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^Read & Good Luck...
Rules.
^Read & Good Luck...
Last edited by SmokaJoka; June 23rd, 2004 at 10:14 AM
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Breth again? *sigh* I was hopin for a challenge...
check. 20 lines.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134086
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134087
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134085
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134077
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1502177
Last edited by $pitacular; June 26th, 2004 at 07:32 PM
haha bitch... 20 fucking lines???
I like the taking charge attitude, must be the risidual effect of you always being under my thumb... bitch
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
^^Ban him, he just recycled from our last match, check it yourself.... LOL
punch me? gotta be kidding, Breth ain't built for violence
little weakling...
kid sprained both his wrists just tryin to break the silence
leave this bitch crippled, somewhat similiar to poverty
poor Breth...
to bad about the bum knee, & the rest his broke body
kid's undisputed like the Redsox, got his fans cryin
here comes the win
Breth's slidin into home...... lockin the door & hidin
I ain't even tryin, I'm really just pokin fun
no need to beat a dead horse
...........but that didn't stop Breth from strokin one
focus son... always poppin off, never droppin bombs
I just kick back...
cuz Breth serves little punches, like soccer moms
Breth's pissy he can't rip me, so he gets all mad
I'm Glad...
he always comes with that Hefty style, garbage bags....
leave Breth high strung, from a noose.... yet I'm finding
there's alot to pity
must suck when you're fit to be hung.... and you're tiny
tone down the intellect of my words, so he'll get em
crazy Breth...
flies by the seat of his pants, since he shit em
Breth keeps his chin up... even while his knees buckle
fucka son....
I'll nephew his ass, just to be a monkey's uncle
chump'll suffer, thinking he'll beat me? please, never....
Breth's diggin himself a whole
....................but this will be his last ditch effort
Smoka... gimme a little extension, I just got home and I have to drop an LLL verse also... and 20 lines is a fucking lot, so i'll do this right after
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
I reckon you won... Brethren is just stepping for fun...
But I don't have to drop anything... cuz Spit is second to none
I'm wrecking this dunce... really Spit, ya more retarded
You're ahead of ya time... cuz this finished before it started
Torrent garbage... and Brethren is ripping ya kinship
You're wack now... and weren't even good to begin with
Get ya skin ripped... while I laugh at you tryin to be hard
Then I drop the yellow flag... and then pull Spit's green card
You peep these bars... and you all will learn your visions
Spit was crossing the border... till I went and burned his bridges
These words is vicious... I am just spitting with a hot blend
Just like old times... cuz you still don't make top ten
Not then... or now...ya drop....we don't acknowledge that
You ain't a real rapper... ya nose grows as you take a polygraph
I'm honest man... and ya drop... geez... it did not go well
How'd you get the internet from ya computer at Taco Bell?
I spot some hell from him... and be sure to find him a seat
Spit's a gift from heaven? I'mma be sure to find the receipt
Quit tryna beef... people trust me... they take Brethren's bet
You've been here for years and still not a veteran yet
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
As promised here is the actual break down...
punch me? gotta be kidding, Breth ain't built for violence
little weakling...
kid sprained both his wrists just tryin to break the silence
This was a sweet opener as I already said liked the wordplay and the concept...8out of 10
leave this bitch crippled, somewhat similiar to poverty
poor Breth...
to bad about the bum knee, & the rest his broke body
here is where I found the wordplay kind of forced,broken body Spit...5 out of 10
kid's undisputed like the Redsox, got his fans cryin
here comes the win
Breth's slidin into home...... lockin the door & hidin
good one here...7 out of 10
I ain't even tryin, I'm really just pokin fun
no need to beat a dead horse
...........but that didn't stop Breth from strokin one
ouch...7 out of 10
focus son... always poppin off, never droppin bombs
I just kick back...
