Microphone Soloist

[Unwritten Hazard]

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[conquistador]

you started off real weak.............that made it hard for me to keep readng but I did and it was worth it. Listen you need to stop trying to write things that you think people will understand.....
don't be afraid to be misunderstood or thought of as wack..
because when people don't give a shit they leave an impact
Hey how's that it rhymes and I ain't even trying
.....anyway, I know you got some illness in you but you need to stop giving a shit, like when you post in the cypher

[Milk]

it was ok, the strucrue needs to be worked on alittle... but you need to elevate a little , but dont worry you defiently show potential and it was a decent post for just a keystyle

[RawSwordsMen]

I for one felt it every way. but i guess not many people see it i like do. you came smart with ya words much complex was in it if people were to pay attention to it. you spoke truth on whats goin on in the game.

you came real nice with these lines here:

" keepin my mind on track///
until my rhymes on tracks, nowadays, i find songs lack///
ive gone back, to the time were every rapper had incite///
today kids like to hear about a binge night, a grim fight........
what are the rappers rims like....
sure it begins tight, then every MC follows trend///
if society makes us shallow,then,......all we got is model men"-Mc Unwritten Hazard.

that was ill
keep posting man you get a 9.0 outta 10
good shit man


Peace......
1.............

[Unwritten Hazard]

thanks the feed.


"strucrue needs to be worked on alittle... but you need to elevate a little "


just a key, but thanks 4 honesty


uppn

[Chrit.]

Played topic.... flow changes too much
I favor pieces that could be decent audios

Yeah... write about something that hasnt been done to death
Fix your structure....

And get rid of the ///'s
It takes more time to do that than keeping it simple and non-moronic

[Unwritten Hazard]

non-moronic??? lol

i respect anyone opinions with over 6,999 posts.

i know other kats have done this topic. but what ur saying is dont do any subject that has been done b4.

even if its played out, im an MC. and i write about shit i feel, and concepts that appeal to me.

just cause its been done alot,it isnt gonna stop me from putting my emotions in text and sharing my side and what i think bout it.


but thanks 4 the honesty, i love getting negative feed back....best way to elevate.


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