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    'freely associated' association

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139341



    I think the words 'fuck' or 'shit' or the phrase 'son-of-a-bitch' (roughly)
    or 'damnit', (but emphasized a bit more because it's the
    soft-porn version of cussing)
    should be added to the phrase 'writer's block' shit
    got a nice ring to it, but on a lighter top.ic...
    or at least...a lighter note/I can't grip the damn pen/when...NO!...
    my mind's moving at a hundred miles anhour/that wasn't a typo
    maybe it was, once I was in love/and I wonder what's on T.V./see
    it's/like/it's A.D.D. and not 'THE BLOCK', or so it seems
    it's like some damn villian on Ritalin feeding me speed again/when
    he's speeding past me like/some/kind of sadistic stone-age queen/then
    ...stops and watches me fly past...with/that wry gasp and histerical laugh/its...not so funny to me...
    because as I struggle with the words thrown .or. drawn from my mouth
    this droning/out.cast grown from my own being must be cast/out
    this vile and venomous vendetta viciously taunts me with viscosity
    and often flaunts IT'S spEEch imPEDIMENT...its evident/that
    I/have one because/my words lack...relevance/and
    this 'fucking writer's block'
    I have 'writer's block...son-of-a-bitch'
    this 'writer's block damnit' 'shit'!
    but what is 'writer's block'?/this
    entity/this
    excuse to blame on others
    this 'get the hell outta here...I'm THINKING'
    no...it's the lack of creativity
    the lack of words/for lack of a better word/i
    know its ubsurd/but what the fuck was my point?
    sitting at home and all roads lead to Rome/and
    when there, do as they do/but I'm in Japan/and have no words thrown...
    it's kinda like those artists/who look at a blank canvas and get pissed and spray paint on the white plane, just a jesture of the pain they feel when/they have.fucking.'writer's block'
    right behind them's a mindless flock to tell them that what they just did/was

    ...art...


    I want to tear these people apart/and take this artist thrown/abAck/and
    throw his ass to the lions...look at those paintings, I wouldn't buy them
    would you?
    would/you buy a page of scribbled ink/blots only to find/that
    this riddle, a mess riddled with mesh metaphors was nothing more than lined/crap
    I wouldn't buy that,
    did you see the loose-leaf supported by the 'blue-line' group-ies
    a three-ring circus of possibilities/lacking abilities?
    if you did/you wouldn't buy this then
    you'd steal it again, like the script from my mouth
    only to rip and gouge the only thing I give by choice
    my voice
    MY page IS torn but with more than three holes
    because life is more complex than that
    three holes...ooohhhh no that would be too simple, understood?
    because.see. my life is out of context and my text is located in a spiral notebook that shreds my thought with the sound of those little holes being fucking ripped
    and I can here each one out of context as it happens fast
    I can't even get a band-aid to last, so I rip that off at last
    only pro.cras.tinating cause the last thing I want to do is sit here and write
    write this trite and treasonous 'tarry' that taunts, riddles and tortures while I type...
    or scribble...


    ok, I'm done...my damn fingers hurt
    Last edited by bornspokenword; August 1st, 2004 at 12:01 AM
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    shit, i was reading and i was getting into it cuz i liked how you described that, something people can rap around and you broke out in first leter multies an stuff so a change of subject was good.

    goood shit i thought, people are to lazy to read and reply
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    ya, that's cool man. I don't really care if anyone read that, if I spit it live I care if people listen...that's where emphasizing wordz come in.
    thanx for the feedback tho
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    ok...
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    not bad at all duke...i can imagine what its like spittin this live...i know ur style...from beginnin to finish this is an appreciated work duke....thats all im gonna say to ya...


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    thanx for recog-'noticing' the stee dog...

    what's 'igido'?
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    yeah...tis dope...i knew i put you in the crew for a legit reason....

    Your style is really cool...i mean it seems like something i'd put into process.....loved it loved it....just thought you should know....this is actualy a new light for poetry scriptures congrats......reconform the conformed...

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    thanx deacon
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    Nice poetic rant. Im feeling how you took this in a spoken word way. Your writing style is what i like most. The way you express your words easily. Good job.
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    thanx dude...
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