aight heres the rules...
10-20 lines
no D/r
no hate
no crew ( if any )
no biting
Blind Spit 20 min after check in
FUBAR
LyriCal Havok
aight heres the rules...
10-20 lines
no D/r
no hate
no crew ( if any )
no biting
Blind Spit 20 min after check in
well im checkin in so after you check in then time starts
chekin in...let's do this.............................
aight im checkin in ill drop in a minute....
checkin in
I'm droppin mine right now............................................... ............
What the fuck is up with your fuckin gay ass name,
Are you so fuckin retarded to think this shit is a game?
Bitch, you better think twice bfore you fuck with me,
I'll fuck you up quicker than that fucker Dick Chaney,
Bitch, I don't even know why the fuck I'm dissin you,
I'll send to bullts to your fuckin temple, and that's the truth,
You mak me sick, why don't you go suck on a dick,
Besides, you don't even have one, 'cause you a bitch,
You look like a fuckin gay ass pussy,
I'd advise you to check your own fuckin sexuality,
aww fuck it, I'll be honest here, your a fuckin loser,
How the fuck you expect to beat me when you also a hooker?
I don't have no fuckin time to deal with this 2 cent hoe,
Why don't you just go blow the show,
'cause you already fucked up your flow,
You ain't cut out to be an MC,
We all know you got your gay rhymes from your mommy,
Bitch, I'll break your fuckin spine into the size of a dime,
If you dare make fun of my mother fuckin lines,
Do you really want to fuck with me?
I’m comin hard, wit knives to "split" ur eyes so you can “foursee” my victory//
And if these kids couldn’t get that "wordplay", Irony don’t mean shit to me//
Dog, my words are known to be "blunt-tight-n-blatent"//
Beatin me? You aint gotta chance in hell like "rollin dice-wit-satan"//
I’m like "Jesus" rappin when I walk on water//
Spitten flames compared to hell coz its not much hotter//
With a sick verse of slick words, serving you like "God’s my father"//
Challenging ME!!! plz my nig you aint got a chance in HELL, Dont bother//
Your scared---you need to get-out-and-fight//
I’m showin no signs of stopping, like brakes-witout-da-lights//
If a nigga talking bout me, don’t let me catch wind//
Coz ima make sure ur "neck n knees" become best friends//
i would get "personal" wit you but thats not "possible"//
your life, your lyrics are nothin...its all fable//<look it up
My rhymes are dropping like bombs n’ leave you hidin "under the table"//
Come to ur house and rob while ur home…ill say im "fixin the cable"//
aight uppin 4 votes lets get votes on this hot shitt!!!
uppin 4 votes
Uppin this!!!!!
Come on people, vote!!!........................................... .....
39 fuckin views and not one person votes........COME ON DAMMIT, VOTE!!!!!!
uppin............................................. .........................................
will any one with enough balls, get up off their lazy asses, and fuckin vote???
F-i liked ya verse you had hrad hitting punches and flow was cool structure was alrite tho wasnt best your barz were a lil streched your structure was bad thooooooo overall it was a good drop
H-your verse was also a good drop flow was ok came off at times vocab was simple tho and so was ur wordplay punches werent that hard hitting niether wordplay was ok i guess but overall you need 2 elevate
Vote/ Fubar
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
Vote - FUB
Fub - he came much harder than his opponent did. I actually felt that he wuz dissin' mo than he was self-acclaimin himself like havoc wuz.
havoc - you would came aiight, but ya flow is kinda choppy, and ya structure iz kinda weak. so overall unno th' decizion.
punches - havoc
wordplay - havoc
flow - Fub
opener - Fub
closer - Fub
overall - Fub
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