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    Post 1st verse of my 1st song (done ages ago)

    I look back on my life/
    Ive seen a lot/
    Even though Im only a young guy/
    Ive seen enough pain to last me a life time/
    Every rhyme I write/
    Reflects on the times ive hurt/
    Or been hurt/
    I put in alotta work/
    And im just getting paid/
    I got my wife pregnant/
    1st time I EVER laid her/
    And got laid myself/
    The last thing I want is for her to cry 4 help/
    As she sees her seed and man bleed/
    In the street from other gangstas beef/
    I got my deal to get outta the street/
    Them drug dealins would’ve got me locked up away/
    And then depression would set as my heart set to stone/
    No place to go/
    And nobody to hold/
    This is my fault/
    Why couldn’t I stay strong?/
    Where did I go so wrong?/
    When did I go so cold?/
    Why didn’t I stand bold?/
    And tell the world to hell wit yall?/
    This is the path I drew/
    So ima draw sumthin new/
    Na to hell wit this I lost my girl, my son & my writin passion/
    Ive been givin another chance at life/
    Im goin on to thugs mansion/

    I did this a while ago when i was depressed all i used to listen to was Thugz mansion so i did this verse to the beat holla @ ur thoughts.
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    yeah thats hot dunie

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    Thanx dawg much appreciated uppin #2
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    You need to leave a link to a open mic that you left decent feedback to or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    Uppin #3..........................................
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