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    Write To This Picture XII

    What?
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    The sun sets under the skyline,
    Horror grabs ahold of Kevin.
    His face changes completely,
    He has to be home at eleven.

    People walk the bridge slowly,
    As Kevin runs by so swiftly.
    That even the river below,
    Seems to disapear completely.

    He runs out of energy to run,
    But he has to pick up the pace.
    Kevin knows it's getting late,
    The big hands on 10, the lil ones on 8.

    The bridge never seems to end,
    Horror feels his face expression.
    He's gonna be grounded for life,
    This time he's gonna learn his lesson.

    The picture in his mind explodes,
    His mind juss can't make-up.
    Rather to stay there or run,
    But then Kevin suddenly wakes-up.

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    These sticks and hats, cover the place
    A hundered ways, The others portrayed
    Hunters and blades, Love Seeps Daylight
    These sanity swells, never stay right
    Never long enough, open your eyelids
    Never big enough, for the ocean of kindness
    The sun sneeks sleep, behing the hills
    It aint ur garden variety, mines or pills
    These rusty nails, tie together this wood
    To cross the ocean, of never understood
    n` thunder would, Like Satins Devil
    So the night pales, fate is swivle
    As i see the meat clever
    Displayed, from the L S D Reaper...

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    Scared by the downing sun and toil,
    painted with charcole, some with oil.
    running steep upon the ledge,
    meeting the keep at the end of the ledge.
    Plains are smirling masses of grasses twirling,
    only the horror of the future he bestow,
    the maddening jump, and the rocks below.
    round and round into a center,
    once before, but afraid to enter.
    should he jump, or should he redeem,
    maybe retract this venomous scheme.
    Until all his problems seem to stack,
    take one step and fade to black.
    My guns are like fiends. they crack-heads.

    6 of them bled
    7 of them dead
    8 felt my hate
    9 felt my nine
    10 reload again.

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    OG Poet, er some shit.
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    Haiku

    Shadows blind all thoughts
    Into a bridge of thinking
    The sun has deceased...


    what i saw...
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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    ...Then our time just stoped,
    As the sun becames liquid...
    And melted the skies

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    through twisted eyes view twisted skies
    horrified by the cries of everyday lives
    woke up on the wrong side of the bed
    realized I'm living like I'm already dead
    through the looking glass reality seems unreal
    my view begins to crumble reflecting how I feel
    sanity is lost and no where to be found
    fend for myself in the dust left by the crowd

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    Standing on the bridge
    Between Heaven and Hell,
    Ready to dispel all thoughts that
    Invade your head before
    Terror marks your eye
    With the vile red of blood
    Such as that seen
    When those of insane reason
    Go berserk
    And end the heaven that is earth
    To put a foot inside its hell...
    Walking slowly...
    On the bridge of Madness.

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    Perplexity is sitting next to me, I feel vexed within this land of complexity.
    My head grows weary from thinking about horrid visions which kill all people, fluttering and muttering with my eyes apon the steeple.
    Provisions of thought patterns swirl about the caught mind matter, which within my brain dwells and causes my dream waves to swell.
    Im in a living hell, which relapses into my driven sinapses, always wanting another lover who will hear my heart a-crackling and snapping.
    Breath escapes my lungs and solidifies within my throat, choking my nervousness which battles on the verge of consciousness.
    my eyes see behind me, as swirls of haunting crystals become lodged into my temples and rhythmically pound my ear- drums with utterances of winter.
    Flakes bombard my face like daggers of inequality, and pierce through the core of my being straight into my corneas.- daluris

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    when the world gets distorted
    feels like the sun always sets
    the bridge of life gets shorted
    the world seems it has terettes
    other people don't notice
    all the things that you have seen
    while your eyes are in the mist
    they're seeing everything clean
    your emotions confuse you
    when you've gone through that abuse
    it's hard to see what is true
    when you're stuck in your issues

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    Horror fills my eyes as death walking passes by,
    My face turns white as he turns, I wonder why,
    Hes after me? I gasp and try to grasp the reality,
    The concept is quite simple but its slipping past me,
    What have I done, whys it suddenly my turn to die,
    He stopped infront of me, looking straight in my eye,
    I grasp my face as he takes my fate into his hands,
    I see distortion as I float away from these lands.

    ^blah.. quick shit.. oOO well haha
    <center>RIP - 7.18.O2..7.19.O2..7.22.O2
    7.24.O4 ... 11.o8.o4
    o4.o9.o5
    7.o2.o6
    7.o7.o6
    Forever in my heart.

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    I can hear the stream of water beneath the bridge
    If only I was captured by the beauty of the sunset over the ridge
    You can just smell the aroma of air when you breathe in
    Im screaming because I need something to believe in
    Not just an ordinary idea that leads to treason
    Im searching for the answers behind the reasons
    So I stand on this bridge all alone and greevin

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    Good job for all those who participated. Check out Rhetorical Insight's best to see if you made it this week.
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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