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Thread: LW Matchup: $pitacular (5-1) vs Phoeniix (4-0)

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    LW Matchup: $pitacular (5-1) vs Phoeniix (4-0)

    Read the rules.
    Verses due by Friday,
    Check ins are due Wednesday. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
    No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
    Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
    If $pitacular wins this week he will have a shot in LLL next week.

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    Check.... 20 lines?

    *due to no response, lines are going to be 10. not wasting my time on a no-show*
    Last edited by $pitacular; April 15th, 2004 at 08:03 PM

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    if you don't know what a Phoeniix is, don't vote.



    check it,

    I usually just serve Death in verses.... but I guess I gave Birth today
    I only meant to smoke herb..... & look what arose from my ash-tray!
    I hit hard like 808's.... when you add 2 amps & extra speakers
    uh oh I'm in Treble... cuz ya punches hit hard as a popped tweeter!
    I tried to change you from herb to Superhero.... but it just won't work
    I'd castrate you & make you an X-man... but you'd have to be one first!
    you kiss my ass until I'm nausiated.... sorta like being Car-Sick
    I never Rode in a Firebird... but I got one Ridin my dick!
    I'm a hard Core-vet.... engine gunnin & runnin these text wars
    you just got your feet wet.... from pissin all in ya drawers


    merked.

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    shit sorry i missed check in. my computer was fucked...i just got a new one though

    i'll drop tomorrow.
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    Ego trippin fool claims ill wordplay...but your far from the best
    Shit your concepts so old...you make this dude look fresh
    Come on man...you ain't a vet...lets be straight you fucking stink
    Faggot's only got an ego to make up for what the rest of us think
    Or you just pissed about your sex life so you use me for a scape goat
    Kid just can't get girls wet....
    ...like he gave em all raincoats!
    You're shameful...but dont start beef, kid...i know ya known for that
    So i'll just crack your spine as a favor...
    ...so the brat can say he snapped back
    You just a wack fag with a second chance but sorry...life aint fair
    So $pit's LLL shot gettin blocked again...like a reocurring nightmare
    A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E

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    both came hard. nice battle, this was close.

    Spit- you came original. thats what i liked most about your verse, some of your punches didn't seem to follow through though. that was the only problem. i was hopin' for some personals, but i couldn't find any in your verse.

    Phoeniix- you came good, had ok punches though, nothing too great. came more direct than spit did but they jus didn't hit as hard. most of both of your punches were equal. but i didn't get a sense of originality in your verse, thats what lost you my vote.

    vote- Spit

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    ^^^
    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular
    if you don't know what a Phoeniix is, don't vote.

    Uppin

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    Spit: Verse was decent... Firebird line and ash-tray line are real nice personals... especially the ash-tray one, could've ben more creative with the Firebird line. Rest was pretty nice...

    Phoeniix: I thought verse was under average... punches poorly aimed, although that picture had me laughing for like 5 minutes, It's not a good punch. Your re-occuring nightmare finisher was just so weak, I know you can do better.

    Vote - Spit
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    I usually just serve Death in verses.... but I guess I gave Birth today
    I only meant to smoke herb..... & look what arose from my ash-tray!
    nice personal....good punch...solid bar
    I hit hard like 808's.... when you add 2 amps & extra speakers
    uh oh I'm in Treble... cuz ya punches hit hard as a popped tweeter!
    meh...ok
    I tried to change you from herb to Superhero.... but it just won't work
    I'd castrate you & make you an X-man... but you'd have to be one first!
    no
    you kiss my ass until I'm nausiated.... sorta like being Car-Sick
    I never Rode in a Firebird... but I got one Ridin my dick!
    decent wordplay...dun feel the gay punch tho
    I'm a hard Core-vet.... engine gunnin & runnin these text wars
    you just got your feet wet.... from pissin all in ya drawers
    ok...kinda weak





    Ego trippin fool claims ill wordplay...but your far from the best
    Shit your concepts so old...you make this dude look fresh
    no
    Come on man...you ain't a vet...lets be straight you fucking stink
    Faggot's only got an ego to make up for what the rest of us think
    blah..weak..bad wording
    Or you just pissed about your sex life so you use me for a scape goat
    Kid just can't get girls wet....
    ...like he gave em all raincoats!
    nice concept...noy feelin the sex punch tho
    You're shameful...but dont start beef, kid...i know ya known for that
    So i'll just crack your spine as a favor...
    ...so the brat can say he snapped back
    good
    You just a wack fag with a second chance but sorry...life aint fair
    So $pit's LLL shot gettin blocked again...like a reocurring nightmare
    ok


    Pretty average battle...both came sub-par...But Spit came with a lil more consistency and had the harder and better punches and personals

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    spit

    I usually just serve Death in verses.... but I guess I gave Birth today
    I only meant to smoke herb..... & look what arose from my ash-tray!
    witty punch, 7/10
    I hit hard like 808's.... when you add 2 amps & extra speakers
    uh oh I'm in Treble... cuz ya punches hit hard as a popped tweeter!
    started off good...finished eh..6/10
    I tried to change you from herb to Superhero.... but it just won't work
    I'd castrate you & make you an X-man... but you'd have to be one first!
    erm, weak..5/10
    you kiss my ass until I'm nausiated.... sorta like being Car-Sick
    I never Rode in a Firebird... but I got one Ridin my dick!
    haha nice wordplay...8/10
    I'm a hard Core-vet.... engine gunnin & runnin these text wars
    you just got your feet wet.... from pissin all in ya drawers
    again started off good.. ithink u coulda mixed it up better...7/10

