of Mac, this was very disappointing.
Vote - Kon for having more wit, and hitting harder. Mac the stuff you threw down seemed half assed, rushed or something...
pz
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