Twixn...
CAMROK
yeah Topicals are hard to vote on, okay i was really feeling both of your verses, so first of all good job to the both of you. but i also thought that Camrok came better in his verse, both had MAss emotion so props to the both of you, but i personally could get into Camrok's more... and i was feeling his more... good job though Twix, just i wasnt feeling your as much. good shit though...
v/camrok
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shit i always forget to say this.. sorry.. but
return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141364
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Camrok- you had a nice verse, you verse was emotional throughout and you had great imagery, i could picture everything in my mind about what was happenign throughout, flow and structure was good, you stayed on topic and enjoyed reading your verse throughout
Twixn- you had a decent verse, you didnt show as much imagery as camrok did and it wasnt as emotional, you had good flow and structure, your "Faces Fleeting" section had a nice rhyme scheme to it, your verse wasnt that bad, just didnt paint a picture well enough with imagery.
V/ Camrok cause he came more emotional and had better imagery
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