Last edited by Meks.; May 20th, 2004 at 03:58 PM
Uh Yes Yes Y'all
Aisle 5 vs. Versatile
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SmokaJoka vs. Truthz
Last edited by Token; May 22nd, 2004 at 08:53 PM
beyond far? -
nah, i'll make it easy for you to find stars, ya wack man
just reach out, & I'll replace your eyes with my back hand
IMin me asking what lines are wack ya shoulda known i was rude
& now that your battling me, what the fuck you gonna do?
Now to bring up the past, i remember helpin you elevate with lines
U know how we stopped cuz my aim crashed? well my aim was fine
believe I twist fucks, and if i could i'd send ya home
yeah my verse bites, & you're leavin with teeth marks in ya dome
he's the type to play with fire, he'll back that with word
but my lines dont play with anything less of their calibur
so you wanna be a star - believe i'll spew in ya face
ya dream came true when I punched u & watched as ya ass flew inta space
Blah, no effort whatsoever, not even half assed.
v/ token for showing
.. im back
i shall not even half ass as well then...i'll match ur 12....
It seems to me, bein wack involves liquid & raisin roofs..
Cuz tokens higher than eviction,
plus hes all wet like bathin suits
Ya best punches hit Light, ya desperate for iller rhymes
The concepts u use are 2 commercial..
ya whole verse reminds me'a Miller Time
Now I duwanna stretch the truth, I could close this in ten-
How can u expect ta stand up 4 yaself..
......when my first bar was ova ya head!
I wait for ya fanbase...... you just a frightening mod
Cuz we know when they Storm the scene..
ya dick gets more attention than a lightening rod
It's true, u helped me elevate....... and I'm thankfull to..
But wait till the season starts..
.......when I'm out ranking you.
I've never really tried, and still, I've passed a few kids...
Damn!, Tokens spittin fire...
but only when I Remix classics you did!
......................
*edit, good luck
He's late, but I don't think Tokaboo will dq, right? So here...
Token:
Beyond far? -
nah, i'll make it easy for you to find stars, ya wack man
just reach out, & I'll replace your eyes with my back hand
^ Okay open.
IMin me asking what lines are wack ya shoulda known i was rude
& now that your battling me, what the fuck you gonna do?
^ If its true, nice hit. If not, still okay hit.
Now to bring up the past, i remember helpin you elevate with lines
U know how we stopped cuz my aim crashed? well my aim was fine
^ ooo, so mean.
believe I twist fucks, and if i could i'd send ya home
yeah my verse bites, & you're leavin with teeth marks in ya dome
^ okay.
he's the type to play with fire, he'll back that with word
but my lines dont play with anything less of their calibur
^ good hit.
so you wanna be a star - believe i'll spew in ya face
ya dream came true when I punched u & watched as ya ass flew inta space
^ Erotic close.
Overall, pretty consistent. Maybe to many "punch" lines...not punchlines, but "pun...whatever, you know. Aight rhymes too. Good flow.
Ambitious:
It seems to me, bein wack involves liquid & raisin roofs..
Cuz tokens higher than eviction,
plus hes all wet like bathin suits
^ Average open.
Ya best punches hit Light, ya desperate for iller rhymes
The concepts u use are 2 commercial..
ya whole verse reminds me'a Miller Time
^ Okay hit, shoulda said 'Lite'.
Now I duwanna stretch the truth, I could close this in ten-
How can u expect ta stand up 4 yaself..
......when my first bar was ova ya head!
^ Aight, aight.
I wait for ya fanbase...... you just a frightening mod
Cuz we know when they Storm the scene..
ya dick gets more attention than a lightening rod
^ Aight wordplay, multi, good.
It's true, u helped me elevate....... and I'm thankfull to..
But wait till the season starts..
.......when I'm out ranking you.
^ Not really a hit.
I've never really tried, and still, I've passed a few kids...
Damn!, Tokens spittin fire...
but only when I Remix classics you did!
