...Apocalypse vs Skillz Position

[...Apocalypse...]

10 lines
u spittin first
no time lmit
no feedin off
good luck you'll need it this time lol

[...Apocalypse...]

Ima spit first, u spit 20-30 minutes after me, u cant even see my verse which means you just rite ur verse after im done, no feedin off of my rhyme

[Skillz Position]

okay

[...Apocalypse...]

Now listen....you got no skillz you must be wishin...
Skillz aint even in my position........quit ya bitchin...
My rhymes makes hole in ya chest, call me the best...
Chop off ya head.....like choppin off a wooden fence...
Ima knock him out and leave him shakin on the pavement...
He likes dicks too much he craves it, he just wont say it...
Leave him in the rappin commentary, I aint so ordinary...
Ya rhymes that you be spittin doesnt even barely, scares me...
Wen my rhymes hit you, you’ll be out of breath, close to death...
No wonder you don't do audio...............your just so so deaf...

[Skillz Position]

these are the frontlines, this aint no time to bond/ cause if i catch you, ima jack you like martha stuart with a bad bond/ i be in jamiaca smokin a fat blunt mon/ your lines are fuckin traded like pokemon/ and thats my word, ima clip you with some furious guns/ when i pull out a .9 ima have you checked like a pair of air force ones/ i cant stop...... wont stop like the motherfuckin young gunz/ i get your head split like some birthday party hot dog buns/ my clips big, like the thrid rock from the sun/ after my verbal abuse, you might consider becoming a nun

[Dissonance]

Ok. I would give this battle the run-down like always, but that takes forever and a day to complete so i'm just gonna set here and type up a big-ass paragraph about how much this battle was one of the easiest KO's on Rb.com.
Apocalypse: Your battle was all-right. I cant say ive seen you do better, because frankly, I havnt. (Never seen the name on the forums) A few lines were all right. Nothing spectacular. Enough for a win.

Skillz Position: Ok. If you look at the thing i wrote at the bottom, that says "Both of you" You need to read that, like, 100 times, and then commit suicide. That battle sucked. The entire battle was about yourself. The world doesnt revolve around you, and you need to actually hurt the other guy through the words, which you didnt. The term for your crappy verse was called "FILLER" Yea. Never do that again.


Both of you: NEVER TALK ABOUT YOURSELF. Dont rap about how YOU are gonna kill the bitch, or how YOU are the best rapper alive. you are supposed to just completely kill the other guy through offensive punches. You are saying how good you are, without any proof to back it up.

Vote: Apocalypse

[Skillz Position]

personally i think i killed him. there are times when i know i can admit a loss... but this shit right here..... he got killed.

that up to the judges tho....

[...Apocalypse...]

you wish u killed me but u didnt so uppin #1

[...Apocalypse...]

uppin for sum votes will return the favor

[Jonezy]

ok this wasnt a great abttel both kinda came weak, none had great punches or personals in the verse, and like sum 1 else said..this is a battle, diss each other not boost yourself, that wont get ya wins,

AP - some punches were ok in ya verse, flow wasnt bad and ya structure was ok also, just work on better and harder punches and join them with personals.

skill - weak verse, no really punches, most of it was boostin yaself, just come harder, get personals across, flow was poor as well and ya structure was wack, work on that


vote AP

return the favour on my battle..leave feedback on it..

[...Apocalypse...]

uppin #2 will hit up ur battle only if u vote officially on the polls

[...Apocalypse...]

uppin.........#2
....will return the favor....

[...Apocalypse...]

uppin.........#3
....will return the favor....

[Brother Blue Collar]

no offense but shitty verses from the both of ya, and not only cuz of schemes

Flow:Apoc took this his scheme was way betta than yours since it was non-existent
i saw no structure to ya verse at all skillz
Punches: Apoc took this as well even tho both verses had none worth mentioning
and none there hit hard at all apoc's atleasted show promising effort
Personals:Apoc takes this as well cuz all i read from you was you threatening him with a gun you prolly don't even have and if you did how you going find him

overall: Shit verses from both but apoc takes the cake

[Aargh Kelly]

Apoc

good structure you flow was decent
punches were weak but good enough for the win
you need to work on vocab and wordplay and have
more personals
elevate


skillz

work on that structure your flow was off because of it
punches? weak as hell
personals crap
work on vocab,wordplay and everything else
elevate

vote/apoc cause of better everything