yo dawg setting it up waiting for you to check in
10 lines
5 votes to win
3-0 is a k.o
usual rules
no crew
dickridin
or feedin allowed
holla back its costing me 8 credits for this bitch
you wanna spit for or me
Mistakenfacts
VaryAble
yo dawg setting it up waiting for you to check in
10 lines
5 votes to win
3-0 is a k.o
usual rules
no crew
dickridin
or feedin allowed
holla back its costing me 8 credits for this bitch
you wanna spit for or me
i need sleep so ill spit rite now or in mornin
peace
spit first then dawg and 2night if possible you cant be that sleepy na'mean
This guy's spittin with mistaking remarks
He's just a confused astronomer.. misplacing the charts
You think your safe from my vocab across tha atlantiq plateau
You couldnt defend my lyrics if u was in St. Michel's organic Castle*
Ima use this bitch like a punchin bag,
Spit with rope-a-dopes**, punch lines.. and lunch-time-jabs
This guy's guna put up his verse with a lamer essay ***
But his mistaken facts'll only turn up as paper macher
Im as dope as dope, hes as whack as crack
He been bitch slapped by varyable and all the feedback (votes)
*Ancient Castle in France... read about it
**Boxin term.... read bout it
*** essay = essaie ( french for trying)...trust it makes sense
peace... 10 lines a bit short but meh
just seen this here my verse
nice battle
Your style aint doing nothing like an empty cons~clip
That’s why one shot make you rock like a j-kwon~hit*
You don’t wanna battle dawg, I fade~to~the~mental**
Put a gun to you head, pray~to~you~temple***
Inject flows that will execute~your~nerve~sys(system)
Stangle you with modem wires, make you reboot~your~service
No one knows your style; you don’t sit on a throne
Cause just like mathematics a varyable’s the unknown****
This forums for the sick and you don’t even fit you bill
Had you dick up magic Johnson, but you still cant cum ill*****
FOR ALL YOU STUPID MUTHAFUCKAZ OUT THERE
*J-kowns hit is called tipsy. one shot as in punch or drink of alcohol tipsy as in staggering about from the punch lines, plus the song has some bounce so you rock etc. – you get this one anyway
** fade to the metal - go crazy
***the gun is at the temple part of you head or pray to you temple - your god
****man did you listen at school
*****magic johnsons got aids if you have you dick up him you gonna get aids or becomes sick/ill and with it being you dick you will pass aid with you cum hence his flow still cant come ill
VaryAble
This guy's spittin with mistaking remarks
He's just a confused astronomer.. misplacing the charts
You tried a personal here, but I don't feel it hit
You think your safe from my vocab across tha atlantiq plateau
You couldnt defend my lyrics if u was in St. Michel's organic Castle*
Doesn't rhyme very well and this doesn't make sense really
Ima use this bitch like a punchin bag,
Spit with rope-a-dopes**, punch lines.. and lunch-time-jabs
Ok, but doesn't flow very well
This guy's guna put up his verse with a lamer essay ***
But his mistaken facts'll only turn up as paper macher
I think it's spelled mache but I could be wrong. Again doesn't hit hard
Im as dope as dope, hes as whack as crack
He been bitch slapped by varyable and all the feedback (votes)
Prolly your best line, but nothing special
MistakenFacts
Your style aint doing nothing like an empty cons~clip
That’s why one shot make you rock like a j-kwon~hit*
Very nice opener, I was feelin this
You don’t wanna battle dawg, I fade~to~the~mental**
Put a gun to you head, pray~to~you~temple***
Could have been worded better but decent
Inject flows that will execute~your~nerve~sys(system)
Stangle you with modem wires, make you reboot~your~service
Also could have been worded better, but creative
No one knows your style; you don’t sit on a throne
Cause just like mathematics a varyable’s the unknown****
Since your probably just as unknown i don't know if this works
This forums for the sick and you don’t even fit you bill
Had you dick up magic Johnson, but you still cant cum ill*****
A lot of people here don't like cum lines, but i liked this
Overall - I think Mistakenfacts definately took this one. VaryAble tried thinking of some creative ideas, but they didn't really work and didn't hit. MistakenFacts had some good punches. I was feelin the first two bars though the rest was pretty average. VaryAble you also gotta work on your structure, it was a bit messed up and didn't read perfectly. Keep at it fellas
Vote - MistakenFacts
good looking out upping for votes 1 - 0
oh and trust me i will be known soon
upiin for vote good battle
uppin 2....
yo how 48 cats seen this and there has only been one vote come on yal
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uppin this shit cmon peeps vote up
y'all cats sleep man how im gonna battle some one as wack as #8 and get votes and cant get any on this bitch
uppin 2
ahah yeah man this is bullshit
fucfken peeps get some votes in and ill return favor
uppin2
Up this fucken thing already
lets go peeps vote up
uppin3
VaryAble
This guy's spittin with mistaking remarks
He's just a confused astronomer.. misplacing the charts
didn't hit too hard, I feel the idea tho
You think your safe from my vocab across tha atlantiq plateau
You couldnt defend my lyrics if u was in St. Michel's organic Castle*
I feel like that was forced, didn't hit too hard
Ima use this bitch like a punchin bag,
Spit with rope-a-dopes**, punch lines.. and lunch-time-jabs
I like the mix, decent punch
This guy's guna put up his verse with a lamer essay ***
But his mistaken facts'll only turn up as paper macher
pretty weak, another forced rhyme
Im as dope as dope, hes as whack as crack
He been bitch slapped by varyable and all the feedback (votes)
that closer was ass, dope and crack are practically the same
Mistaken Facts
Your style aint doing nothing like an empty cons~clip
That’s why one shot make you rock like a j-kwon~hit*
decent opener..not a great punch but a multi
You don’t wanna battle dawg, I fade~to~the~mental**
Put a gun to you head, pray~to~you~temple***
forced multi, weak punch
Inject flows that will execute~your~nerve~sys(system)
Stangle you with modem wires, make you reboot~your~service
lol @ the forced multi, decent punch
No one knows your style; you don’t sit on a throne
Cause just like mathematics a varyable’s the unknown****
decent personal
This forums for the sick and you don’t even fit you bill
Had you dick up magic Johnson, but you still cant cum ill*****
another bad closer
Variable-You didn't think your shit through, most of it was weak and a half decent verse could've beaten it. Your flow was arite, and you had some nice ideas, but you didn't put em all together.
Mistaken facts-Quit back on the forced multi's man, they only weaken your punches. But your punches hit harder, and you had a nice personal.
Vote- MF, once I get 100 posts.
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