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10 lines
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I will ban You!!!!
Lol Judge..
Sha itchin n' twitchin, waitin to pull ya bitch card,
only time you hold it down is when you pissin and ya dicks hard
here to blaze ya melanin, and I'd crack ya skeleton faggot
helped you up n' drop you back on the ground like used sex packets
watch the shotty blaze em, merk n' hurt, one person'll rip em,
cockin it back, cap this Eclipse and never think about wearin a fitted
I'll prove ya bitch, get laughed at while stuck n' bruised
cause 90% of ya fan base is in the same mothafuckin crew as you
ya whole steez is ass, I'll slice this fag,
and that means ya voice is so shitty it gives ya mic diaper rash
Hottie's been away for text for awhile, Shes Last in fact
Decided to see Who was online, and, You even come after me In That!What's Going On?
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You decided not to check in, Cuz theres no need to Stall
I know your not respected, How? Your Crews the most inactive of All!
Like a underachieving team, your sure to get dismantled
Slash her body, have her picking up organs, like she was ordering pianos!
You went away from battling, so now, pay the price
She couldn't even overpower my verse if she posted twice!
Faculty has a bad Seed, and it starts from the one that plants
Only way You'll get votes, is from kids tryin to get in your pants!
Sha itchin n' twitchin, waitin to pull ya bitch card,
only time you hold it down is when you pissin and ya dicks hard
medium punch.Could of been better
here to blaze ya melanin, and I'd crack ya skeleton faggot
helped you up n' drop you back on the ground like used sex packets
oooooowwwee...you like the sexual content I see..
watch the shotty blaze em, merk n' hurt, one person'll rip em,
cockin it back, cap this Eclipse and never think about wearin a fitted
booo Hottie these two lines didn't rhyme..nono
I'll prove ya bitch, get laughed at while stuck n' bruised
cause 90% of ya fan base is in the same mothafuckin crew as you
decent
ya whole steez is ass, I'll slice this fag,
and that means ya voice is so shitty it gives ya mic diaper rash
ok
Hottie's been away for text for awhile, Shes Last in fact
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Decided to see Who was online, and, You even come after me In That!
this was a poor idea but the underlined name gave you power...lol!Didn't like anyway..
You decided not to check in, Cuz theres no need to Stall
I know your not respected, How? Your Crews the most inactive of All!
better wording could of helped this one
Like a underachieving team, your sure to get dismantled
Slash her body, have her picking up organs, like she was ordering pianos!
naw
You went away from battling, so now, pay the price
She couldn't even overpower my verse if she posted twice!
I had this same exact idea once and then thought "no way its played as hell"...guess what?I still think about it that way...
Faculty has a bad Seed, and it starts from the one that plants
Only way You'll get votes, is from kids tryin to get in your pants!
decent closer I believe...ok
neither one of you had really hard hitting punches yet I think ...Eclipse... edged this one for taking more personal shots at Hottie.Good effort by both though...not bad Hottie for being a comeback to text..not bad.
Vote ...Eclipse...
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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hottie is hot...
1 ...............
ok not a bad battle, both came ok, kinda close battle
Sha itchin n' twitchin, waitin to pull ya bitch card,
only time you hold it down is when you pissin and ya dicks hard
not bad
here to blaze ya melanin, and I'd crack ya skeleton faggot
helped you up n' drop you back on the ground like used sex packets
hmmm kinda weak
watch the shotty blaze em, merk n' hurt, one person'll rip em,
cockin it back, cap this Eclipse and never think about wearin a fitted
not rhymin, not good punch
I'll prove ya bitch, get laughed at while stuck n' bruised
cause 90% of ya fan base is in the same mothafuckin crew as you
lol like this, good personal
ya whole steez is ass, I'll slice this fag,
and that means ya voice is so shitty it gives ya mic diaper rash
witty, not strong tho
The one personals was good, but other than that not very good punches and no other good personals, vocab wasnt bad, flow was ok.
