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Thread: Undisputed Championship: $pitacular (3-0) vs. God (2-1)

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    Undisputed Championship: $pitacular (3-0) vs. God (2-1)

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    shit's getting heavy, Time to unload……
    Lay God flat on the pavement
    ………………..and get this show on the road
    Hold his own? I doubt even his Bladder could manage
    Holy shit
    He's on a roll...… while I'm eating a God sandwitch
    get the cameras… here's the shot of his life
    kid's ground breaking
    comes fat as fuck, & he's skatin on thin ice….
    I been nice… now I'm bein mean, they tell me
    Laughter's the best medicine
    ……………and you got me feelin hella healthy
    I'd use a sdizzle punch on you, but that's sad….
    Besides
    we all know God's the real deal on RB, like Av….
    Got the kid reelin….. Fallin down & squealin
    Touch him?
    I'ma stick my fist up his ass, I got a gut feelin….
    Proceeded to school God, damn I'm a genious
    No luck needed
    fuck knockin on wood, I'll just punch him in his penis

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    Aight, check it...
    Damn, this fag done shown the world many ways of bein' rich
    He wasn't good at what he did, he just became Smoka's bitch!
    Holy shit! $pit just be bringin' those rhymes we all love to hate
    And if I wanna catch wack flowin' in water, this guy's the bait
    Damn straight $hitacular's played, and u can quote me on that
    Although that's his profession, but nobody here's feelin' his raps
    Token inducted u in the crew? I guess even mods make mistakes
    $pit's been headin' down dead-end road all his life w/out the brakes
    Shivers & shakes! He's a Ghostbuster? Well every kid has a fantasy
    Neglected his whole entire life, so this Casper's a little too friendly
    This fools a certified vet? For that, all at Rapbattles would scoff
    You had your shot at fame in the LLL, but your aiming was off
    Royce wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
    And RB ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
    Later

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    Good battle, $pitacular.

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    Wow...this was better than I expected...not bad at all from both..

    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular
    shit's getting heavy, Time to unload……
    Lay God flat on the pavement
    ………………..and get this show on the road
    Decent...better metaphor than it was punch...5/10
    Hold his own? I doubt even his Bladder could manage
    Holy shit
    He's on a roll...… while I'm eating a God sandwitch
    Ok....nothing much here...4/10
    get the cameras… here's the shot of his life
    kid's ground breaking
    comes fat as fuck, & he's skatin on thin ice….
    Better...good metaphor and decent punch...5/10
    I been nice… now I'm bein mean, they tell me
    Laughter's the best medicine
    ……………and you got me feelin hella healthy
    Heh...best line you have so far...8/10
    I'd use a sdizzle punch on you, but that's sad….
    Besides
    we all know God's the real deal on RB, like Av….
    Not really feelin this one....3/10
    Got the kid reelin….. Fallin down & squealin
    Touch him?
    I'ma stick my fist up his ass, I got a gut feelin….
    Good metaphor...decent punch...5/10
    Proceeded to school God, damn I'm a genious
    No luck needed
    fuck knockin on wood, I'll just punch him in his penis
    Sex line = gay...you should know better $pit...=/...3/10
    $pitacular's Verse: 33/70
    Notes:
    You had mostly good metaphors....but when you need work on putting them into better use for a punch...most of them were good...but some of yours seemed completely careless...(the closer and a few others)...overall not bad though...


    Quote Originally Posted by God
    Damn, this fag done shown the world many ways of bein' rich
    He wasn't good at what he did, he just became Smoka's bitch!
    ...Decent...nothing hard...4/10
    Holy shit! $pit just be bringin' those rhymes we all love to hate
    And if I wanna catch wack flowin' in water, this guy's the bait
    Better...nice concept flip...and good punch...6/10
    Damn straight $hitacular's played, and u can quote me on that
    Although that's his profession, but nobody here's feelin' his raps
    Not really much of a punch...but ok...3/10
    Token inducted u in the crew? I guess even mods make mistakes
    $pit's been headin' down dead-end road all his life w/out the brakes
    Decent once again...ok punch....5/10
    Shivers & shakes! He's a Ghostbuster? Well every kid has a fantasy
    Neglected his whole entire life, so this Casper's a little too friendly
    Heh...pretty nice...best line you have so far...7/10
    This fools a certified vet? For that, all at Rapbattles would scoff
    You had your shot at fame in the LLL, but your aiming was off
    Good punch...ok personal..nothing hard...4/10
    Royce wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
    And RB ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
    Better closing....above average....6/10
    God's Verse: 35/70
    Notes:
    You came with a bunch of pretty average punches....which..in the end helped you out I suppose....you had one good one like $pit did...the rest was ok....good job to you also...


    Overall:
    If $pit wasnt careless for those 3/10 lines...he wouldve taken this battle by about 6 points above God at least...but due to that...and God being more consistent..and personal....God takes this match for more punches....and consistency...


    Vote - God

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    lol. i think you missed the 2nd bar. God on a roll = a God sandwich....

    i won't vote cuz we are crew (although nobody seems to care about that?), but good battle to both.
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    Quote Originally Posted by God
    Shivers & shakes! He's a Ghostbuster? Well every kid has a fantasy
    Neglected his whole entire life, so this Casper's a little too friendly
    ^ That was the line that got you the battle.. it was real close, props to Spit...

    But i thought god came abit better with punches.

    v/God

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    Quote Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
    Wow...this was better than I expected...not bad at all from both..



    $pitacular's Verse: 33/70
    Notes:
    You had mostly good metaphors....but when you need work on putting them into better use for a punch...most of them were good...but some of yours seemed completely careless...(the closer and a few others)...overall not bad though...




    God's Verse: 35/70
    Notes:
    You came with a bunch of pretty average punches....which..in the end helped you out I suppose....you had one good one like $pit did...the rest was ok....good job to you also...


    Overall:
    If $pit wasnt careless for those 3/10 lines...he wouldve taken this battle by about 6 points above God at least...but due to that...and God being more consistent..and personal....God takes this match for more punches....and consistency...


    Vote - God
    LOL this is sad Smoka, truly....

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    I didn't expect $pit to drop somethin' like that. Damn, anyway, God had better punches, which got him the battle. $pit fell off in this battle a bit, anyhoo...

    V/God

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    Yeah surprizingly, God got this.

    He had punches and that casper line was ill.

    Good job to both. It was close.

    V/.god

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    Thanks for the votes. Good battle, $pitacular.

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    congrats fucker

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    Ummm... Thanks, I think.

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