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In...Hi Brethren...10-12?
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12's fine buddy
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Lyric's pic
Dead in a curb, setting up words but couldn't edge all the curves
Brethren'll just grab onto your brain..... and get on your nerves
The silliest one... throw joke book's and hit you with a million puns
We all know Lyric's a choke artist, but I'll get this William Hung
I'm running this... Lyric spends all this time, and no punches hit
I mean he missed me so much, I gave him a fucking hug and kiss
Trying to beef... "Losing ya mind", why you always crying to sleep
Brethren's in a class of his own.... while Lyric's still finding a seat
Often startled... people cheer more for me when I cough and gargle
Why isn't Lyric playing Chinese Checkers? He must've lost his marbles
Disect and tossed... grab this oriental kid and inject the sauce
I'll knock your fuckin head off... so you can collect your thoughts
Last edited by Brethren; April 24th, 2004 at 03:43 PM
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
An oxymoron here, cause your skills are an Ill-lusion kid
Dun hate cause I’m dope…
…And you jus oppose-it
I mean me versus Ethren, yeah I spelled it right bitch
Seperated you from RB…
…Cause we can’t stand your whackness
I expect to see your dickriders, voting for names instead of skill
No more elevating from you...
…Cause your already over the hill
You’ll never reach LLL, your dull so you'll never make the cut
Don‘t need ta clean ya slate...
…Cause you're already all washed up
Dopeness is a plateau, like your "fans" I'm leading you on, ya see?
You'll be looked up to someday...
…Maybe when whackness grows on trees
You’ll lose to me like every other, unlike ya rhymes I aint playin
Too whack to get a tour bus…
…So this kid jumped on the band-wagon
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Damn .. good battle.
Brethren - Good verse, but lay off the cliches. Every punch was a cliche, and it kind of got old. A lot of filler too, and what's with the newbie italics, quotations, and bold lettering? That's frontline shit there man. Anyways cool verse, just come more direct with less cliches.
Lyric - I'm impressed with most of your verse. You had some real dope lines but then some horrid shit in there too. The second and third bar sucked but everything else was fire. The opener was cool, the closer was good, the bar before the closer was nice. Good shit.
This is hard for me to vote on, each came equally nice. For the fact that Brethren had only one bad line compared to Lyric's two. I'm going to vote Brethren, close shit though.
Stop sleeping voters.
Breth-
Dead in a curb, setting up words but couldn't edge all the curves
Brethren'll just grab onto your brain..... and get on your nerves
decent
The silliest one... throw joke book's and hit you with a million puns
We all know Lyric's a choke artist, but I'll get this William Hung
hahaha...nice
I'm running this... Lyric spends all this time, and no punches hit
I mean he missed me so much, I gave him a fucking hug and kiss
decent
Trying to beef... "Losing ya mind", why you always crying to sleep
Brethren's in a class of his own.... while Lyric's still finding a seat
very nice punch
Often startled... people cheer more for me when I cough and gargle
Why isn't Lyric playing Chinese Checkers? He must've lost his marbles
lmao....
Disect and tossed... grab this oriental kid and inject the sauce
I'll knock your fuckin head off... so you can collect your thoughts
cool
lyric-
An oxymoron here, cause your skills are an Ill-lusion kid
Dun hate cause I’m dope…
…And you jus oppose-it
damn...nice
I mean me versus Ethren, yeah I spelled it right bitch
Seperated you from RB…
…Cause we can’t stand your whackness
flow was kinda messed up here...weak punch
I expect to see your dickriders, voting for names instead of skill
No more elevating from you...
…Cause your already over the hill
decent
You’ll never reach LLL, your dull so you'll never make the cut
Don‘t need ta clean ya slate...
…Cause you're already all washed up
haha...nice
Dopeness is a plateau, like your "fans" I'm leading you on, ya see?
You'll be looked up to someday...
…Maybe when whackness grows on trees
lmao...great punch
You’ll lose to me like every other, unlike ya rhymes I aint playin
Too whack to get a tour bus…
…So this kid jumped on the band-wagon
nice
Overall-nice fuckin battle....both came with fire here.....but I think that though lyric came with the only punch in this battle that I would classify as weak, I thought his punches hit just a bit harder...this battle was close as hell though, just though lyric edged it out.
V/lyric
Go Red Wings
Good battle here..getting slept on..
