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Last edited by Blitzkrieger; May 12th, 2004 at 06:41 PM
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Hes not Geneticly ready for me...let alone know what it means
becuz his Tony the Tiger pants...are TR's only grreat genes!
Last edited by Blitzkrieger; May 11th, 2004 at 12:07 AM
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Last edited by The Realist; May 12th, 2004 at 07:10 PM
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Shook in here quick for the win, shaking it fast
I came late with tits, cause you showed me your ass
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Just for those who don't know.
I'm assuming the Realist was putting
wordplay on those last two words.
You're Ass ... get it? Sorry just hate it
when peeps dont get wordplay. Everybody
knows when that erfs you... ok... because
me n Blitz did have beef, I'm gonna break this down
fairly.
ok... the basics of the punch were ... "He has bad genes & he aint ready for me.'Hes not Geneticly ready for me...let alone know what it means
becuz his Tony the Tiger pants...are TR's only grreat genes!
Set up: The two parts of the line dont connect well. Blitz used "let alone know
what it means" this would infer that people don't know what the word geneticly
means... unless of course u were just forcing a rhyme. And I think people do
know what it means.
The Punch: Everybody look at this line so you know exactly not what to do. Never
... I repeat, never use a tony the tiger line in a battle. It makes you seem middleschoolish. When's the last time you've heard tucan sam or tony the tiger
in a real battle.... never... there's a reason for that.
The Realist:
Set up: eh... kinda forced BUT made sense well so that beats BlitzShook in here quick for the win, shaking it fast
I came late with tits, cause you showed me your ass
forced rhyme.
The Punch: nice lil wordplay at the end, kinda made me chuckle.
This is obviously at LEAST a decent punch.
Thus
vote - The Realist.
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Hes not Geneticly ready for me...let alone know what it means
becuz his Tony the Tiger pants...are TR's only grreat genes!
one of the first rules of battles is to not come corny. period. coming corny can be anything from dull wordplay to lame punches like this tony the tiger one. yeah, you tried, but it wasnt working for you. the whole gene / pants thing was quite simpleton too. try to make better comparisons. dissing his family indirectly with the genes statement wouldnt be more than an avg diss if it was completely direct but indirect its just kinda lame, especially with the added thing of 'genes / pants'. and just, dont talk about tony the tiger, period. also, in a 1-2 punch battle you're only throwing 1 punch... but u COULD throw one in each line... that would almost certainly win u the battle if both were good. also, dont put periods to cause drama between the first and second part unless there is a dope punch there.
Shook in here quick for the win, shaking it fast
I came late with tits, cause you showed me your ass
a ok comparison... you should have greatly improved the ' tits/ ass' thing ... you could have quite easily made a better comparison and this could have been better than barely average... it could have been dope even.
but you get this. i didnt get it till M~M said it. not sure why - but i almost always understand wordplay, i think it was just your comparison to show me ur tits...
ah well...I knew it was korny, but I thought it was funny. Thx for honest votes
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Yeah...
Sorry, but Tony the Tiger hasta lose.
TR put some nice wordplay and directed his punch well.
Peace
LMAO^.
Nice wordplay??
Good one Born
Anyway, yea, TR got it for the better punch.
V/Realist
The play on tits (this) was dope .. I got it quickly .. And thought it was original as fuck .. Props on that TR .. Blitz' line was weak I think .. Comparin' a cereal mascot to jeans (or genes as you stated) .. Weak .. TR wins
Vote - TR
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vote-tr ovious reasons .44 came wack soz but you did man.
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TR...
he used simple wordplay but was still dominant over wat Blitz was droppin'...
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TR..... corny Blitz, very corny
tr-for not being corny
and the lil wordplay
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