^ Good close.
Nice multis here, and flow only slipped like once, or twice, but overall was dope killer. Your punches weren't as hard tho, but you did come more personal, which made this closer.
Tokaboo won. For be'n super duper mean.
V/ T-dog.
nice battle. Token had a few nice lines in here, mostly key though, no really hard punches. the flow and structure was good but so was Amby's. but i honestly saw more punches commin from Amb. he just came harder and even made me laugh. best line:
Now I duwanna stretch the truth, I could close this in ten-
How can u expect ta stand up 4 yaself..
......when my first bar was ova ya head!
dope
vote- Amb
pz
^ Just for the record, it's not who has more punches, it's who has better punches. With that said, Token wins. The opener was okay. The second was cool, and the third was dope. The next two bars were ehh, and the closer was wack, but I don't see any need for you to try at this point. Anyways ..
Ambitious your verse was average, nothing too great. However ..
I wait for ya fanbase...... you just a frightening mod
Cuz we know when they Storm the scene..
ya dick gets more attention than a lightening rod
^ That's supposed to be a punch? Saying his dick gets attention is calling him a pimp. Anyways, your best line was this one ..
It's true, u helped me elevate....... and I'm thankfull to..
But wait till the season starts..
.......when I'm out ranking you
^ And that could've used some rewording, it could've been dope. Should've said ..
It's true you helped me elevate, & I'm thankful too
Cuz when the season starts I'll be the one outrankin' you
^ Flows nice and sounds much better
Anyways, Token wins.
This battle was shit. N I'm pissed off
at Token for droppin so fuckin half
assed like that. If I could I'd vote
against you because I KNOW you can
do so much better but I cant because
you won the battle. Damn it...Token.
vote/Token
Better punchlines.
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Token won...
Damnit... this is too much like PBA...
all the old heads coming quarter assed in the preseason
AI
Lol, i'll make it up next round fellas.
I promise!
Hmm...
gay battle.
Basicly ... Token dropped a bad verse and beat one that was worse.
Better punches from him...
V/Token
good battle toke.
uppn......
tokes
beyond far? -
nah, i'll make it easy for you to find stars, ya wack man
just reach out, & I'll replace your eyes with my back hand
PLAYED BUT NICE FLIP
IMin me asking what lines are wack ya shoulda known i was rude
& now that your battling me, what the fuck you gonna do?
NOPE
Now to bring up the past, i remember helpin you elevate with lines
U know how we stopped cuz my aim crashed? well my aim was fine
DOPE
believe I twist fucks, and if i could i'd send ya home
yeah my verse bites, & you're leavin with teeth marks in ya dome
KINDA BLAH BUT NICE FLIP
he's the type to play with fire, he'll back that with word
but my lines dont play with anything less of their calibur
NOT RLY A PUNCH
so you wanna be a star - believe i'll spew in ya face
ya dream came true when I punched u & watched as ya ass flew inta space
NA
Amby
It seems to me, bein wack involves liquid & raisin roofs..
Cuz tokens higher than eviction,
plus hes all wet like bathin suits
NO
Ya best punches hit Light, ya desperate for iller rhymes
The concepts u use are 2 commercial..
ya whole verse reminds me'a Miller Time
BLAH DIDNT HIT
Now I duwanna stretch the truth, I could close this in ten-
How can u expect ta stand up 4 yaself..
......when my first bar was ova ya head!
THIS WAS COO
I wait for ya fanbase...... you just a frightening mod
Cuz we know when they Storm the scene..
ya dick gets more attention than a lightening rod
WACK
It's true, u helped me elevate....... and I'm thankfull to..
But wait till the season starts..
.......when I'm out ranking you.
DOPE PNCH AND WITTY
I've never really tried, and still, I've passed a few kids...
Damn!, Tokens spittin fire...
but only when I Remix classics you did!
NICE
this was a nice battle but vote goes honestly to toke cause of consitency and a few stand out punches...nice shit both
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