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    Wake The Fuck Up!

    If You Wanna Sleep On RB Wait Till Night
    Then Do Like The Rest
    And Sleep In Open Mic

    Out Write:

    While You Was Talkin Bout Them, I Was Writing Right About Then,
    Ive Survived Life Thru My Mouth And a Pen,
    While You Was Chattin Up, I Was Just Wrappin It Up,
    Im Post It Up While Tappin On a Blunt
    But To My Demise I Find My Rhymes Go Unreplied,
    Like Kapz Left The Game Un Matched And Refined
    Now How You Forgot Me? I Stayed In The Shop G,
    Add A Loop And A Chop, I Write Rhymes On The Spot G
    They Want It Like This, Ill Do It Like That,
    Doin My Raps Like My Tracks Used To Be Before My Crash
    Fuck What You Think, Just Keep My Name On Ya Tounge,
    Son I Cant Understand How I Aint Respected Much
    I Write Good, Stayed Hood, Kept It Fresh At Yo Foots,
    Rhymes Books Filled To The Brim With Shit I Cooked


    If You Wanna Sleep On RB Wait Till Night
    Then Do Like The Rest
    And Sleep In Open Mic

    Edicius:

    bwahahahahahah
    u bitches are ghey anorexic sluts`
    but -spreadin even more shit ..
    rather leave nice reply's and prayes
    ` on what penskills bit!
    my writings are fine and adept` far from wack
    you bastids keep reading them..`
    but its the replys yall homos lack!
    browsing around, maybe bitin my lines..`
    but replying? and giving some feedback
    and see the true message that my WORDS define!
    thats far from happening` why ?
    u bitches want sum shit back ` fake fucks
    ah fuck it heres your reply..-you all suck!
    but there comes a time` that it collapse that string..
    thats attached to it .. / :
    gimme me back this ` that ..
    do me a fav` ..- but eh i see straight thru shit!!
    you bitch fuckin unbelievable` yet u best believe
    these homo' s aint about talent`
    but fugazy`s sneaky.. made to decive

    & literally fuckin up its basics that basicly makes you !
    and yall fuck up the foundations it amazes me!
    how its possible ` iunno how it can be ..
    a sorry assed one line reply
    oh my god !! well thank you!
    this shits dope -is all i get after a 200+ view


    fuckaaaa's

    If You Wanna Sleep On RB Wait Till Night
    Then Do Like The Rest
    And Sleep In Open Mic

    Fgee:

    kids enter an fgee thread in a click of haste
    but wait,the dumb cunts did it by mistake!
    i go to open mic and see a hundred views
    with a poor excuse
    of only one reply
    from some random guy whos said
    'dope keep doin ya thing'
    its really amazing what i learnt from the insight this brings
    feedbacks the whole point in the forum
    'i cant be bothered reading more than 5 lines i'll ignore em'
    but i cant expect them to understand
    when this line is longer than their attention span
    the final straw is when you skip my shit and then fill
    up a fucking thread written slash bitten by pen skills
    whos men skills lures his aim buddies into typing
    and he copy pastes from another site and gets done for biting
    well anyway thanks for tucking my verse into bed
    i hope the words raped u and you bled
    so screw your night time story my writtens already snoring
    it wasnt my fault you find ill material boring
    i've let off steam so fuck this im gonna chill yo
    and one last time my verse doesnt come with a free pillow!


    If You Wanna Sleep On RB Wait Till Night
    Then Do Like The Rest
    And Sleep In Open Mic

    Whatever I Dont Give A Fuck

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    I like...not simple and topic was dope and the end "sleep in open mic" fire
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    Up`

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    *gathers thoughts*

    OutWrite - opened rather well indeed.. stuck to topic i spose but felt ya sounded a bit aloof an commercial at times.. sounded a lil fake.. but then had a bunch of decent lines an closed strong.. a tad hard to follow at points when ya seemed to switch rhyme scheme or w/e..

    Edicius - surprisingly offensive an coarse.. easy to read an flowed well but the cussin kinda detracted from it.. specially as it was a topic thas been done untold times.. came across as over-reactin really.. not much stood out.. which is a first..

    Fgee - my favorite of the three.. 'when this line is longer than their attention span' was great.. got a lil repetitive at times.. the problem with collabs i guess.. but you gave it as much of a new twist as ya could so props.. managed to be forceful an creative without excessive cussin.. which requires more thought.. well done..

    Overall - the topics been done upteen times.. so it was never gonna take anyone by surprise.. regardless of the writers.. but you all gave it ya own touch.. made for a decent if not a lil borin read.

    Slate this:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125871

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    aight this was some tight shit here... tight flow to it... really descriptive and on point with the topic... nice vocab... the hook was straight... nuthin fancy bout the hook but they normally arent... really deep and emotional... and the rhyme scheme was tight too... 9/10

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    ofcourse nothing stood out ` this shit was for fun.. title dont help tho

    WAKE THE FUCK UP!

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    Link or it gets closed.

    Outwrite opened this up pretty solid I thought...came out strong with everything pretty much....but it did get hard to follow though as i was reading it at some spots but it was still a good verse...Ed, what can i say you started out with anger, kinda liked the aggression in your verse...flowed pretty well...fgee, nice opener of your part, i liked that...flow was good in this as well I thought....had some nice lines in your verse, liked the way you closed it....The chorus in this was ok....but overall this was a good collab.

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    link is in ittalics post

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    Is it?

    Unless one of u are 'Sludge'.
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    he asked a link` in your post theres one
    .. fuck you credz` 1love. =) i replyed to more om's than your have posted on rb.

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    Gotcha.

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    No Link.

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    lol @ the irony of the topic, coupled with the fact that you didn't leave your reply. ahahaha, thank you for the laugh.

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