Up....Leave a link and a reply.....Ill return the favor....Peace...
Up....Leave a link and a reply.....Ill return the favor....Peace...
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Up.....feedback required....leave a link....Ill return the favor....peace..
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well.....Ill up this one last time....
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Yea u described this situation a little too well.......anything u want to tell us?
This was well written. I think this is ur best piece I have read so far. Ur imagery is something to harp on cuz it complemented ur piece well. Nice use of vocab and ryhme scheme to give the reader a visual image. I liked the whole story. I could just sence that this guy was a sicko. Big ups on the character u created. All in all I think this was a great piece that was well written. Keep doin wut ur doin.
Oh my god. Is it just me or does everyone in euthanasia have an ill flow. Flow was flawless. The storytelling was dope, and made me want to read faster to se what was next. The imagery was dope. This whole piece was ill. Good job. If the om od the month thread was open, I'd nominate this. Keep up the good work.
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this shit is old as fluck, but I have to return the feed you left on lyrical slaughter...
so this is some depressing ass shit, lol but well executed and put together. the whole rhyme scheme was basic and simple, but I think that's the right way to go in a piece like this to get your message across and display a mood, as apposed to oversaturating it with multies and overwhelming vocab, nice shit.
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