cuz Breth serves little punches, like soccer moms
Now dear Spit I thought about this one and even discussed it with KayOhh...I found it cheesy,sue me!5 out of 10
Breth's pissy he can't rip me, so he gets all mad
I'm Glad...
he always comes with that Hefty style, garbage bags....
the setup to the punch didnt connect here...him being pissed off and mad and you being glad has nothing to do with garbage...5 out of 10
leave Breth high strung, from a noose.... yet I'm finding
there's alot to pity
must suck when you're fit to be hung.... and you're tiny
youre on the border of rhyme here....decent punch 6 out of 10
tone down the intellect of my words, so he'll get em
crazy Breth...
flies by the seat of his pants, since he shit em
another setup not connected Spit...I sorta liked the punch though 5,5 out of 10
Breth keeps his chin up... even while his knees buckle
fucka son....
I'll nephew his ass, just to be a monkey's uncle
par 6 out of 10
chump'll suffer, thinking he'll beat me? please, never....
Breth's diggin himself a whole
....................but this will be his last ditch effort
I liked this closer...good wordplay nice punch,bravo Spit 8 out of 10
I reckon you won... Brethren is just stepping for fun...
But I don't have to drop anything... cuz Spit is second to none
Breth I didnt really like this as an opener I mean its decent not really hard hitting or witty to me...6 out of 10
I'm wrecking this dunce... really Spit, ya more retarded
You're ahead of ya time... cuz this finished before it started
I believe I have seen this before...nice try on a flip but it didnt go that far 6 out of 10
Torrent garbage... and Brethren is ripping ya kinship
You're wack now... and weren't even good to begin with
this in my eyes is another concept that really isnt that original..5,5 out of 10
Get ya skin ripped... while I laugh at you tryin to be hard
Then I drop the yellow flag... and then pull Spit's green card
Damn I wish I came up with a bunch of these lines last week!This one had me rolling!Witty as fuck...8 out of 10
You peep these bars... and you all will learn your visions
Spit was crossing the border... till I went and burned his bridges
Another nice one 8 out of 10
These words is vicious... I am just spitting with a hot blend
Just like old times... cuz you still don't make top ten
if only you had kept it up with lines like the previous...this one is pretty much par Breth 6 out of 10
Not then... or now...ya drop....we don't acknowledge that
You ain't a real rapper... ya nose grows as you take a polygraph
Ok concept...worded in the worst way though..5,5 put of 10
I'm honest man... and ya drop... geez... it did not go well
How'd you get the internet from ya computer at Taco Bell?
This could of been like the green card and bridges lines but you lacked a connecting setup...dammit!5,5 out of 10
I spot some hell from him... and be sure to find him a seat
Spit's a gift from heaven? I'mma be sure to find the receipt
Another one that had me rolling...you get a 7 out of 10
Quit tryna beef... people trust me... they take Brethren's bet
You've been here for years and still not a veteran yet
Could of found something better to close your verse with....6 out of 10
If I remeber math right
Spit 60,5 out of 100
Breth 58,5 out of 100
As I had said I liked you LLL verses much better...
Now,I took my time and broke this down please dont waste yours saying Im an idiot or complaining...this is how I interpreted your verses period.Nice battle best of the week by far.
Vote Spitacular
Last edited by Kaput Mundi; June 27th, 2004 at 06:00 AM
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Really close battle. Both came dope. Breth had really good punches & personals. So did Spit. But, Spit's punches hit a little harder.
Props to both of you.
V/Spit
Last edited by iLL Kahn; June 26th, 2004 at 11:29 AM
Break it down like points....
each line out of 10 and add it up
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
^^You said that in the other thread.
Fine I'll start doing that.
idiot..... the soccer moms line is fuckin dope stupid, think about itOriginally Posted by kapitolins
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Swaying... minus 3 votes...
oh whaddya know
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
$pitacular wins the Undisputed Title, Congratulations...closed.
$pitacular (3-0)
Brethren (2-1)
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