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10 Lines
no biting, recycling, or preWrites..
Drop your shit.
Urchin
-KareLess-
rules
10 Lines
no biting, recycling, or preWrites..
Drop your shit.
This thing won't fuckin' work... third try to sign in
huh.. ?..
will you post your vere already.. .. ..
Online there's no need for a mic to step in this arena
I'm certain that I'll beat you worse than Ike beat Tina
Comparing your shit to mine, you're an inferior performer
It's like you're trying to put a go-bot next to a transformer
The only record you'll make is first to suck a million gay cocks
So scared when you face me hands shake like Micheal J. Fox
I'm holding your shit hostage so you can develop Stockholms
I heard you suck dick for bus tickets and then you walk home
You try so hard to be unique, but I'm afraid you're not holmes
Cause your style is antiquated worse than cellular block phones
Nothin' personal... let it rip
Bumping this up. Hopefully you get in by midnight.
you took to long..
i passed out of a 40 ounce.. haha..
I'ma Drop within 10 minutes.. juss woke up..
^^^LOL^^^
im'a cut this Short..
Kid Im'a say Hello you beaten me Hell-no.. Make you Sick From Silence, From a Pillow..
You faker then A Dildo.. stay Mellow.. Or get Bannana clips and make you turn Yellow..
This DOG bites Kid Thats Not Right.. You cant Rap with Jordan, why try to Rob Mic's..
Your fallen.. cant STAND a cure.. KID your Immature look at his Verse.. Juss an Amature..
Throw him inna Ocean.. cant SEA so i Showed-em.. Urchin got Played like Lamar Odom..
you cant Rap Nor R&B.. you got No punches, Except for My arm & me..
wack ass Bitch why'd i battle you.. Gimme another win On Fuckin R.b..
r.b (rabattles).. if you dont know.. now you KNow..
-KareLess-
i was feelin ur flow at tha beginnin but it kinda fell off. nice multi's. punches were OK. nice creativity however some of it i didn't comprehend it to well.tha dots between tha lines makes you structue seem sloppy. but overall not bad man. 6/10
Urchin
you lil message at tha bottom "Nothin' personal" << you basically summed up ur verse bud. that was pretty weak. work on makin sense. tha mike j fox line was so fuckin wack and didn't make sense. your flow was tight. i saw your flow and was like "damn". then i read it and was like "wtf?" elavate a bit man. mainly on your punches. and then you can rip it up. 3/10
v/Kareless
plz return tha favor. links are in sig.
huh.. ?..
will you post your vere already.. .. ..
Micheal J. Fox has parkinsons, so he shakes a lot.
And Stockholms is a syndrome that hostages go through where they develop sympathy and admiration for their captors
Also by Ike and Tina I'm referring to Ike and Tina Turner
wtf?...lmao..
you aint gotta explain that shit....bitch...
get your rap straight...gay kid..
lol @ buddy getting excited cause one person voted for him. And guy didn't even understand what I was writing.
I'm gonna work on my shit and come back and battle someone who people are actually interested in reading from. Peace.
yo i liked urchins juss cuz his shit was pretty funny and kareless just seemed carless with his shit,nothing personal nothing funny nothing to creative so iam giving this one up to urchin
p.s please return the favor
I aint hatin' but LiL-fuse you sound like a DickRyder hahaha..
anyway, you cant poll vote.. so whatever.. can i get some real votes..
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