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yes 10 lines sounds good.
This is Mad Max
I was JUST able to remember my password for this name, so if you could delete my post above i'll be posting under this name for good thanx.
Lets make it 12 lines iight?
Last edited by Stephen Mayfield; July 14th, 2004 at 03:18 AM
no more fag jokes....its out this queer's gay...
And when we gossip...
About being ill.......i never hear-sey....(hearsay/gossip)
..push ya stomach in, cuz my rhymes'll heave ya....
an' when i label you sey-bull..(sable)
........Im not talking about wrestling diva's....
confess ya weaka, my words rip clips through ya armor...
Just watch SM.....
......Get through this alias...like jennifer garner.....
whipped with alarmed hurt.....ya only darin to slay...
An' im not slicin vocal chords..but im tearin up sey...
Had ya chance to win, but its obvious you wouldnt..
Seriously...i'd diss ya more..
....But you signed up under an alias..just so i couldnt....
Now before you deny my claim..follow and breathe...
Because if my words were fists...
.................................You'd be swallowin ya teeth....
dude you dropped like 15lines..
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
Its a format. The split lines.
THIS
Now before you deny my claim..follow and breathe...
Because if my words were fists...
.................................You'd be swallowin ya teeth....
Basically Equals
Now before you deny my claim..follow and breathe...
Because if my words were fists You'd be swallowin ya teeth.....
Its just this certain way the battlers wants thier verses to be read. Its consideared 2 lines even if it appears to be 3.
aight my bad...
can someone delete these posts... im droppin in like 10 jus started writing
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
Omg! Another 'Sey' nameplay... ima throw up.
You aint winning coz the deals-escaped the rebel-ious..
& just watch me destroy fields like real-estate developers..
like the steel-gates of hell bruh, the end-im starting with it..
ya verse wouldnt be Fine..if it was wrote on a parking ticket..
im parting the pickett as i devour your leg-ends like steak..
kid fuck ya realness coz we know most legends are fake..*
move the settins to break, now the days steadly diminished..
...come on its july... so we know may's already finished..
& segregate this dim bitch.. you evade.. n this guy's sonned..
jus realise you dont sparkle enough to ever be made a diamond..*
*he was in a crew called 'Legendary'.
*he wants in the crew 'Diamond Minds'.
Last edited by Seyance; July 23rd, 2004 at 05:13 PM
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
no more fag jokes....its out this queer's gay...
And when we gossip...
About being ill.......i never hear-sey....(hearsay/gossip)
Lol. Is probably played on his home site but since this is like his second battle its still funny nameplay.
..push ya stomach in, cuz my rhymes'll heave ya....
an' when i label you sey-bull..(sable)
........Im not talking about wrestling diva's....
Nope. Nameplay was kind of ehhh
confess ya weaka, my words rip clips through ya armor...
Just watch SM.....
......Get through this alias...like jennifer garner.....
Lol. I liked it. But he isn't an alias.
whipped with alarmed hurt.....ya only darin to slay...
An' im not slicin vocal chords..but im tearin up sey...
Ehhh. Decent nameplay again. Starting to get monotonous.
Had ya chance to win, but its obvious you wouldnt..
Seriously...i'd diss ya more..
....But you signed up under an alias..just so i couldnt....
Eh...This isn't an alias as far as I know. But its ok I guesse.
Now before you deny my claim..follow and breathe...
Because if my words were fists...
.................................You'd be swallowin ya teeth....
Eh. Teeth lines are so-so.
SM: you seized the oppurtunity to use nameplay since hes new on the site and the name play was decent. Alias line was coo. Other alias line was ok. So I liked your verse, the nameplay was entertaining. I don't like 3 line punches but you still flowed decent. So nice verse.
You aint winning coz the deals-escaped the rebel-ious..
& just watch me destroy fields like real-estate developers..
Lol at this nameplay match. Liked the line.
like the steel-gates of hell bruh, , the end-im starting with it..
ya verse wouldnt be Fine..even if wrote on a parking ticket..
Decent concept but for some reason I wasn't feeling the execution of it. Also a lil bit played.
im parting the pickett as i devour your leg-ends like steak..
kid fuck ya realness coz we know most legends are fake..*
Nope. I didn't like it at all.
move the settins to break, now the days steadly diminished..
...come on its july... so we know may's already finished..
Lol. Again I liked the name play alot.
& segregate this dim bitch.. you evade.. this guy's sonned..
jus realise you dont sparkle enough to ever be made a diamond..*
Ehh....I didn't like this line very much.
Sey: You came with some nice nameplay but some of your lines could have been executed a little bit better. Your concepts werent bad but I felt that Sm edged this battle.
Vote/Sm
Still a nice battle guys.
Seyance, that bolding shit. Dont ever do that again. Trying way to hard to make the voter's notice the wordplay. We understand it. I think you both tried WAY too hard to make eachother's name look bad. Try other way's to hit your opponent. Would of been a better read, but I think Stephen took this because his was better worded & made a bigger impact on Seyance than vice versa. Decent battle though.
Vote-Mad.
im not excepting quill's vote coz shes some alias..bla blah, biter person.. n will be banned soon.
I only bolded some stuff because ive seen some votes in other battles that are hella gay.. where people dont notice wordplay.
vote up.
Last edited by Seyance; July 18th, 2004 at 12:04 PM
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
I don't want to go find it. I've seen something like that before. Alias line was witty.
Blah.. herb
Last edited by Seyance; July 18th, 2004 at 12:04 PM
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
Aight this was really close. Sey had better punches though. Hmm, I liked the name-play from both MCs. Althought Sey's punches were more witty, I liked the "parking ticket" line too. This was a good battle, really close, but Sey takes it for better punches...
V/Sey
Last edited by Escar; July 17th, 2004 at 03:36 AM
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