Hottie's been away for text for awhile, Shes Last in fact
Decided to see Who was online, and, You even come after me In That!
Ok personal, not really strong
You decided not to check in, Cuz theres no need to Stall
I know your not respected, How? Your Crews the most inactive of All!
good personal, hit pretty hard
Like a underachieving team, your sure to get dismantled
Slash her body, have her picking up organs, like she was ordering pianos!
good concept, didnt really rhyme, ok punch tho
You went away from battling, so now, pay the price
She couldn't even overpower my verse if she posted twice!
ok punch, kinda played
Faculty has a bad Seed, and it starts from the one that plants
Only way You'll get votes, is from kids tryin to get in your pants!
ok closer....is she fit?
Not a bad verse, some good personals in ya verse, one or two were played but yours was stronger and harder punches were connected. flow wasnt bad, structure was a lil off.
v/ eclipse for harder and better personals
[YOUTUBE]qZwqp6S1gIw[/YOUTUBE]
hottie is hot...
2 ........
check check.... break it down
~Hottie~
Sha itchin n' twitchin, waitin to pull ya bitch card,
only time you hold it down is when you pissin and ya dicks hard
^ ahahaha good opener.. especially from a female! 8/10
here to blaze ya melanin, and I'd crack ya skeleton faggot
helped you up n' drop you back on the ground like used sex packets
^ hehe not bad... i think there was some unintentional wordplay in there... 6/10
watch the shotty blaze em, merk n' hurt, one person'll rip em,
cockin it back, cap this Eclipse and never think about wearin a fitted
^ nice wordplay... little played... kinda vauge... arite.... 6/10
I'll prove ya bitch, get laughed at while stuck n' bruised
cause 90% of ya fan base is in the same mothafuckin crew as you
^ heheh good one... 7/10
ya whole steez is ass, I'll slice this fag,
and that means ya voice is so shitty it gives ya mic diaper rash
^ hmm didn't really rhyme nor make sense... weak closer... 5/10
31/50
Eclipse
Hottie's been away for text for awhile, Shes Last in fact
Decided to see Who was online, and, You even come after me In That!
^ decent.... opener... not a strong personal.. 5/10
You decided not to check in, Cuz theres no need to Stall
I know your not respected, How? Your Crews the most inactive of All!
^ not the best personal ive seen, not the worst either... 5/10
Like a underachieving team, your sure to get dismantled
Slash her body, have her picking up organs, like she was ordering pianos!
^ Murr... stretched ... hardly rhymed... not very good... 3/10
You went away from battling, so now, pay the price
She couldn't even overpower my verse if she posted twice!
^ that was pretty dope...creative man! 7/10
Faculty has a bad Seed, and it starts from the one that plants
Only way You'll get votes, is from kids tryin to get in your pants!
^ hmm... i got the point but it was kinda really sketchky... weak closer... 5/10
25/50
Not a great verse from either... flowed and structured well for both.. creative on both sides... i enjoyed reading them .... some lines seemed played... vocab was kinda bland... try working on delivery.... otherwise good battle..
GOod battle
Props 2 both
hit up my battles
Peace
Vote - ~HoTTiE~
v / hottie.....
i thought her opener was genius.... and the rest of her verse was good.... not great.. but good....
eclipse.. ur verse was also good, bu ti think hottie had a better opener.. and u have a couple fille rlines, and a couple of playe dlines...
flow... equal
structure... equal
punches.... hottie
personals... eclipse.... though they didn't hit hard
v/ hottie
.. im back
3............................
