Drop by Sunday Midnight.. GMT...
10-18linez
No hate
No D/R
No Crew
No Biting
No Recycling
You Spit 1st
RASCAL
Catalist
Drop by Sunday Midnight.. GMT...
10-18linez
No hate
No D/R
No Crew
No Biting
No Recycling
You Spit 1st
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in this battle....
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in................good luck..will probably drop way before deadline
Drop as soon as you can man..
will probably drop before aswell..
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New Rule
No Feeding
Bitch you just Newbie trying to hang with pro's...
Bring Mentality,Excedrin and Gazeebo.....
.....................oh shit now your exposed...
You only punchh with quotes.. going to find my posts...
So i did research of your Graveyard.........
......Mentality,Excedrin and Gazeebo are the only Ghosts...
Now Come on Seriously who the fuck are Fusion?
oh isn't it that dope crew........
.....oh no that's Cryptic Lyrics so for the Confusion
"try to beat me" with a fucked up Avy shakin his knees.....
are they punches your throwing ?...............
......................Or you shaking from Parkinsons Disease......
Sorry man but your winning's over.. ino a shame..
I could of spit most your linez..............
........................Hell you told them me on Aim....
Your alucky rapper who faced newbs and vets and never lost..
I wanted this win so bad.....
.....I went for the easy win.. and i was willing to stop at no-cost..
im worried i orderd a verse off Ebay...Originally Posted by Catalist
............it aint arrived yet.. tell them im Holiday ill drop when im ready....
Aiight gone over the line limit but it dont matter
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sorry for the wait...bit i will show...
starting to type now...
Specifically said, You spit first, yet he dropped on a dime
Realized I would a while, so he dropped.....
.....Just to give his d/r'ers some time!
Don's Waste My Day, Give Me Something Worthwhile
This kid copied Axiom's Avy....
.....And Now is copying my Style!
Think your king, but not by demand, Doesn't deserve a Crown
Plus your crew Cryptic Lyrics is the wackest crew....
.....Starting from the leader down!
For your recogniton to go up, a Win in this is vital
But that's impossble, Since your population on Rb....
.....Equals Your Custom Title!
Wishes for a victory, Waits for a shooting star
So I would say that your chances are slim....
.....But their more of your Avatar!
Subject Select, Posts when up but skills never did connect
So You could have 10,000 posts in our profile....
.....But still you wouldn't gain any respect!
Career's in a nose dive, lucky if you come out alive
Yeah you do text and Kareoke, But in your free time....
.....All you do is get bitched by Aisle Phive!
Ducked me Four times, Actually starting to cluck like a duck
Everybody knows where you should head next....
.....But it looks like your out of luck!
Dont get my punches bitchs...dont fuckin vote
aight good battle...
flow -both
structure-both
punches-rascal
personals-both
complexity-rascals
creativity-rascal
humor-cata
multiples-cata
metaphors-neither
overall-rascal
i felt that rascal edged u out on some of the punches
they were more hard hitting like this:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Catalist
lol...by the way people have dropped in the crew battles already
im worried i orderd a verse off Ebay...
............it aint arrived yet.. tell them im Holiday ill drop when im ready ....
^^^that was a good closer
although ur opener cata was better
no hate
vote-rascal
Bitch you just Newbie trying to hang with pro's...
Bring Mentality,Excedrin and Gazeebo.....
.....................oh shit now your exposed...
kinda funny, weak punch- 6/10
You only punchh with quotes.. going to find my posts...
So i did research of your Graveyard.........
......Mentality,Excedrin and Gazeebo are the only Ghosts...
lol, kinda recycled though...- 7/10
Now Come on Seriously who the fuck are Fusion?
oh isn't it that dope crew........
.....oh no that's Cryptic Lyrics so for the Confusion
meh... no- 5/10
"try to beat me" with a fucked up Avy shakin his knees.....
are they punches your throwing ?...............
......................Or you shaking from Parkinsons Disease......
witty, but played....- 6/10
Sorry man but your winning's over.. ino a shame..
I could of spit most your linez..............
