Losing Something Precious...

[¤Øvuh Whélm¤]

Want to look at death? look at my life, nothing but ¤burning desire¤…
Learning to fire, was the only means of trying to make it ¤higher’¤
I been beaten with rods, the manner and disposition of this kid is still a ¤villain¤.
Moms had no money so she let nigguh’s fuck for 20 ‘Bones’, like a ¤fill in¤.
Shot needles of crack cocaine through her veins, like a dose of ¤penicillin¤.
Jokes thrown to my temple from Kid’s, so I became a menace to ¤killing¤…
Satan tossing bad thoughts to my head until they pumped hard and started to ¤drill in¤.
But I still stand, with the guns loaded, and the will within. And held close to my chest, I got that steel to ¤kill man¤.

¤Death Is Inevitable¤

It’s insane that through brains the signals we receive can be hectic’
It was a shame, didn’t know who to blame when my mom was killed when the tech spit
Troubled women, big head, slim and anorexic, I confess shit! I have been shot down Flesh Ripped’
It’s a shame ma, when the vest split, chest lit, and nothing but a hole in lungs…and standing ovuh me they asking who is the ¤best click¤…I lay down with my moms blood on my hands, and I’ begin to ¤rest quick¤’, I’ hope yawl see my life, and anything that comes good ¤respect it¤….

U’ only get one chance in life, I wasted precious time, don’t u do the same…


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[¤Øvuh Whélm¤]

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[Mistral]

Start leaving a bit better feedback than the one liner that you gave on the open mic you have for a link, Thanks

But this was ok...The structure was ok, it seemed like the lines were kinda streched out though a bit...had some alright mutlies in this, probably could have added some in a few more places though to help support the flow in this piece...But in the second half you had better multies than the first and I thought that one had the better flow...But overall this was alright.