    33/50


    Phoenixx

    Ego trippin fool claims ill wordplay...but your far from the best
    Shit your concepts so old...you make this dude look fresh
    decent..7/10
    Come on man...you ain't a vet...lets be straight you fucking stink
    Faggot's only got an ego to make up for what the rest of us think
    lol, hit hard...7/10
    Or you just pissed about your sex life so you use me for a scape goat
    Kid just can't get girls wet....
    ...like he gave em all raincoats!
    nice wordplay, witty...8/10
    You're shameful...but dont start beef, kid...i know ya known for that
    So i'll just crack your spine as a favor...
    ...so the brat can say he snapped back
    ok, ight punch...umm...7/10
    You just a wack fag with a second chance but sorry...life aint fair
    So $pit's LLL shot gettin blocked again...like a reocurring nightmare
    kinda fell off here...nothing great..eh punch...5/10

    34/50


    ok this was close...so i broke it down...phoenixx seemed to be more consistant with his punches.. i felt it was better overall...more comical n shit..so yea i'm going against the grain here..

    vote-phoenixx

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    spit-
    I usually just serve Death in verses.... but I guess I gave Birth today
    I only meant to smoke herb..... & look what arose from my ash-tray!

    haha nice

    I hit hard like 808's.... when you add 2 amps & extra speakers
    uh oh I'm in Treble... cuz ya punches hit hard as a popped tweeter

    no

    I tried to change you from herb to Superhero.... but it just won't work
    I'd castrate you & make you an X-man... but you'd have to be one first!

    decent, could word it better though

    you kiss my ass until I'm nausiated.... sorta like being Car-Sick
    I never Rode in a Firebird... but I got one Ridin my dick!

    hahaha..nice personal

    I'm a hard Core-vet.... engine gunnin & runnin these text wars
    you just got your feet wet.... from pissin all in ya drawers

    weak finisher

    overall-lots of ups and downs, inconsistent, but a few very nice bars.

    phoenix-
    Ego trippin fool claims ill wordplay...but your far from the best
    Shit your concepts so old...you make this dude look fresh

    punch was weak but the picture was funny as hell

    Come on man...you ain't a vet...lets be straight you fucking stink
    Faggot's only got an ego to make up for what the rest of us think

    naa...not witty

    Or you just pissed about your sex life so you use me for a scape goat
    Kid just can't get girls wet....
    ...like he gave em all raincoats!

    ehh...decent

    You're shameful...but dont start beef, kid...i know ya known for that
    So i'll just crack your spine as a favor...
    ...so the brat can say he snapped back

    kinda played but flipped pretty nicely

    You just a wack fag with a second chance but sorry...life aint fair
    So $pit's LLL shot gettin blocked again...like a reocurring nightmare

    very weak finisher


    overall-ok verse but kinda weak, not as many quotables as spit.


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    I usually just serve Death in verses.... but I guess I gave Birth today
    I only meant to smoke herb..... & look what arose from my ash-tray!
    Horrible. No punch? 2/10.

    I hit hard like 808's.... when you add 2 amps & extra speakers
    uh oh I'm in Treble... cuz ya punches hit hard as a popped tweeter!
    Ok...not good. 3.5/10

    I tried to change you from herb to Superhero.... but it just won't work
    I'd castrate you & make you an X-man... but you'd have to be one first!
    Not good. T'was a punch though. 3.5/10

    you kiss my ass until I'm nausiated.... sorta like being Car-Sick
    I never Rode in a Firebird... but I got one Ridin my dick!
    Probably your best line. And it was a gay joke 5/10

    I'm a hard Core-vet.... engine gunnin & runnin these text wars
    you just got your feet wet.... from pissin all in ya drawers
    Bad. Horrible ender to a horrible-er verse. 2/10

    16/50. <---Flip that.



    Ego trippin fool claims ill wordplay...but your far from the best
    Shit your concepts so old...you make this dude look fresh
    I don't go to read links. Corny punch. 2/10

    Come on man...you ain't a vet...lets be straight you fucking stink
    Faggot's only got an ego to make up for what the rest of us think
    Lol. Not too bad. 6.5/10

    Or you just pissed about your sex life so you use me for a scape goat
    Kid just can't get girls wet....
    ...like he gave em all raincoats!
    Okay, who cares? 2/10

    You're shameful...but dont start beef, kid...i know ya known for that
    So i'll just crack your spine as a favor...
    ...so the brat can say he snapped back
    Played as hell. 2.5/10

    You just a wack fag with a second chance but sorry...life aint fair
    So $pit's LLL shot gettin blocked again...like a reocurring nightmare
    Not good, but umm...not really horrid. 4/10

    17/50

    As bad.

    But a little better. Lol.

    Horrible battle guys.

    V/Phoeniix.

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    $pitacular wins (6-1) and advances to LLL.
    Phoeniix loses (4-1)

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