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    Quick Verse I wrote at work

    Infections turn cells 2 enemiues through fatal disceptions
    Attempts @ corrections are now futile 4 that section
    Impressions do not skew the most of all fatal perceptions
    Im tired of the played out suffix' and lack of rthym
    I have more points than polygonial Prisms
    My observations are pivital, alike 2 those of nuclear fission
    I'm not runnin' 4 president & I never sponsored terrorism
    Other than simply buying Street narcotics
    I'll christen your baby & revoke your audit
    Dont panic you were not frauded
    I would still be smokin' cepts bars outlawed it
    Take note thats this print is rather factual
    usage of truth in rap is cunning & tactical
    The phrases I use aren't for show, they're pratical
    I'm free of all flaws because my rhyming shceme has a vacuole

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    This was aight man.. you really had the word play in there, and you showed them you aint whack. I felt some emotion in this piece.. very very good!
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    roar upping.................

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