5 bars/10 lines..
Due in 30 mins..
Goodluck..
Se7eN
Talksick
5 bars/10 lines..
Due in 30 mins..
Goodluck..
time limit starts now..................checking in
I battle herbs like this.......juss to fill my need for a win.
But you couln't be ill,
If you were a member at a hospital's gym.
Face the facts, your wack, and your sig is even gay.
I've seen better "zig zags",
In a bag of fake shit, on ebay.
What he say.........She say........talk sick isn't sick.
Detriot created a monster,
............a monster pile of shit.
Since I murder ya style.......and I feel your mother.
I'll shake hands wit ya,
To show what motivate's your next brother.
Have the rubber pop and shit get's all in your face.
But you like your future,
So eat it up and enjoy the taste.
....*Pumps up*....
•Couldn't be 'blessed' if you was 'friends wit Lucifer'..
•So 'off with your head' like I was the 'Executioner'!!*
•You already steppin to me, it's funny your powerless B..
•Unlike 'Se7eN 11', you couldn't last '24 hours' wit me!!*
•Like a 'boring sitcom', ever since your 'debut you wack'..
•How you gonna 'beat a vet' when you 'New to Rap'?!*
•Beating you like 'bully would', very 'turned into size'..
•It's amusin how ya 'sig' is 'scarier than your rhymes'!!*
•Leavin you 'broken' like a 'blunt that isn't rolled up'..
•Verse reminded me of '9/11', the 'structure didn't hold up'!!*
uppin x1 for votes..............Hit this battle ^ and we'll peep your links............
Se7en
I battle herbs like this.......juss to fill my need for a win.
But you couln't be ill,
If you were a member at a hospital's gym.
-weak
Face the facts, your wack, and your sig is even gay.
I've seen better "zig zags",
In a bag of fake shit, on ebay.
-weak
What he say.........She say........talk sick isn't sick.
Detriot created a monster,
............a monster pile of shit.
-blah
Since I murder ya style.......and I feel your mother.
I'll shake hands wit ya,
To show what motivate's your next brother.
-boo at mama joke
Have the rubber pop and shit get's all in your face.
But you like your future,
So eat it up and enjoy the taste.
-blah
Talksick
Couldn't be 'blessed' if you was 'friends wit Lucifer'..
So 'off with your head' like I was the 'Executioner'!!*
-weak opener
You already steppin to me, it's funny your powerless B..
Unlike 'Se7eN 11', you couldn't last '24 hours' wit me!!*
-decent punch
Like a 'boring sitcom', ever since your 'debut you wack'..
How you gonna 'beat a vet' when you 'New to Rap'?!*
-another decent punch
Beating you like 'bully would', very 'turned into size'..
It's amusin how ya 'sig' is 'scarier than your rhymes'!!*
-ok
Leavin you 'broken' like a 'blunt that isn't rolled up'..
Verse reminded me of '9/11', the 'structure didn't hold up'!!*
-decent
Se7en.. you had some weak punches and you really didnt take any personal attack against him except for about his name, Talksick came more consistant throughout his verse and had better creativity.
V/Talksick for harder punches and comming more personal against his opponent
Uppin^^
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the rules was 5 bars/10 lines he spit 7 bars and 15 lines so seven loses by dq
v-talksick
i didn't dq, idiot i have 10 lines there, read it and weep....................See this is why I hate battlin' cause of dumbasses like him...........uppin' x2 for votes
Uppin^^
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uppin x3 for votes..............Hit this battle ^ and we'll peep your links............
(3) Uppin for fuck sakes^^ I'll hit your links too if you vote..
i cant vote yet but in my opinion talksick took it..his shit didnt sound like nursery rhymes and made sense.blah talksick *
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7 man you had a real bad structure to your verse and your line were mostly whack I expected more from you for some reason..
Talk you had some good punchs with some decent name plays your verse had some personals but not many.
This battle was real one sided Talksick had some real good punchs and some real nice concepts to go with them. I think I seen 1 or 2 name plays from Talk nothing really from 7. So Im going with talk because his verse was well structured which made his punchs nice and easy to follow..
V/ Talksick
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140794