If i could vote i would pick STUBBY.
Phoenix some of your lines were g@y junk
stubby
Tha Phoenix
If i could vote i would pick STUBBY.
Phoenix some of your lines were g@y junk
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Fell the wrath of da pain of Mc_PT and there iz no other name!!!!
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pretty much a one sided battle here.... phoenix, i didnt like the way you did your verses, with the numbering... should have just set it out normally... thought you had a couple of played punches in there and not very strong ones at that.. id keep working on it... get more original punches going...
stubby... yeah thought your verse was better... the opener was a bit weak... i thought your second bar was stronger, the paraplegic line needed worded differently.... the stagedy punch, seemed a bit wierdly worded... your closer was ok, saw what you were saying, but it didnt hit very hard....
''' all in all stubby gets this, his punches connected more and that 'callout line' took it for me...
....v/stubby
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damn it seems like everyone liked that line about the callout lol, yeah i agree that was a pretty good line lol, anyways uppin 3 on this
Ayo, the callout line
ways the one dat made you win
if in other battles you have them callouts
it will be KO
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Fell the wrath of da pain of Mc_PT and there iz no other name!!!!
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Vote - STUBBY...
first off pheonix your structure = WACK!....odnt use it ever again....and actually use sum meta's....use personals....blah elevate on everything cuz, dog, that was horrible....STUBBY u came alright.....u had maybe 2 decent punches...nothin too special but u easily killed him....keep elevatin....ur almost there....
wasnt a great battle..
stubby-lines were alright, not reallyand decent punches or personals, some were okbut nothin real hard, flow was decent and so was your structure, work on better punches next time that hit hard.
phoenix - ok now you need to elevate man, your verse was pretty poor, not really and good punches or personals at all, just alot of played and weak lines, flow wasnt bad and structure was pretty good, just work on hard hittin personals and punches and use wordplay and be creative.
v/ stubby
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