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    high keystyle ..... kinda bout the goverment

    with all the goverment discresion i wonder will they answer my question if stated***
    if your not in the goverment your to quick to be underated**
    president bush twice? i woulda thought the first time we would a took our own advice****
    and not re-elect this negative intalekt who will efect the worlds change***
    hes gone all deranged with his power claiming hes doing good every hour ****
    acting like the reason for war was the twin tower and not control over oil and petrol***
    this mans a digrace to every kind a human race****
    and its time to face the truth cause he claimed weapons of mass destruction but weres the proof*****
    hes tryna act like the worlds saviour **
    when he should do use all a favour and step down from his throne ****
    hes like an exact clone of his father rather shorter and looks like he broughta cheaper wig***
    just hope he aint do a clinton and start hinton to ladys he likes fuking with a cig***********************



    just a keystyle .... high and bored ..... hollar back with some feed yoll



    oh yeah ill post my links next ..... gotta go find sum aight

    ******************peace********************

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    upping 4 more feedbak yoll ... come on dont sleep

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    Kinda Bout The Government? More Like...The Government Today. Lets Get It Started.

    Realistik : and its time to face the truth
    cause he claimed weapons of mass destruction but weres the proof*****
    hes tryna act like the worlds saviour **
    when he should do use all a favour

    Fix Up Yah Rhyme Scheme, And If You're Going To Seperate Lines Use /'s Iight?

    Realistik : power claiming hes doing good every hour ****
    acting like the reason for war was the twin tower

    Yah Changed It Up Wit A Multi, Not Bad, But PLEEEASE Fix Yah Rhyme Scheme.

    Improve On Fixin Yah Rhyme Scheme And Incorporatin More Wordplay And Usin More Complex Vocabulary, Thanx For Givin Me Words For Thought.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    aight yoll thanx for the feed bak..... like i stated i was hight when i wrote it so yeah........... but ill definitly listen 2 what u said ....
    thanx much apreciated


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=137435

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    uppin 4 more feedbak yoll

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