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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?

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  • Tactixx

    1 16.67%
  • Lyric

    5 83.33%
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  1. #16
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    ok lyric won due to one major factor...
    he stayed on topic more frequently...
    and used the topic much better...
    tactixx u had a good drop...but...
    u got off topic in some areas...
    it didnt sit well with the reader...
    plus i felt u used the topic wrong...
    u werent really going with what the,
    title had suggested...unwanted passenger,
    i felt u kinda contridicted the topic and flowed,
    with yur version of what it should be...so thats,
    why imma vote for lyric...u messed up my man...

    hit my battles up dukes!...
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    Harsh^ I liked Tactixx's drop....
    A few achievements here and there

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  3. #18
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    lyric's story was good... and his multis were ok... but it was messed a little on the flow by certain phrasing points...
    I don't think he gave it a second read to be honest... but... it was good overall...

    Tactixx...was alright... the lines were almost standard far for you....i think the flow and complexity was just about right... and you didn't lose the story in overly complex vocab... but work on some internal... or interior rhyme adjustments... you can improve upon this and win more decisively...

    tactixx gets my nod out of consideration...
    Hence Forward

  4. #19
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lyric
    Harsh^ I liked Tactixx's drop....
    ^^Thanx....Yours was nice too^^....Well this is my last uppin.......Drop an honest vote...peace

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    Bump for my crewmate
    INSANE JOKA LYRICIST

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    Flow - goes to Tactixx - was just better overall - more complex - smoother generally

    Content - goes to Lyric - decent take on the topic - used your words well - good imagery - a few awkward places but overall the emotion was pretty good - Tactixx your story was alright - the tone of your wordings didn't seem to fit exactly though - you were describing some pretty gruesome shocking things - but it felt like a Scary Movie type of thing - the ideas weren't introduced in a manner to make me feel the pain of the person - instead I wanted to laugh when I saw something about "his top half came out" - I don't think that was your intention - so work a little on that - on creating an environment for the action

    nice work both - but overall vote goes to lyric

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