You know tha rules:
8-16 lines
No hate or Crew votes
No D/r
I'll have my verse done by tonite or sooner since I gotta work soon, so feel free to spit first.
You know tha rules:
8-16 lines
No hate or Crew votes
No D/r
I'll have my verse done by tonite or sooner since I gotta work soon, so feel free to spit first.
im leavin for a week.. sry yo ill holla when i get back if u stillwanna battle then
yo wait
fuck sorry... aiight ill spit by tonight
second time battlin....
peace
Yo.
This klown "VaryAble" bout to be put on my operating table...strangled wit a jumper cable....and disposed of in a stable.
Now his chances of winning out, seem like a mere fable...since my rhymes are like gold of the periodic table.
Now this kid's verse vs. Black-L..sounded like straight ass but he'd surely disagree....
wit lines like "Watch it Black, I've studied Wizadry" pssh your a disgrace to an "emcee"
I guess I could go easy on you..to a tolerable degree..but once I get goin I'm like a fruit of a poisonous tree.
I'm on my 6th bar...smokin the Devil's cigar..your style's bizzare like the capital of Qatar.
Did I tell yea I was a movie star, but instead of the usual "lights, camera, action", I dealt wit u like "snap, crackle, pop" now wat's left of yea seems like dusty mineral tar.
and tell your mom's I said wat up..she told me all about yea when u was a pup...
Getting made fun of at skool because of your "closeup", resulting in a measuring cup..
milimeter Peter just got ripped from head to toe...yea should've stayed clear instead of becoming a new foe...the fable has come to a close..like the myths of the UFO.
arite, try to get your verse in by tonite.........
You talkin crazy like a bitch from da ice age, trappin..
Being 1 with da mic neva was meant for upstage rappin
This bitch is a never was, VaryAble made that happen
Destroyed this fucken has-been with my mind n my black pen ..
Run you down with my lines, neglectin the fucken traction
AFter im done with ya, ill watch you rot and dissipate
Leave u with nothin but your own death t' anticipate
I punch with nothin but iron fists and vocals
K.O-in Big Ls, spittin with poison mists and chokholds
You fuck with me, your fucken with a hell of a smart lyricist
You want to be 1, but VaryAble and whack emcees hardly ever co-exsist
Thanks for tryin bitch, but you been disqualafied for "lack in taste"
You may now officially be awarded the medal for last place
peace
arite good battle V, let's get some votes in..Don't sleep on this.
no way yo
good battle
i improved a bit since muh last battle so i did aiight
yeah man
LETs get some fuken votes
uppin
uppin2
vote up peeps................ '
Yo LETS GO VOTE THIS SHIT.................
uppin3
This was a very good battle guys, some nioce punches and good flow. I think 1 wid da mic took it with better multes and better punches. I'll vote on this soon as I get to 100.
1 wit da mic
This klown "VaryAble" bout to be put on my operating table...strangled wit a jumper cable....and disposed of in a stable.
Now his chances of winning out, seem like a mere fable...since my rhymes are like gold of the periodic table.
Gold FROM the periodic table? anyways too much multies forced sounds newbies so don't do that 2 much
Now this kid's verse vs. Black-L..sounded like straight ass but he'd surely disagree....
wit lines like "Watch it Black, I've studied Wizadry" pssh your a disgrace to an "emcee"
Hmmm a personal i guess, but it doesn't hit very hard, you quoted str8 from a battle...
I guess I could go easy on you..to a tolerable degree..but once I get goin I'm like a fruit of a poisonous tree.If you say this, you gotta follow up in the next bar, don't just jump to the next topic
I'm on my 6th bar...smokin the Devil's cigar..your style's bizzare like the capital of Qatar.
Is the capital of Qatar bizzare? If so that's a tight bar,. if not... wtf?
Did I tell yea I was a movie star, but instead of the usual "lights, camera, action", I dealt wit u like "snap, crackle, pop" now wat's left of yea seems like dusty mineral tar.How does a movie star relate to eating rice krispies? Enlighten me...please
and tell your mom's I said wat up..she told me all about yea when u was a pup...
Getting made fun of at skool because of your "closeup", resulting in a measuring cup..Uh.... no
milimeter Peter just got ripped from head to toe...yea should've stayed clear instead of becoming a new foe...the fable has come to a close..like the myths of the UFO.UFO's aren't fabled, or no-ones proven they aren't
Varyable
You talkin crazy like a bitch from da ice age, trappin..
Being 1 with da mic neva was meant for upstage rappin
set up was ..... the personal was a personal, so thats good
This bitch is a never was, VaryAble made that happen
Destroyed this fucken has-been with my mind n my black pen ..
punch was blah, but a nice multie in there
Run you down with my lines, neglectin the fucken traction
Is this rhyming with anything
AFter im done with ya, ill watch you rot and dissipate
Leave u with nothin but your own death t' anticipate
Not that greta, okay vocab
I punch with nothin but iron fists and vocals
K.O-in Big Ls, spittin with poison mists and chokholds
vocals and chokeholdss, nice rhyme,set up wasn't good tho
You fuck with me, your fucken with a hell of a smart lyricist
You want to be 1, but VaryAble and whack emcees hardly ever co-exsist
Another well rhymed bar, but you left a shadow of doubt when you said hardly instead of never
Thanks for tryin bitch, but you been disqualafied for "lack in taste"
You may now officially be awarded the medal for last place
[/B]That closer wasn't good[/I]
I'm giving this on to Varyable. You had some nice vocab, okay punches, but i liked your wording and your tendency not to take the easy rhyming words.
Vote :Varyable
Hit this up with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138625
haha, yea gold is a mineral on the periodic table, what'd you get in chemistry?Originally Posted by cameronj86
lol, you look into things too much, that line had nothing to do with rice krispies, Did I tell yea I was a movie star, but instead of the usual "lights, camera, action", I dealt wit u like "snap, crackle, pop" now wat's left of yea seems like dusty mineral tar. figure it out.
haha, more laughter. Last time I checked, UFO's are a myth, and a fable is a myth.
I advise you, to never vote on battles again cuz your a fuckin moron, or put down my verse for that matter seein as you got KO'd.
But w/e, let's get more votes in... ....uppin #2..
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