Choices

[Endeva.]

A Cranial impulse deciphers the code
The result is a choice, “will I take that road?”
It’s our voice, the mode that we use to decide
Should I, Shouldn’t I… yes, & then its applied
& you ride the route that suits your needs
Whether right or wrong… that’s how we lead
Indeed, not all decisions we’re living are right
But god willing, most we apply will delight…
…& won’t ignite, light up, maybe cause a fight
But the plight of the planet, proves this to be a fallacy
Cos there’s murderers, rapists all causing a travesty
With the audacity to commit callus crimes
Even tho they know its wrong in their minds
This defines the times, when people choose this
& dismiss morals for the sake of sick kicks…
…& sadistic tricks, but those are the minority
A mix of controversy, going against the authority
But for the majority if us its harmless mistakes…
…Put in our path, & the wrong road we take
Cos we all make errors, never say that we don’t
You can’t always be correct, why? Cos you won’t
Cos we’re prone to falls & hitting brick walls…
…from bad calls, you see, everyone stalls
Enthralled by the present, captivated by youth
But most of us choose to live & use the truth




http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136773
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...409post1534409

[Jug.]

this was dope. this was a
beastly topical again by dev.
i liked the topic, and the error
line was dope
as well as the delight line.
flow was good here. you made
a lotta nice points. structure
was fine. hella good vocab man
good job.

[Chris Black]

Good concept. Never seen it before. The opening few lines were ill. The wording was just dope. The flow throughout the piece was nice and smooth. This was and easy and enjoyable read. Keep up the good work, homie.

-W1

[Tactixx]

I liked this piece.....it flowed really well.....the concept was nice too...pretty creative..structure was good....it was an interesting read with some nice multis and perspective....Nice piece man....Keep it up......

[Endeva.]

thnx people... damn, whats wrong with OM today... 3 replies in 20 minutes... whats the occasion?...lmao
...hmm,,, its not my birthday... lets see, what can it be?

[Endeva.]

ah thats more like it, no feedback....

[Poetik Thug]

I was feelin the whole thing good shit keeps us reading!!!!!

[Endeva.]

^^thnx for that huge post... must have took you ages to write all that...

[Cuthroat]

this was really nice u had great vocab and kept on topic. This was a really great deep piece. Keep it up.

[Emerge]

Hi Dev I liked most of this. You know I don't ride and shit im always honest. All the way up to "fallacy" line was just dope. Everything else was just ok. I have read much better from you back in the day. Not bad but then again much more room for you to have murdered this as well. Oh and I noticed your pieces are starting to have the same scheme, well not the same but very reminicant of each other.

Like:

xxxxaxxxxb
xaxxbxxxxb

Experiment a bit more with different styles.

Hit me back up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...48#post1535848

[Endeva.]

thnx oh wise one...lol

[Endeva.]

any more, before this fades into the pages

[Akwai Tance]

Your message was the strongest part of the whole thing..
That is what caught my attention at best. You coulda executed
it a lil better but you seemed you jus wanted to fire summit out
..like just what you was feeling at the time. I was enjoying the
beginning coz you did a simplified verse yet it was kinda complex
due to the rising of vocab'. But then it seemed to fade..
which was disapointing as you had a really good start..
Anyways nice piece overall.. you kept it simple & kept me reading.
Props

Make sure you hit this up plz-
Feedbk is lack luster..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=137048

[Endeva.]

^^hit it.. thnx man... upp