10 lines
25 min verses
house rules
Kareless
VaryAble
10 lines
25 min verses
house rules
hey.. you ready.. i fell asleep.. if so this is my check in..
I kouldnt kare-less about Kareless
Thas why I never think twice before making his deafeat my success
Ima "car mechaniq" of hip hop.., ive studied the art in this race of dopeness
Step on you like a gaz pedal, leavin u with nothin but an "empty gauge" of hopeness
My punches hurt, like Mike Tyson's fetish for flesh
Im flyin n stinging like Ali, so its best if you flead
Ima use him like target practice, and pump him with lead
Except for my mindz mystical flow acts as the "gun"
This battle's a Swartzaneiger movie, nothin but "Kareless" desecration
Im just a "variable" in this one-sided battle equation,
These kareless thoughts that you've brought, im here to negate em
thinkin' your sick.. ya pride im'a Spoil-it cuz kid it smell like'a Toilet..
bad ass like tom sawyer.. your a Fuckin' Liar similar to'a Lawyer..
sayin' your sick & shit but in reality your just another trick & Bitch..
Scared.. your Qiuck to Piss Like a Baby Bitch, like'a lady Sit & Piss..
Had Red cans & drank every-Bull.. me +1 your Minused no Varyable..
your friend Typed your Verse, Lucky you.. i know you'd Spit Worse..
and you spit First.. Im'a take that shit verse.. flush it & the shit hurts..
Getta handle, Hold it down.. Thats how life and Our Toilet Work..
Your weak like Ghandi.. In no-wind you Still sway Like Palm Tree's..
get beat to Death, beat & Left.. Vary's Pissed.. My verse, He peeped & wept..
.. ahh .. Votes
Originally Posted by VaryAble
^^^
his friend spit?.. fuck it.. thats your verse.. and i clowned you for that shit..
wtf?..
upping for mu fuckin' votes.........vote vote vote...
poll votes....!!!!
Varyable - meh...u attempted wordplay but nothing really worked...i hope this was a drunk verse cuz it sucked...stretched ass lines made the flow invisible....do "quote" shit...elevate man cause that was bad...oh yeah...mike tyson punches are played...
Kareless - damn this wasnt much better...flow was as bad as his...half of it didnt rhyme...only plus u had was multis and maybe a few attempts at a punch...for more complexity in ur verse u win this...but both need to elevate drastically
V/Kareless
poll vote Please... fuckers...!!!! the polls not there for no reason..
i polled
thanks..
upping for votes..........................
varyable
punches were pretty played, ali, tyson, arnold schwatznegger.
structure was bad, so was flow.
no multies,
closer was probs your best punch.
you'll get better as you battle more.
kareless
structure was good, but flow wasn't, it was on and off throughout.
punches were ok, some bad ones,
best punch was probs closer.
the toilet punches are pretty played.
vote-kareless
for better punces.
no hate just a vote.
plz hit up battle in my sig.
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Varyable
your shit sucked...i wasnt feeling any part
of your verse whats so ever...you attempted
wordplay as stated above but you failed.
punches were played , structure was bad.
best part of your verse was probably the end.
you need some work..even if it was
your friend that posted that verse...i've seen your shit before.
Kareless
you obviously have the win..i like that centerd
structure of yours. you had better overall punches
(some were blah) better wordplay better everything.
you need some work as well
V/ Kareless - for obvious reasons.
nah dude when i sed my friend sed that shit... that was cuz he sed some other shit
anywey uppen for votes
nice spit kareless
upping for more poll votes....vote vote vote........
My vote goes to kareless his shit was alright punches were way stronger than wat eva dat other guys name was his ali n tyson calls were alright but still weak so dats y my vote goes to
Kareless
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