10-12 lines
no hate
no d/r
no crew
i set it
you spit first
30 minutes to drop
after check in
so check in now
and good luck
Skillz Position
B.X.P
10-12 lines
no hate
no d/r
no crew
i set it
you spit first
30 minutes to drop
after check in
so check in now
and good luck
check......
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" in 2001 i was playin my playstation, all i herd was five shots...
im face down on my floor with my heart pacin'.....
all i could think about was hidin my guns and my drugs in the basement....
it was either that or the state pen...." Game
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you have 30 minutes...............................
you a mark nigga/ get shot on ya own block nigga/ get your shit stripped up like tigger nigga...
i got a bat that will launch your ass from here to miami/ got a .9 that will do harm to you and your family/ i can get you set up and shot up like bambi...
the only time you shoot nice is on a fuckin court/ leave your ass stiff in a fuckin mourge/ i spit insane, like a motherfuckin cyborg/ i have you and whore lay flat on the floor/ while im jackin ya money/ my infared make you start harlem shakin, like that bitch from honey....
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" in 2001 i was playin my playstation, all i herd was five shots...
im face down on my floor with my heart pacin'.....
all i could think about was hidin my guns and my drugs in the basement....
it was either that or the state pen...." Game
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lmao^
checkin in
ill post in thirty ...........
what you laughin at blood?
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" in 2001 i was playin my playstation, all i herd was five shots...
im face down on my floor with my heart pacin'.....
all i could think about was hidin my guns and my drugs in the basement....
it was either that or the state pen...." Game
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yo skillz nice to meet you my name is B.X.P
Cant believe you stupid enough to battle me
I read your verse I didnt not know where it was leadin
Shit your whole verse wasn't even worth reading
Thinkin up ten punches is pointless when all i need is one
How am i suppose to dodge punches when you threw none
I usually spit a complicated verse with metas an shit
it woul be too hard for you to read since you illiterate
these last two lines will rhyme but it will all be filler it will kill her
Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah hows that for a verse killer
lmao^
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uppin #1............................
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Vote- BXP
skill..
you gotta fix your structure.
split up your lines, and leave
the / out of it. now, you had
very weak/none punches
in your verse, weak personals.
weak wordplay, you really
have to go and elevate.
bxp...
you came whack, but atleast
you tried to throw a decent punch
the worth reading is played. your
whole verse was played, boring,
and weak aswell. you gotta come
harder, even tho you didn't need
to. you won this tho.
vote- bxp
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133041
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Just wanna say both verses were whack
Punches: go to BXP even though they were weak he did have some skills position dog, it seems you were just talking, you gotta swing throw some punches or something
vocab: for both were weak both need to elevate
flow:both flow was weak also weak structure
originality: goes to no one because it was nothin original about neither versus
both emcees need to elevate but my vote goes to BXP The better of the bads
hopefully he didnt try after reading dudes verse but oh well
^thanks for the vote
yea your right i didnt try lol
uppin....................
Hmm, both of ya'll did....bad. Just came newbish thats all.
Skillz don't set up your structure like that. And your verse, you do it like you're doing audio. Punches were too simple, didn't see any personals, metas....or vocabulary for that much. You're new to this obviously, so don't feel bad, just elevate.
B.X.P, your verse was kinda...blah too. You gotta work on some complexity. Some of your lines were a lil played too. Decent structure. Your punches hit where they were thrown, even though they were a little weak.
Vote - B.X.P
Just came harder overall.
alrighty...i've just finished reading the most pointless battle of all time...lol...but it was also an easy one to judge....the first dude, Skillz Position...you have to through some creativity in there....saying that you're going to hit him with a bat just doesnt cut it....
And B.X.P., i understand you probably didnt go all out on this verse, i cant really blame you...but at the same time, you need to be merciless as shit...just because your opponent drops weak, doesnt mean you let off....just go straight for the fucking throat...
Punches-werent really any, but the only one that made me crack a smile was from BXP
Thinkin up ten punches is pointless when all i need is one
How am i suppose to dodge punches when you threw none
Be glad you said that because you wouldnt have gotten this vote without it...
Vote....BXP
vote is for bxp
skillz you need to break up your lines and try to keep from using the same words to rhyme your first three rhymes were nigga, nigga, and nigga
you really didnt have any good punches and weak vocab
bxp your verse was aight you can tell that there wasnt much put into it
that closer was stupid but you did have some ok punches and thats what won this one for ya
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