Quote Originally Posted by Tactixx
Nice drop...Very nice vocab and metaphors....Some lines did seem a little long to me, but I caught onto it....Nice insight into the subject and intro...Ill check out the second half when you post it...I think this is the first piece Ive seen form you, good job...You had some decent imagery and emotion, the reader got a sense of how you feel about the topic, which is always nice....A good read...nice piece....keep at it...

Check out one of my OM's in my sig if you get a chance...thanx...peace
Thanks for all the replies guy's, it means much to me.
I'll be dropping the second part some time this month, as long I can get around to it, I'm just way to busy as of late...