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Ha, this will be fun.
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Artificial Intelligence.
uppin so you see this
softfocus
while you write to rapbattles I perform on stage
How's it feel to lack in comparison?............
LoL.. your pathetic, seriously..
Choke on this..
You gotta be Insane, its a Joke you a Lyricist
You serious? I'll leave you bloody in 30, Period.
You aint hearin it, so im kickin ya legs til' ya knees lock
I could tell you my opinon, but you dont see where im comin from
....Like a Cheap Shot..
Ya whole career in rap, started when ya registered.. and died there
He set this up in FL cuz Elite refused him
... n' you aint even gotta Apply There !
Why care? rap is nothin, all i gotta do is sing n' im Spent
You make no sense..
..Like 'lyric' used in the singular tense
n' ya text, just tells other to vote for me.. like the polls knew
So im Smokin Murgic, spit my "lyrics" in ittalics..
...Which basically sums up the exsistence of ya whole crew!
Artificial Intelligence.
Oh n' its due
Friday, May 13th idiot..
that means today if your 'super stupid'
Artificial Intelligence.
^ my bad..its thursday, forget dates LOL
bet you use that as a punch now
Artificial Intelligence.
This kids caught up in this board. much more than he'd like to ad-mit
Auspicious stops on a dime...
...Cause he can't elevate over it!
This kids spits are seriously on fire, Cause he already burnt off
This herb reps so small...
...Guess my focus is soft
Comin with 1) whack rhymes, 2) played punches flow from you with ease
Usually double negative's a positive...
...Well in this battle for me at least
This kids such a Mass-ive newb, even Deacon said to "leave us"
You aint fuckin MC squared...
...So I guess you aint in-genius
So many vowels in your name, consonants mix constant and consistent
And leave them so entangled...
...like your hooks in fishnets
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Damn nice battle, gentleman...
You gotta be Insane, its a Joke you a Lyricist
You serious? I'll leave you bloody in 30, Period.
Eh, IJL stuff is kinda played...the menstruation line was good wordplay though...a bit played, but not as much.
6.5/10
You aint hearin it, so im kickin ya legs til' ya knees lock
I could tell you my opinon, but you dont see where im comin from
....Like a Cheap Shot..
Eh...nice wordplay, but not really a complete punch, but decent.
6.0
Ya whole career in rap, started when ya registered.. and died there
He set this up in FL cuz Elite refused him
... n' you aint even gotta Apply There !
Funny shit, good punch.
7.5
Why care? rap is nothin, all i gotta do is sing n' im Spent
You make no sense..
..Like 'lyric' used in the singular tense
Good nameplay. Nice punch. Original, well, I ain't seen it before...
8.0
n' ya text, just tells other to vote for me.. like the polls knew
So im Smokin Murgic, spit my "lyrics" in ittalics..
...Which basically sums up the exsistence of ya whole crew!
Good punch, but the stretchedness? and filler shit made this not as good as it could have been.
6.5
And...
This kids caught up in this board. much more than he'd like to ad-mit
Auspicious stops on a dime...
...Cause he can't elevate over it!
Oh man! This was a good opener. Surprisingly, haven't seen the concept quite this way, kudos!
8.5
This kids spits are seriously on fire, Cause he already burnt off
This herb reps so small...
...Guess my focus is soft
Good personal, but "Soft Focus" is already kinda played. Decent, but eh.
6.0
Comin with 1) whack rhymes, 2) played punches flow from you with ease
Usually double negative's a positive...
...Well in this battle for me at least
Too stretched, but good complexity here, weak punch, but real good attempt.
6.5
This kids such a Mass-ive newb, even Deacon said to "leave us"
You aint fuckin MC squared...
...So I guess you aint in-genius
Again, great concept, you need to work on making your punches hit harder...you have real good ideas, but don't word them as effectively as you could. Fucking Steven Hawking in the ass, only way you'll be in-genious!
Something like that...still, for the concept alone...
7.0
So many vowels in your name, consonants mix constant and consistent
And leave them so entangled...
...like your hooks in fishnets
Damn, kid...again you gotta real nice concept, with a soft punch, I get the wordplay, but to me, it's still, eh for impact.
6.5
So...who wins...
10 key goes to work...
Aus: 34.50, Lyric: 34.50
Motherfucker!
I hate it when that happens...
I'll give it to Aus cuz he put together his punches better and connected more cleanly.
I think Lyric wins the wordplay and complexity on this one, but Aus's punching impact was justa bit superior.
So close, this was.
Great read.
Peace
Last edited by Born To Kill; May 14th, 2004 at 12:10 PM
LoL right.. aight
UP !
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Artificial Intelligence.
Hmmm...nice battle here...Aus....you really have to elevate once again....you've gotten rusty...
Aus:
Ya whole career in rap, started when ya registered.. and died there
He set this up in FL cuz Elite refused him
... n' you aint even gotta Apply There !
Why care? rap is nothin, all i gotta do is sing n' im Spent
You make no sense..
..Like 'lyric' used in the singular tense
^^Nice...
Lyric:
This kids caught up in this board. much more than he'd like to ad-mit
Auspicious stops on a dime...
...Cause he can't elevate over it!
^^Pretty good...
Quotables from Aus: 2
Quotables from Lyric: 1
V/ Aus...
enough said...
The Takeover
nyce battle.
Aus- nyce flow. not much people add alotta multies in their battle verses these days, you did even though sum seemed stretched towards the end. you had a lotta of personals in ur verse. they made for some nyce punches. came pretty consistent with them too. you also mixed some complexity in there. took awhile to figure out sum stuff. nyce job.
Lyric- i didn't like your opener. the rhyming in it was a stretch. you came pretty basic even though you did have a few good lines in there. i didn't like the punch where you numbered your disses though, it messed with the flow and how it was read. your structure was ok. but overall, for feeling it more...
vote- Aus
pz =)
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Artificial Intelligence.
This was a good battle.... Aus you had some decent punches and some of them hit fairly hard, but mostly nothing I haven't seen before... I personally used the whole I Just Lost a long time ago so the bolded IJL shit was played to me... your punches would have been more effective if the were more creative, you fell off again with the closer bein bout his crew instead of focusing on just him... I know this is a crew battle but your opponent was lyric not IJL
Lyric you had the creativity here, vocab was nice I liked the 'consonants mix constant and consistent' nice use of similiar looking words to give an overall effect of multi's without actually having any.... basically out of the two verses you showed the most talent. You had some ok punches, nothin great, and if Aus would have came with even ONE more punch that wasn't played he would have won this.
vote = Lyric
i didn't think this was all that close. i think lyric just had too many concepts that i consider 'far fetched' . like the stops on a dime thing. its not really a good battling cliche. i dont like the phrase at all. then, we've all heard "you cant elevate over this level" kind of punches. blah. aus came arrite.... i like his style a lot more, its shorter, to the point. his punches werent great but were enough for him to take this.
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