U still didnt understand...since u must thought i did a hate vote...i dont know..but i did not drop a link in here for no reason..please up my battle...its majorly slept on...i just thought both were a tie...but he came a lil bit harder.
U still didnt understand...since u must thought i did a hate vote...i dont know..but i did not drop a link in here for no reason..please up my battle...its majorly slept on...i just thought both were a tie...but he came a lil bit harder.
How the fuck are these voters voting based on vocabulary?
Seriously, in a text battle, you can't give vocab. like 80%!
Punches > Everything.
Anyhoo, it's aight, really, I've just been noticin' that everyone mentions vocab. 1st when it's the least important thing in a battle.
Uppin' #2
Scriptious - Your structure was a little hard to follow but it remained consistent. Your flow was terrible because it had no rhythem. You had no personals which brought your verse down overall. Your punches were extremely soft because they lacked creativity and wit.
iLL Kahn - Your structure was good because your lines remained fairly even throughout your whole verse. Your flow was nice and stayed consistent which is good. Your personals were ok but could of been a little better I think. Your punches were kind of off and on but they served their purpose.
Vote - iLL Kahn
Can't vote on it, but uppin battle for these guys
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ill won this battle cuz i liked his punches more and his creativity when he wrote his lyrics down. Better verse with constant good flow and punches together and nice word play. The other verse in my opinion wasn't dat on top and was lacking timthem which messed your battle up.
GOOD BATTLE
Scriptious- overall i really liked your verse man your vocab was great, and your strucutrea was built awesomw.. i think that you had some really good punches and personals in there man, and i liked the way your flo was goin it was really easy to follow along with it, overall pretty goo verse man
Ill-Overall i really liked your verse also, this is one of the better ones from you, i liked your structure alot man, and your punches and pesonals were awesome they hit him pretty good man, i agree with the others that scriptious did beat you on vocab..but i think that you beat him on punches and personals and to me thats more important
V/Ill Kahn
Ummm...
Scriptious: You had an okay verse. Flow was more or less good, structure was all over the place, but I liked your personals the most. They were witty and strong. All around your verse was just decent. Definitely not the best I've seen from you. Keep elevatin'.
Escar: You had an okay verse as well, but it wasn't as clever. You had some pretty decent personals, and a few more woulda handed oyu the battle. But the rest of he verse was filler or not effective punches. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Scriptious
Uppin' #3
It's 3-2, so c'mon, let's get more votes.
Your lowered kid, like poor swarming toilets, but over hits..
..cause ive left your jaw opening..
..where im taking the piss
^...... pissing in his mouth..ok..
Its like ive smudged your make up, making congealed marks..
..as your features blushed in red..
..cause ive concealed yah
^ ok wordplay but was that supposed to ryhme?...
Kahns left ill, where I insert this sick note to contaminate him..
..now your like ill patients failing..
..as your containing ailing
^ um yea no........ never make a punch like this ever again..
Im your superior, so Kahn, how will your worthless ways excel..
..cause your only standing out..
..with bruising at levels
^...again with the ryhme thing....
Your continuation is now finished, cause of your bad landings..
..now nobody feels yah presence..
..like an invisible man standing
^ ok been done overall not a bad verse ..decent at best..
We got wack fucks on RB callin' people out like they're tough
And you too? Great! Now one Elevation Forum ain't enough!
^..... meh ok not bad ...decent opener..
Your loss'll just be another.............. one of my creations
Never heard of ya, oblivion best describes your reputation!
^ ooo i liked that one... good used of vocab..
Dickriding's a talent with this kid, but what's even worse
Is that he doesnt do it for votes, just for peeps to read his verse!
^.... um......... no ......sorry........never again with this concept..
He sucks, won't expect shit from him, except that he'll keep sucking
Checked ur profile, u got somethin in common with it, coz ur nothing!
^ been done but its something to do....
Comin' thru ur way, coz ya death's just headin to your edge
CT's bullshit, coz after this, you won't be new to whorage!
^...................um no..............sorry
ok
punches - script
Peronals- Ill
structure-Ill
rhyme scheme - Ill
^ so the winner is ill.. scriptous you came nice with the punches but they didn't rhyme at times and that really ruined the moment for me on some of them .. if you would of rhymed you prolly would of taken it becuase you had good wordplay and smart punches.... mayb3 nextime..pz.
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
Uppin' #4...
scriptious...not bad...strucutre was ok...i lost the flow when the second bar didnt rhyme...punches hit pretty good...but you wasnt personal enough..in battles you need personals..personals wins battles..cause your punches were directed to anybody..
ill kahn...strucutre and flow was on point..you was more personal..so your punches hit harder...wordplay could have been better
overall..scriptious you did 2 things wrong..one you wasnt personal enough..and you messed up on the second bar it messed up the flow...i have to give this to ill kahn
his punches hit harder props to both..this was a close battle..
v/ill
harder punches...
Uppin' #5...
C'mon, last vote, I'll return the favor.
scriptious
Your lowered kid, like poor swarming toilets, but over hits..
..cause ive left your jaw opening..
..where im taking the piss
7/10...good opener
Its like ive smudged your make up, making congealed marks..
..as your features blushed in red..
..cause ive concealed yah
6/10...ehhh
Kahns left ill, where I insert this sick note to contaminate him..
..now your like ill patients failing..
..as your containing ailing
6.5/10...ok
Im your superior, so Kahn, how will your worthless ways excel..
..cause your only standing out..
..with bruising at levels
6/10...damn, all u care about is complexity
Your continuation is now finished, cause of your bad landings..
..now nobody feels yah presence..
..like an invisible man standing
7/10...good closer
overall - 6.5.....ehh, u lack punches, seriously
ill kahn
We got wack fucks on RB callin' people out like they're tough
And you too? Great! Now one Elevation Forum ain't enough!
7/10...good opener
Your loss'll just be another.............. one of my creations
Never heard of ya, oblivion best describes your reputation!
6/10...how does oblivion, make this punch connect
Dickriding's a talent with this kid, but what's even worse
Is that he doesnt do it for votes, just for peeps to read his verse!
7.5/10...good shit
He sucks, won't expect shit from him, except that he'll keep sucking
Checked ur profile, u got somethin in common with it, coz ur nothing!
7/10...good personal
Comin' thru ur way, coz ya death's just headin to your edge
CT's bullshit, coz after this, you won't be new to whorage!
6/10...lol, ur gettin repetitive wit this whorage shit
overall - 6.7....nice verse, consistent punches
v/kahn.....now can you guys return the favor like u said u would....link in sig.
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