........................Hell you told them me on Aim....
lol, nice- 8/10
Your alucky rapper who faced newbs and vets and never lost..
I wanted this win so bad.....
.....I went for the easy win.. and i was willing to stop at no-cost..
niceeee, good punch- 8/10
Quote:
Originally Posted by Catalist
lol...by the way people have dropped in the crew battles already
im worried i orderd a verse off Ebay...
............it aint arrived yet.. tell them im Holiday ill drop when im ready ....
no, not as a closer...- 4/10
overall, 44/70= 63%
You had 1 or 2 stretched lines, not too bad there. Overall structure and flow is on point. Punches are hitting, but some need to be lessed played. Keep being creative.
Specifically said, You spit first, yet he dropped on a dime
Realized I would a while, so he dropped.....
.....Just to give his d/r'ers some time!
nice and witty, good opener- 8/10
Don's Waste My Day, Give Me Something Worthwhile
This kid copied Axiom's Avy....
.....And Now is copying my Style!
played...no- 5/10
Think your king, but not by demand, Doesn't deserve a Crown
Plus your crew Cryptic Lyrics is the wackest crew....
.....Starting from the leader down!
lol, nice- 8/10
For your recogniton to go up, a Win in this is vital
But that's impossble, Since your population on Rb....
.....Equals Your Custom Title!
lol niccceeee, witty, stretched though- 7/10
Wishes for a victory, Waits for a shooting star
So I would say that your chances are slim....
.....But their more of your Avatar!
no....- 4/10
Subject Select, Posts when up but skills never did connect
So You could have 10,000 posts in our profile....
.....But still you wouldn't gain any respect!
meh...ok- 6/10
Career's in a nose dive, lucky if you come out alive
Yeah you do text and Kareoke, But in your free time....
.....All you do is get bitched by Aisle Phive!
strrrrrrreeeeeeetcccccchhhhheeedddd, kinda good- 5/10
Ducked me Four times, Actually starting to cluck like a duck
Quote:
Originally Posted by RASCAL
I'm banned from the Help Center on Rb
Everybody knows where you should head next....
.....But it looks like your out of luck!
again....strecthed....kinda witty but weak punch- 5/10
overall, 40/70= 57%
A bunch of your lines were stretched, and it messed up your flow. Work on your structure man. Keep the sylables close to even. Some punches were directed wrong. Make sure it's funny and witty too.
V/ Rascal
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RASCAL: Your verse was ok, but nothing great. You had some pretty nice personals here and there. I felt as though many of your lines were real stretched, and that made your verse had to read and weakened the punches. A couple of your punches were played as hell, especially the Parkinson's one. The others were kind of weak...nothing fantastic..nothing horrible.
Catalist: Decent verse, although i've def seen better from you. Some of your lines were also stretched, but not as severely as Rascal's. You had some pretty nice personals in your verse. Your punches hit decently well for the most part, although a few of them were kind of played. Ok verse.
Line of the match: None really. Nothing stood out too much. I'd pick Catalist's closer though.
v/ Catalist for a harder-hitting and more original verse.
Points: 39/70
Overall:
You done decently but a majority of your verse consisted of mostly punches that didnt hit well.....
Points: 47/80
Overall:
Even if you did go 2 lines over....you still came with a better hitting verse...and a bit more personal and direct....therefore i believe you took this battle for simply having a tad harder verse....
Vote - Catalist
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RASCAL-some good punches in there
recycled the one line so its iffy...
structure wus fine had a good flow..
oevrall nice verse with good personals...
Cata-nice opener some pretty hard hitting
punches few personals ehh...ok wordplay..
closer wus good but stretched...overall wus a good verse..
My V/Catalist...
Vote invalid. Gone. -Token
Last edited by Token; April 19th, 2004 at 06:55 PM
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
uppin 1 thanks for votes
leave links.....
o yea....what a dumb hoe .44 is....cant even add
if ida counted it right, you still wouldve lost in my opinion, but w/e. Sorry i pissed you off herb
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I dunno maybe I wasn't read'n dat shit rite both I didn't feel but Rascal was better. By long
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