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  1. May 6th, 2004, 01:27 AM #1
    Dios de Hip Hop
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    walls'

    walls
    stuck in limbo land

    Pin myself to a cross of happier days and the rat race
    Limbo-land Lynch,Traped in a Maze of chalk bodys traced
    Silver line-in, disguised to look like your lovers face
    Whats the haste? When ya mouth is completly braced
    ambitions a waste, mold never actually took shape
    your peice of cakes gotten eaten by another taste
    aint fates fault cuz i know its just the schooling track
    every single fault of mine is picked on by every single rat
    nibbled first till its collateral damage hits ur testinal track
    boilin shit to a brim mathmatic, countin every slap
    every bash in the face and every strap that they lace
    every crap that she brakes over ur for-fathers race
    every snatch that he makes for your past mistakes
    all draped in hate that sketches you your single place
    all fallin to not a single vertabrate to quake it different
    2 cents stuck between the seats of openly lieing trends
    bright future is an illusion always staying on the horizon
    smile always lusting, enticing but never giving a lying fuck
    they made this a u-haul truck, thats steppin funny luck
    ill run over the sheriff, the debuty and king trust
    just to merit the dead bodys when im fillin this rut
    a blood rush every time i stare at these plaster caked walls
    mauled by scratches, burned by matches to brake the stall
    never free, never forced to bleed from claustiphobic brawls
    but the walls, they never rescede nor break within my calls
    never closing to my death, rapein my soul, keepin it sprawled


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  2. May 6th, 2004, 01:34 AM #2
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  3. May 7th, 2004, 02:24 AM #3
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  4. May 7th, 2004, 02:41 AM #4
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    favorite part:

    every bash in the face and every strap that they lace
    every crap that she brakes over ur for-fathers race
    every snatch that he makes for your past mistakes
    all draped in hate that sketches you your single place

    ^real upbeat right there. almost got me bouncing a bit. this whole thing had a distinct flow. I liked it. nice job on that. nice vocab too, pretty well read. only problem was the meaning. it kinda confused me. I guess its one of those abstract raps huh? coo coo. you did a good job nonetheless. props on this man. this was dope. unique mostly.

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  5. May 7th, 2004, 09:40 AM #5
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    i liked the way you used the rhyming, really kept the flow going well... seemed quite a fast read and smooth.... i agree with ace, in places i was like, 'wheres this going'... enjoyable tho... and you stayed pretty consistant with it all thru... props, nice workz... one
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  6. May 7th, 2004, 01:09 PM #6
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  7. May 7th, 2004, 01:15 PM #7
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    Sup, this was a pretty decent piece, the flow was aiight, but it was choppy in one spot I felt....ummm I more or less don't have anything original to say cus the other replies in this post said it for me....this post just needed a little sense of direction....

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  8. May 7th, 2004, 01:23 PM #8
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    God, i'm Glad i came in here to holla at Dev, This joint was Extremely tight.

    Like duke Said that "Every, Every, Every" Stanza was bangin', your Flow is ILL mos Def.. Almost better then mine lol J/K, nah But this was a nice one here

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  9. May 8th, 2004, 02:08 AM #9
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    Sorry for abstract meanings.
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