Artistic Reflections (elevated thread)

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In this cypher you will give the image a voice, tell us what you see...
Only elevated drops will remain posted, this is for the serious writers...
So come kick back & lounge a bit, to get a good feeling for the peice...


A new image will be put up after a decent number of posts on the old



Happy Elevation

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6/21/04 Image 2 (Homage to dali)

[Born To Kill]

Salvador loved the acid, but it ate away his brain...
S'why all of his work represents a world gone insane.
I may just be guessing, but I've tripped many times...
And I know for damn sure, it shows up in my rhymes.
I mean, look at that featureless dude, fire consumed...
Pointing to the heavens, where a cracked egg looms.
Mr. Matrix on the right, and a horse with long legs...
In a heated desert, taking up my computer's megs.
That may sound contrite, but I don't really dig the work...
Then again, aren't all critics of art, just big fuckin jerks?

Hey thanks for kicking this off, and thanks for your contributions to this forum, much appreciated...
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[((.D.O.C.))]

thank u for the new pic bounce 4 some reason i dont like it in the poetic section, anywayz..............
When I looked at this the first thing that came 2 mind was god
Laying a final blow on the satan. Thus ending everything.to start anew.


God took 6 days to make the world and then he laid at rest
But it took only 15 minutes to beat the devil at his best
It took place in a deserted region near the west
They fought like mad men the devil was literally possessed
The lord asked 4 hades to banish himself “that’s all that I request”
But satan’s answer was a burn onto the mighty’s chest
As Jehovah started to-protest….
he realized they were no rules to be transgressed….
The battle then took only a milli sec, no longer progressed
Jehovah had the anger of many men and let off all the madness that had been suppressed
He then turned 2 three bodies…….. a gigantic horse, a meteor and some rocks…..which isn’t really fair
………but when used against the devil………who the fuck cares?


anywyaz...

Nice drop, thanks for taking the time, next time you might want to improve the structure some, it's hard on the eye's...
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[Animated Honor]

smoldering in his own hate, proped up by a sandy slate
of tracable, laughable greats, with a whim of a rape,
his dreams squashed like a grape, with shards still intact
only held by his family tree, misfacts of exibit straps
only lettin him go so far, starz cryed,crumbled for the pressure
he held, melted into an egg, ready to crack under the betters
a stallion of measures gripped, and rapped a melody of slacks
only to pull his collar by the neck lettin him choke blood from his back
and so they cried, and cried for their son, belonging to them
only they could bring about the long songs of their sun.

It's nice to see members post in here, it really is a good lesson in elevation. Let's keep them dropping, I expect to see everyone who post in here, do so in the next image thread. Thanks for yoru contributions.
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[Miss Behaving]

I LOVE this picture...

The symbolism is extremely abstract and refined
showing the inner complexity of a genius' mind
The flames on the gentlemans back, all comsuming
represent the lose of individuality, social grooming.
The empty shell of a man depicts the hollow
which we all feel inside ourself and still we follow.
The horse, elivated by scrawny legs, those of high status,
pretend to offer support, and yet they hate us.
The sun replaced by an egg represents some great change
although to the untrained eye, may seem quite strange,
the cracks show that the future for which we strive
is already damaged and broken, all so contrived,
for if the cruched man can see the awful truth
why does he strive for a dream, all too aloof?

I could have carried on, but I have to revise for my exam...

I'm gald you liked it, hope to see you in the next one. Very nice drop here, please keep them dropping. Thanks for taking the time.
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[FanTa ZeE]

Without the golden beads of sunlight, Humanity still burns,
From the pain and blood and anguish, each race always returns,
Fight each other for the glory, none of us seem to learn,
Or take into account, that we are all keepers of one world.
Its not the Gods that smite us for the decency we lack,
Its taken for face value, that someones out to stab you in the back,
I guess the moral of the story, things aren't always what they seem,
And all these are represented, by broken shards of one mans dream.
The hollow soul of the human mind no care and no compassion,
Represented by the dotted line we hate enemies with a passion,
Space for kindness taken up by material things and fashion,
We judge by outside covers, inside beauty no longer matters.


Thank you, I appreciate the effort on your part (editing the verse). nice drop, keep them coming.
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[MistakenFacts]

ive been cast off my horse, the invisible beast coming
ive been thrown to the ground, so there no time for running
plus i'm burn up, i think thats hells laugh
cause on earth i was a demon, armed with the devils staff
and the sun cracking, scientist couldnt mend
but then again, am i tripping or is this really the end
am i on my own, or is my mind really a friend
if i cant stand up for heaven how will i desend
i need a godsend, to quench my thirst from the slaughter
but im a demon, and all he can offer me is holy water
now i see hell coming and i cant breath no more
i wanted to run, but only if it could get up from this floor

will be on the look out for the next
http://www.geocities.com/shadwmasta/china.jpg

[Urchin]

Salvador was a pioneer, for real, but who really cares what paintings reveal?
Someone might say it's the inside of a gifted mind, but they lie cause it's just an arrangement colours and lines
The line between expression and repression is undoubtedly thin
In the end it's all about -you- and -your- life, outside or in
We all have demons and we all don't wanna face 'em alone
But what makes your thoughts so important that it needs to be shown?
Art for the most part is masturbatory waste
Narcissistic fakers who glorify their taste
So when it comes to understanding art, don't try to deconstruct
Cause if what -you- see in this world ain't enough then you're already fucked.

I edited it because I mistook the topic to just be 'artistic reflections', rather than reflections on that one peice.


That's cool dawg, thanks for the effort, I really appreciate it. Another good drop, I like this thread, I hope you guy's are too.

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[bornspokenword]

I am not a man, but a surreal wittness to actions assumed
my passions consume...with appalling apparel, appealing yet giftless
no eclipse today..for the moon consumes all with a close divinity
and a holy watch engulfed in flame passes blame
the masses aim through representation, misery is complacent...as
she storms the green landscape scene with recycled seas on her back...
only to be...upstaged, taken aback...by a...wispy tale
"I am not a man, but my payload carries what my worth entails...as I..."
As I look apon this scene it seems...seemingly real but I am not a man...I'm not even real...
and as you precipitate lame jestures to escalate on exhale...I lie in wait
...like the stone, firm yet frail waiting to be thrown in offense...
"trident," the ground consumes...with 3rd tip bent in blame...darkness ensues

sorry about the structure, that was some 'freely associated' association...