Breth:
Good verse man..the links to the pictures were funny, i can see that you did some research..punches were good, but a bit played..you did flip a few to make them seem original though...flow and structure was good..and you had some nice personals..
didn't like the italics tho...made it seemed a little forced...
Overall good verse, just lacked original punches..
Lyric:
Liked your verse alot homes...had some witty punches in there, that were really hard hitting...alot of creative punches like the tree line and the clean ya slate one..
good personals..and i felt that you had the more confident approach..you didn't need any pictures to beat him..or even links....and in my opinion that shits just played now..everyone on rb thinks need to put quotes and links in thier verses if they wanna win..Overall i think that you had the stronger verse, because of all the reasons i just stated above..
V-Lyric
Props to both tho...very dope battle..
Peace
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35/60Originally Posted by Brethren
28/60
Wow, you came real tight in some parts Lyric, but you weren't consistent with your punches. Brethren was...
that's basically what it came down to.
V/Brethren.
Last edited by Young Philly; April 25th, 2004 at 04:27 PM
Chea...thanks to all the voters..... 2-2 tie
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vote bretheren. wittier hits. those were alot of great concepts on those cliches.....never seen any of em before........the miss me one was real good...shit they were all original. lay off the bold though. lyrics verse was decent but in my opinion didnt start off strong and just didnt maintain the same illness that b did the whole way through.
great verse breth
vote b
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
Decent Battle,
I think brethren took this one,
His punches came more consistent, also were
by far more wittier, tho the william hung shit is kinda played..
I wasn't really feeling lyrics flow at times, But he still came w/
a few witty personals,^ agree , you kinda fell off at times,
Breth jus came more consistent...
V/Brethren
good shit... 4-2
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
breakdown breth
Dead in a curb, setting up words but couldn't edge all the curves
Brethren'll just grab onto your brain..... and get on your nerves
FLIPP'D ITE BUT NOT A REAL PUNCH
The silliest one... throw joke book's and hit you with a million puns
We all know Lyric's a choke artist, but I'll get this William Hung
NOT BAD KINDA NICE
I'm running this... Lyric spends all this time, and no punches hit
I mean he missed me so much, I gave him a fucking hug and kiss
ITE DIDNT REALLY HIT...NO PERSONAL
Trying to beef... "Losing ya mind", why you always crying to sleep
Brethren's in a class of his own.... while Lyric's still finding a seat
DOPE.HIT HARD AND NICE PERSONAL
Often startled... people cheer more for me when I cough and gargle
Why isn't Lyric playing Chinese Checkers? He must've lost his marbles
NAH.WEAK
Disect and tossed... grab this oriental kid and inject the sauce
I'll knock your fuckin head off... so you can collect your thoughts
BLAH......NICE FLIP BUT A LIL PLAYED NO PERSONAL
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Breakdown Lyric
An oxymoron here, cause your skills are an Ill-lusion kid
Dun hate cause I’m dope…
…And you jus oppose-it
NOT BAD BIT BLAH...
I mean me versus Ethren, yeah I spelled it right bitch
Seperated you from RB…
…Cause we can’t stand your whackness
NICE FLIP....NOT THAT HARD THO
I expect to see your dickriders, voting for names instead of skill
No more elevating from you...
…Cause your already over the hill
NICE PUNCH...A LIL PLAYED BUT COO
You’ll never reach LLL, your dull so you'll never make the cut
Don‘t need ta clean ya slate...
…Cause you're already all washed up
DOPE......TIPICAL LYRIC PUNCH NICE STRUCTURE
Dopeness is a plateau, like your "fans" I'm leading you on, ya see?
You'll be looked up to someday...
…Maybe when whackness grows on trees
NOT BAD MAN....WORDPLAY THERE YEH
You’ll lose to me like every other, unlike ya rhymes I aint playin
Too whack to get a tour bus…
…So this kid jumped on the band-wagon
NICE KONCEPT...DIDNT HIT TO HARD BUT NICE
OVERALL-LYRICS GETS THIS AS HE CAME MORE CONSITENT WITH PERSONALS AND PUNCHES...BRETH DOPE SHIT AND A FEW HARDER PUNCHES BUT NOT CONSISTENT ATALL.........NICE BATTLE GUYS CLOSE SHIT
Brethren wins (7-1)
Lyric loses (6-2)
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