"These bars were okay:
BribeOne is just a fag.. settin his Name to glow in Dark Red..
....People will think you are a darts player..
.............because of the way you like three in a bed..
whats with the Devil givin folks the big Grin?..
....you've been knocked back so much..
people are now starting to think of you as a bowling pin..
But your structure still through off the rest of the verse.
Bribe, you came pretty consistent, good multis/structure. But a couple bars were played and you flipped them to jus be okay. But the rest was enough to beat Rascal.
Rascal, you had potential with this, jus shorten up your lines, you dont have to write so much explanation.
V/ Bribe"