T-West vs. Talksick

[t-west]

10 lines
due 30 minutes after you check-in
No biting/ recycling / etc...


Good Luck. Have Fun.

[Talksick]

Checkin in........................................

[t-west]

Smash a biter, have your teeth engraved in your face...
Your Talksick/Toxic? No wonder your lines are complete waste!
He's a bitch! I don't like those, exposin' this tramp...
Stealin' his name from a member of the Empire camp!
But it really makes sense that'd you steal his stuff...
When the leader of the group is named Scandalous!
Nobody wanna peep your writtens cuz their far from tight...
He has an "Open Audience"...Not an "Open Mic"....
Excite the crowd with punches...like your structure, ur damaged...
Why you think in every verse...Talksick types slanted!


M-E-R-K-E-D.

[Talksick]

•I'll rip-this-man, can't 'throw a punch' even 'with-his-hands'..
•Spittin rhymes so scary they'll make him 'piss-his-pants'!!(his aim)*
•How you gonna 'dodge me' when this saint-'throws-bricks'..
•Your verse is like 'smirnoff' cep't there ain't-no-'twist'!!(t-west)*
•Only time you got gutts son is when you step-to-THE-best..
•Call me an 'undertaker' the way I'm bringin 'Death-to-T-West'!!*
•Your career is alot like 'prostitution' cuz you-'live-to-suck'..
•'Curse' when I see ya check in, cuz really 'Who-gives-a-fuck!'!!*
•In this battle I came off 'strong' like the 'taste-of-bacardi'..
•We 'hail' from the same place, but I just 'rained'-on-ya-party!!*

[t-west]

wack @ me forgetting to update this profile with my actual AIM. Oh well...Lets get some votes comin' in.

[SkinnyS]

pretty gay battle..

but i seriously think Twest first line was better
than talk's whole verse...the twist wordplay was no
good at all..undertaker no...and the closer was wack
as hell..played to death...T also had the audience line
...

V.Twest.

[Emerge]

Jae Cyph's rule# 1 in voting:

Cooler Name wins.

But! Both names are gay.

Rule #2: Dopest usage of font and vbulliten tags.

Opt! That one guy went nuts with slashes and colors.

vote - The other guy by the rules of Jae Cyph voting,
AND because T West is a doofus textcee.

[Sergio...]

i am he who voteth against he in an earlier post

[Brother Blue Collar]

hmmm you guys don't deserve the normal way i vote i don't feel t-west put his entire mind to beating talksick, but the talksick/toxic line was dope i was thinking about that shit when i saw this thread empire punch i didn't get prolly cuz i dunno who empire was, scandlous punch was worded badly, and didn't make much sense, and closer wasn't that effective, anyway talksick twist and t-west don't sound the same unless you say t west really quickly, under joint was simple not witty, and closer wasn't great either okay but not great

so vote talksick for loser and t-west for winner

[t-west]

"Empire" is an established rap group in Toronto that consists of the following emcees: Adam Bomb, Scandalis, T.R.A, Tek-Man, Joe Kerr, TalkSick, Mr. Shebib, and Skinny the Nutcracker.

Me and my opponent are both from Toronto...and I know that he ain't TalkSick from Empire. Also, To understand the Scandalis Punchline...you have to know the actual meaning of the word and then you'll get it.

[Meks.]

WEST

Smash a biter, have your teeth engraved in your face...
Your Talksick/Toxic? No wonder your lines are complete waste!
---.... no...
He's a bitch! I don't like those, exposin' this tramp...
Stealin' his name from a member of the Empire camp!
--- ... decent
But it really makes sense that'd you steal his stuff...
When the leader of the group is named Scandalous!
--... nice try.
Nobody wanna peep your writtens cuz their far from tight...
He has an "Open Audience"...Not an "Open Mic"....
--- good punch... liked it.
Excite the crowd with punches...like your structure, ur damaged...
Why you think in every verse...Talksick types slanted!
----ehh, flimsy... but kinda effective. decent

decent verse, shoulda dropped harder tho and used some wordplay.
10/20

talksick

•I'll rip-this-man, can't 'throw a punch' even 'with-his-hands'..
•Spittin rhymes so scary they'll make him 'piss-his-pants'!!(his aim)*
----EHH OK PERSONAL, WEAK PUNCH
•How you gonna 'dodge me' when this saint-'throws-bricks'..
•Your verse is like 'smirnoff' cep't there ain't-no-'twist'!!(t-west)*
----.....decent...flow flawless so far...
•Only time you got gutts son is when you step-to-THE-best..
•Call me an 'undertaker' the way I'm bringin 'Death-to-T-West'!!*
-----decent, again lacking witt tho...
•Your career is alot like 'prostitution' cuz you-'live-to-suck'..
•'Curse' when I see ya check in, cuz really 'Who-gives-a-fuck!'!!*
---another personal, good meta, decent man... lacking witt tho
•In this battle I came off 'strong' like the 'taste-of-bacardi'..
•We 'hail' from the same place, but I just 'rained'-on-ya-party!!*
---theres what u needed right there, killer closer... liked it alot.

vote - talk, for better personals, better metas...better flow..... punches... lean toward t west.. but talk's closer was better than nething in his verse..... and... his shit was only a tad bit wittier,
decent battle tho

hit up my battle with liquidcontent . ?

[I-Hovyy]

talksick took it bcuz in twest verse he put exclamation points and thats just gay..nah im playin twest couldve came harder and talksick had better punches iight hit this up plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140938

[t-west]

Now I remember why I never visit FL anymore...uppin'

[Talksick]

LOL.. 2-2 Uppin^^
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[Fire aka Nikkelz]

good battle from both sides

Twest i think that you had good personals. You had an okay opener and closer. The flow was kinda off sometimes...and that made the structure twisted. I think that some punches could have been better

Talksick...good verse overall. I liked the structure and flow. I think that you should of had better punches, but you made up for that with the personals. I think that you had a good closer

the battle was really good but i was feelin the flow from Talksick

vote...talksick