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wayne
Kon Quest
Here's the rules
10-12 lines....
No Crew, hate or d/rs
blind spit (just drop whenever you are done)
due in an hour...
Check in and I will start keyin
Check in so we can get this shit started.......
Whatever, I don't feel like waiting any longer......
Fuck is wayne thinking steppin to me...you're not tough
Droppin his draws is the only time he gets his Squad Up
I'm callin you Polaroid....you don't get the picture, look
He thought he was developed but instead the kid's still shook
Don't nobody want it....Im like a hot potato, man
While your blows ain't felt...you need an oscillating fan
Ain't no one bumpin your shit...infact, I'm feeling sorry
Cause the only time you see a Kenwood is playin with your barbies
I'm sunning this cat with the way that I bring sweat
And people callin him Hewlet Packard cause even his Ink Jet
Salvation Army rapper.....all his rhyme are second hand
So I'm bringing the heat....just to give him a better tan
Like Flip Said, Its 'game Ova' Doc... Gutter Is Gettin U Droped..
U Couldn't Be 'saved This Time' If U Went To A Bank And Deposited A Clock!//
Im Murderin This Rook.. Its A Wrap And In Tha Books..
Jae Is "skinnin' This Cat" Quicker Then Chinese Cooks!//
Im Ruthless, Shittin On Him Like Birds.. My Verse Is Rippin This Herb...
Makin Him 'fall To Tha Gutter' Like 'trippin On Curbs!'//
I Flow Hard Like Tha Mississippi.. Break Faces If They Gettin Lippy..
Punchlines Knockin U 'off Balance' Like U Was Gettin Tipsy!//
Im Done.... Dont Even Need Five Bars.. U Got Murdered Kid...
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you need a prayer to beat me
-wayne-
2 crome 9...... $550.00
A Few Clips........... $100.00
Box Of Hollow Tips.. $30.00
Black shirt.........$10.00
Look On Your Face
When You see Me... Pricless
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Uppin this for an easy win.............
do you see the prayer hands you dont have a prayer
guy i had to leave a flame you ,you weak
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you need a prayer to beat me
-wayne-
2 crome 9...... $550.00
A Few Clips........... $100.00
Box Of Hollow Tips.. $30.00
Black shirt.........$10.00
Look On Your Face
When You see Me... Pricless
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If I'm weak, I'd have to say that you are already broken.....your verse was the worst shit I have ever seen.......uppin..........
Uppin.............
i have to say that this goes to Kon....duke had more punchlines that landed on tha boi wayne....tho wayne came wit some nice lines....his overall intensity didnt show...and therefore he was docked some points
Im Murderin This Rook.. Its A Wrap And In Tha Books..
Jae Is "skinnin' This Cat" Quicker Then Chinese Cooks!//
this wasnt ya best...but a mediocre line....just not enough thought put into it...ya know...i know its hard comin at a cat a certain way....just let it flow...
i give this to Kon cuz he came wit some fire and more complexity....plus his rhyme scheme showed this intensity...
vote..Kon
igido
Wit.
ive gotta give this to Kon hes had way better punches and the flow and structure was alot better than waynes, wayne had a few good punches and flow was good also but the originality wasnt really there, Kons personals were better than waynes as well which i think made his verse stronger,pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129868
Thanks for the feedback.....lets get some more.....
^^^i thought those were u best lines......had some wordplay.....punch wasnt really direct though.....overall ur verse was ok.....structure was good.....flow was on target......there were a few metas......wordplay was good......some of the punches connected.......personals were ok.....Originally Posted by Kon Quest
^^^those were ur two best lines......had a meta.......wordplay was good......overall ur verse was average......structure was fucked.....ur lines r stretched dude......ur flow fell off a lil.....metas were nice......wordplay was tight......no punches that connected......no personals.....
Overall -
wayne had more, and better metas and wordplay.....but kon had a better structure, flow....more of his punches and personals connected.....so basing off of that.....kon quest wins this battle.......
VOTE - KON QUEST
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Wayne's shit was probably bitten cause he said something aboyt Jae... so I already declare him a faggot...
Kon: Decent verse... didn't use filler, kept a good pace, and had multis with a good flow throughout, overall solid verse... like the Kenwood line
Wayne: Bit that shit... he even bit some stuff that was garbage, no flow at all... multis are all off and wordplay is played as fuck... you suck for biting anyways
Vote - Kon Quest
Return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130011
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Punches: Kon
Flow: Kon
Personals: None
Metaphores: Wayne
Wordplay: Kon
Structure: Kon
Vocabulary: None
Enjoyment: Wayne
Creativity: Kon
Vote: Kon
Explination: Overall this was an okay battle, nothing special, but Kon easily edged his opponent out with more and hard-hitting punches and a nice, decent flow. He also had a better, more stable structure. Wayne didn't have much but similies (he used like on all of them), so that didn't make up for what his opponent beat him out on. Keep elevating guys.
Quotables:
Kon:
Salvation Army rapper.....all his rhyme are second hand
So I'm bringing the heat....just to give him a better tan
Okay concept, nice finisher.
Wayne:
Like Flip Said, Its 'game Ova' Doc... Gutter Is Gettin U Droped..
U Couldn't Be 'saved This Time' If U Went To A Bank And Deposited A Clock!//
Off rhyme scheme, this was your best flowing line and didn't feel forced like the rest
Keep elevating, there's always room for improvement.
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One Falls...Another Rises
Konquest easily...
His first few lines were crap, but he rebounded nicely with this...
Ain't no one bumpin your shit...infact, I'm feeling sorry
Cause the only time you see a Kenwood is playin with your barbies
I'm sunning this cat with the way that I bring sweat
And people callin him Hewlet Packard cause even his Ink Jet
Real nice..."Kenwood" had me rolling.
Wayne, most of ya stuff was mad played, you may not know it, but it was.
"Chinese cooks/skinnin cats"...dude...I've seen it 100 times.
Same with "clocks", "wasting time", "killing time"...
The time/clock thing is pretty done.
You added a bit of a nice flip on it, but use a different concept, man.
The rest was fluff by both of em...
Peace
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