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Morbid Manner
Orpheus Rex
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I spit first...
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First battle in months...
Morbid thinks ill...but really he's got the wrong perception...
This is the start of whoring girls, this is Orph's pimp inception...
I do more than merk and kill, I have morbid manners when I battle...
Orph rips mics, and to end this beef...I just kill the cattle...
Corrupted Visions? I swear your crew must be based in San Fran...
Cause you surrounded by gays...and the only beef they saw was in their hand...
I mean, Morbid's wack...What more can I say...?
I stay calm, but when it boils down...I manage to sun Morbid on a rainy day...
I smack wack bitchs...and I can even the playing field if you wish...
Submit a verse from sdizzle...and it would still probably own your shit...
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Yea u think ur the dogs bollocks but well let the votes decide
ill castrate the son of a bitch, this should take away ur pride
told him to spit first he got confused and thought it a blind spit
coz ur best excuse for dropping lined shit,
is daddy stuck his dick in my eyes while i typed it
ur poor quality, if ur arse were food tramps would buy it
check the local homeless shelters price list, ur their next meat pie dish
ever since ur last beat its been........................
u know that audible only let u in to help ur self esteemOriginally Posted by Orpheus Rex
funny your named after a dog ill teach u a thing or two
kneel rex have some respect, now fucking kiss my shoe
click the word THIS in the 3rd line for HIS PICTURE lmfao
Last edited by Morbid Manner; June 7th, 2004 at 03:13 PM
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Rex- when i was reading your verse i was really feeling it, i think that you had real nice structure, you had a punch or two that landed one harder than the other, i seen that u had one real good personal, only thing i can say is watch out u get close to streching your lines
Morbid-when i was reading your verse i knew that u were doing good, and that you had about the same structure, the same amount of punches, the same number of personals, and i was going to vote for rex, BUT THEN i read your last two lines....NICE CLOSING
V/morbid
Ehh.. this wasn't that good.. Not
elite material.. you can take this to FL
cuz this is not where these verses belong
to be truthful. But for the vote, im goin morbid
just because he came a little more decent than
Orph, still nothing really pointed out
v/ Morbid
In Return..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131379
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...392#post1455392
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
Artificial Intelligence.
morid won staight up rex had a better flow
but morid beat'em on every thing else
explain votes
*Sigh* You both need some extreme elevation. I don't even know who to vote for... whackness from both sides was prevalent.
Orph.
First of all... you have to stop dropping in the 'third person' form. Stop it with punches such as, "Orph's pimp..." "Orph rip mics..." Shit is mad boring to read and makes you look conceited. Plus any punches like that are whack. Only person I see that can pull that style off is Avalon. Battle and cattle... never use those words as the rhyming words. Never.
I mean, Morbid's wack...What more can I say...?
I stay calm, but when it boils down...I manage to sun Morbid on a rainy day...
^Is whack... and the second part of the second line just comes out of 'left field.' Like, it's unexpected. Rainy day? Where'd that come from. You have to setup punches.
Morbid
Yea u think ur the dogs bollocks but well let the votes decide
ill castrate the son of a bitch, this should take away ur pride
^Eh... better then most of Orph's verse. So that's a plus. But it was still whack. You need to work on wording some more. However, nice rhyme scheme, it's not boring.
You started off your punch semi-decent... then fell off quickly. Dad and dick punches? Come on now. Everything else was whack. However, you win for having one dope line while Orph was busy glorifying himself.
Vote = Morbid.
I also polled STUBBY'S vote.
I'm a fag, I'm a faggot...
Oh I'm a faggot...
I'm a fag, I'm a faggot...
Oh Oh...Oh I'm a faggot
Well, I haven't battle since like Last year...
I don't know what these kids do today...!
But I don't really care about winning or not, cause battling isn't my main thing here...
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Damn, Morbid...
...that was wack.
Your Wack Hoe^
Anyways, i saw the title and thought that orpheus had this with ease, but i have to admit that i was wrong. Morbid came good in this one, He had good punches and some decent personals that helped him get an edge in this one. Flow was a help and Structural goes to Orpheus. But, structure does not win battles, Hard punches and hard personals do. So for that and that only Morbid gets this
V/Morbid
Yo hit up a battle in my sig please
I whored you in that ugly bitch's pic thread...
...looks like you wana get whored again.
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