Hottie-
Sha itchin n' twitchin, waitin to pull ya bitch card,
only time you hold it down is when you pissin and ya dicks hard
7/10 pretty good punch
here to blaze ya melanin, and I'd crack ya skeleton faggot
helped you up n' drop you back on the ground like used sex packets
6/10 decent
watch the shotty blaze em, merk n' hurt, one person'll rip em,
cockin it back, cap this Eclipse and never think about wearin a fitted
2/10 Fitted lines played
I'll prove ya bitch, get laughed at while stuck n' bruised
cause 90% of ya fan base is in the same mothafuckin crew as you
6/10 decent
ya whole steez is ass, I'll slice this fag,
and that means ya voice is so shitty it gives ya mic diaper rash
2/10 wasent feeling this one
Total=23
Eclipse-
Hottie's been away for text for awhile, Shes Last in fact
Decided to see Who was online, and, You even come after me In That!
6/10 clever punch
You decided not to check in, Cuz theres no need to Stall
I know your not respected, How? Your Crews the most inactive of All!
6/10 decent
Like a underachieving team, your sure to get dismantled
Slash her body, have her picking up organs, like she was ordering pianos!
5/10 ok
You went away from battling, so now, pay the price
She couldn't even overpower my verse if she posted twice!
2/10 played
Faculty has a bad Seed, and it starts from the one that plants
Only way You'll get votes, is from kids tryin to get in your pants!
7/10 good personal
Total=26
Pretty good battle.
Eclipse takes this one. More consistent punches
Return the favor by hitting this battle up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133100
Thanks
yo, Hottie, you had a great opener and closer; my favorite line of yours was the opener...lol... your 4th bar was good, too. your rhyme scheme and structure were good. you had lots of multis in there, and in every bar there was a punch! 9/10 for your verse, which was simply one giant punch!
eclipse, your opener and closer were ok, but they just weren't as hard-hitting punches as hottie's... your 4th bar was a played topic, but ok. structure was average; same wit the rhyme scheme. my favorite bar of yours (and of the entire battle) was your 4th! Goddamn, dawg, ya really hit home wit that one!! but even though you had the best bar, ya didn't have the hardest punches, and those are what win battles. 7/10 for a all-around good/mediocore verse. put forth more effort next time.
v=Hottie
vote hottie for better multies/punches/and everything else ...not sayin
other dude came wack...but that showing the online thing was kinda
queer...
plus...
hottie got a donkey butt...so that helped things out
da fuck u doin battlin?...lol
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~HoTTie~
Sha itchin n' twitchin, waitin to pull ya bitch card,
only time you hold it down is when you pissin and ya dicks hard
Played concept but you put a new twist on it.
here to blaze ya melanin, and I'd crack ya skeleton faggot
helped you up n' drop you back on the ground like used sex packets
I wasn't really feeling this.
watch the shotty blaze em, merk n' hurt, one person'll rip em,
cockin it back, cap this Eclipse and never think about wearin a fitted
All filler and further more it didn't even rhyme.
I'll prove ya bitch, get laughed at while stuck n' bruised
cause 90% of ya fan base is in the same mothafuckin crew as you
Ok, I guess.
ya whole steez is ass, I'll slice this fag,
and that means ya voice is so shitty it gives ya mic diaper rash
Delivery was weak on this.
You need to get your lines to an equal length to improve on your structure. Your flow was alright but it was still a little rough though. You had no personals which is an important aspect in a battle. Your punches were weak because they were kind of played and weren't delivered well.
...Eclipse...
Hottie's been away for text for awhile, Shes Last in fact
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Decided to see Who was online, and, You even come after me In That!
Ok, nothing special though.
You decided not to check in, Cuz theres no need to Stall
I know your not respected, How? Your Crews the most inactive of All!
Nice personal.
Like a underachieving team, your sure to get dismantled
Slash her body, have her picking up organs, like she was ordering pianos!
Good punch.
You went away from battling, so now, pay the price
She couldn't even overpower my verse if she posted twice!
No, seen this concept too many times.
Faculty has a bad Seed, and it starts from the one that plants
Only way You'll get votes, is from kids tryin to get in your pants!
Simple but effective.
Try to even out your lines a little to provide a better structure. Your flow was on point, no criticism there. You had some okay personals but none that really stood out. Your punches were nice and simple but they served their purpose.
V/ ...Eclipse...
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