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Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Winner is in the LW Matchup next week.
10 lines son.
Yep coo..spit soon as i will
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Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
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Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Good set up..very creative and effective punch..had me laughing..9/10
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
Eh, liked the first line..wasnt really feeling the second 6/10
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Straight punch...wasnt creative..but you got to the point..8/10
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
Haha...pretty decent punch...simplistic though..7/10
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
Blagh..just saw something like this in another battle..6/10
36/50..your verse was pretty straight..but you focused on wordplay too much..but
the point is you dissed your opponent effectively, so I really cant complain
Judge:
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
You do mean dots correct? He didnt use dash marks...either way blagh punch..5/10
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
LoL....nice personal....straight set up...8/10
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
Eh...straight..wasnt really effective...but I do get the point...6/10
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
= /....started off like it was going to be real creative...then it ended ineffective..6/10
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Best punch in your verse..and it was a gimme..9/10
34/50 points..you came decent..but I wasnt feeling some of your lines..too simplistic..try some creativity or something
Straight battle.
Vote-KayOhh
AI. Legendary.
19x HOF. Seven Titles. 50.
You do mean dots correct? He didnt use dash marks...either way blagh punch..5/10
^
wack bitch did u even read his shit.......lmfao
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*cough*swayer*cough*
no man i ent ....i just mean he sed you meen dots.................when i didnt as if he cud read you see ldsa *-* at the end.newb
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...Originally Posted by KayOhh
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
^first line is reaching second line is fine...
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
^its suffice not surfice.....so i can't give that too ya..
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
^good wordplay on the last line...meh good line
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
^eh...microsoft similes are kinda played but i'll give it to ya
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
^diss -order lines are played as fuck not givin that too ya..
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
^ aight not bad .....except the lines are what connects the punch..
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
^creative.....good....although the concept is played
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
^wan't feelin that line leave the wordplay out for you lol
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
^meh i could see it.....
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
^nice closer aight so its like this
Judge closer for sure
judge opener for sure..
pretty equal in the middle so i figure that judge takes this one overall
no hate ..pz
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
Lol. Obviously not.
You gotta admit, that was pretty dense of him.
Anyway...I'll make this a vote in a second.
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since;
Tight wordplay. Not a real hard punch. 5/10
Aint takin chances with this battle, like throw'n Dice,
Merk Judge Per-roll, leave him Slippin tryna Surf-ice;
Not enough punch in this, decent wordplay. 3/10
'Soon as name ^ punches are played out you'll probly be elite,
But no one Defends ur Honor... so I continue slash'n At-ur-knees;
Nah, didn't like that one. They are played out2/10
Until Fusion too is here, for an Instant then falls off,
See I own each one of ur Cliques, ... ha jus like Microsoft;
Again, decent wordplay, not a hard punch though. 4/10
You must be Ill Mentally, even tryna out verse this mortar,
I jus fuck'n Diagnosed and Served you, here's ur Diss-order;
Bleh. Not great. 4/10
18/50
Not bad Kay...try to focus a little more on the punches next battle maybe. Nice wordplay throughtout, and decent verse.
coward doing nething to make and take the piss
but how you spost to connect a punch..
..when everylines like-----this;
Lol, good personal, punch was somewhat played. 5/10
turn you crazy like epilectics...having a fit
i no i dropp'd second..but you live to be next to $pit(sig)
Nah, not feeling it too much. 2/10
ill kurupt your style..
..and shot you like a dillinger
ive beaten most of your crew..now u no y i look so familiar
Meh, not really, not much wittiness. 3/10
check'd your verse..to be honest..it wasnt fit for this board
cus you seem'd like prisoners wanting out..
..desperate for that level record(4-4)
Record punches are played. I used them when I first came here! 3/10
mix some black with a bad boy..still cant cum like-whoa
aisle gave me a rappad victory last week..
..and now through me a KayOhh.
Okay...just okay. 4/10
17/25
Wow, close. Very.
Overall this came down to a battle of wit.
Judge came with decent punches while KayOhh went for wordplay.
Neither was witty enough or came hard hitting enough.
But the useage of wordplay within punches was a definite plus for KayOhh.
V/KayOhh
And anyone who plans to bitch that this is a crew vote should die.
I always vote fair.
crew vote.................lmfao
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Thanks for tha votes De, P (if Judge'll allow it...) n Action.
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