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no dr or crew votes
blind spit
do tommorow like u said
16 lines
no dr or crew votes
blind spit
do tommorow like u said
chec chec
ima spit right now..... so dont worry bout my verse
chec chec iight son...........................................
man dis "nigger" expired on da slave ship (fresh)
still got bruises, originatin from the plains whips
red and cuts cover his back, still ya back can't lower
i told you not to run, when the master needed a choafer
battle me and get baked* like a stoafer
borin ass rhymmes even got "Akon" askin if its over (akon from africa)
u couldn't beat me if u was a producer (beat as in music)
u need a belt cuz yo rap couldnt get any looser (not tight)
man yo skillz is flat like u pressin it, remember ace venture
he had got ya princess preg-a-nant, and then jeted it
rap is words and u numbers(0) so yaw erelevant
so give up and we'll forgt you and you'll we'll never miss
man u convienient cuz i always know theres a win in store ( convienient store)
you ill? u hearin stories like babies suppose 2 orignate from the stork
Right now I guess I’m the top gunner
You must be a crack head cus nobody wears hoodys when the time is summer
Even though this is a waste of my time I aint gon bull shit
You from SOUTHSIDE you on Lloyd Ashanti bull shit
Its real confusin and this is what everybody can dig
How you a deuce and you got red in ya sig
I got 10 more bars like the ocean I flow
I bet 50 cents that 9 shots would be the end of the show
But I aint gon end it that easy though
Ya black ass look like a BURNT FRIED CHICKEN covered up in CRISCO
Your not worth rappin to ya finished that’s it
If ya name was HIDEY HO I would understand why ya lyrics are SHIT
This bitch is worse than that girl named defusion (8 Mile)
Ya mother aint nothing but a CRACKHEAD HOE like WHITNEY HOUSTON
So before you come see me stay off them base rocks
Ya girl thinks im a hockey player cus when I bussed I gave her a slap shot
^^^ouch i love my momma lol^^^
good drop uppin 4 votes!!!!!!
dont sleep on dis shit
battles aint pillows
lol ayo i love my arican ppls ^^^^^^^
2mD got this..
fresh.. get rid of all those simple rhymes.. u rhymed shit/shit and dig/sig... your rhyme scheme needed work.. looks rushed..
2md.. good punches but some of that shit was self explainitory (likethis) and not alot of multis but you had a good enough verse to take this win.. good personals..
vote 2md
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why give a fuck man.. give a fuck less
why run a muck man.. give em ruckus
ses got me stressed man livin reckless
mess with the best man come n test this
thnax 4 the votes
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dont yaw wanna be like him lol
vote famos
upp
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you know damn well you just mad cus i aint vote for your ass in ya otha battle
and out of everybody else you the first muh fucka to vote
this shit asent been on for maby 5 min
ayo i called that shit a Hate vote and you know it
Wack battle
2mD - You talked more about african slave ships than you did your opponent. Yes, his name is freshouttaafrica, but your punches (if you call them that) made no sense and didn't hit him. My name is DaTrusHurtz. Basically if you were to say that I don't speak the truth, that's not a punch and the equivalent of what you did. Your wordplay had the right idea, but it wasn't good cause you had to always explain it... wordplay shouldn't have to be explained, you should just get it.
freshouttaafrica - Your name is funny and your lyrics are wack, but enough to win this battle. Your punches were weak, but at least they hit him. The personal about wearing a hoodie was good except you worded it really poorly so it didn't hit so work on wording to make your punches more direct. Either way your punches hit harder and you were slightly wittier so you take this.
Vote - Fresh
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uppin 4 HONEST feedback, no hate and no dickriding plz
yo that was an ok battle 2md was aight but africa came like he wanted to win that was whats up you gotta come harder than that 2md it was good though dont get it twisted i was feeling this line right here africa aight Right now I guess I’m the top gunner
You must be a crack head cus nobody wears hoodys when the time is summer
Even though this is a waste of my time I aint gon bull shit
You from SOUTHSIDE you on Lloyd Ashanti bull shit