Hyper cant drop flows without swearing a bit,
so I cant get why he wack, and still daring to spit.
He posts crap like he was airing his shit.. (lol)
Elevations the journey but you act like you barely bearing trip..
Just relax guy, cos Im losing breath following rhymes,
When Im reading your posts, Im thinking is he borrowing lines?
Cos I'll be honest I understood your verses, but I was left dumbstruck,
Wondering why this dude was typing, like he was some drunkfuck! (lol)
Smoldering ash, burning this kid's ass, like he just ate some baked beans
talking to much denim, so I think I'll stich up his lips like jeans..............
His idle is to slow, and he's gassed out at the mouth, his fuel dont flow
brain misplaced, in his own thoughts, text is flexed to know
But my brain quicker, for this nigga, one jab and he lost his whole figure
his talent so thin that needles are 10 times thicker
logan
this logan kat aint really drawn up for what he be saying/
no slashes or puncuation, all he doing it brick laying//
ya verse look all splurged together, i can hardly make sense of it/
another keystyle thats shyt, u need to get rid of this//
Longevity with ya lines is like a run-on sentence/
dude next time try to plug in some disses//
In my past life I slayed hundreds, and in the life before that/
I played trumpets, to warn you that I was comin/
There's one billion ways to die, and I already tried/
nine-hundred million nine hundred and ninety nine/
When I aim and fire my rhymes, like a hundred cannon balls flying/
Striking you one at a time, in a parallel line/
Cap-WaN is still loadin his gun, still in his prime,/
just waiting 2 c whoose next in line,/
ne body below me.... bust a rhyme/
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and rip your fuckin skin off just to get on your nerves
Last edited by Cap-WaN; April 10th, 2004 at 05:52 PM
not da ass nucca cap-wan again,
talkin bout havin cannonballs flyin,
what u know about bangin gunz like dat,
nothin...i'll leave u and ur nuccaz laid out in stacks,
this is da wackest thing i spit thats in mind,
its only six lines u still cant spitmetter than mine.
seriously though. u are ass
Da KiD iS iN dA FoRuM BUiLdInG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kid..Please Yo Shit Was More Wack Then Cap-Wan.|
Da-Kids Rhyme Is More Colder Then An High Air-Con.||
You Back In The Forum Nobody Knew You Were Even Here.|
I Take This Kid And Whip Him Outta This Damn At-Mos-Phere.||
Im Like Automatic This Kid Is In Stick-Shift-ed.|
And It Dosnt Take A Genius To Tell This Kid Is Not GIVTED.||
i see u like to say mah name alot in ur lines,
fatal lyrics when u spit nucca take ya time,
u aint put in work yet why showin ya battle records,
maybe because ur punches feel like little peckers,
yea im only gonna give u six lines too,
because i only really need three minutes wit u.
Da KiD iS iN dA FoRuM BUiLdInG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Six Lines...I Can Give 2 And Still Rip ya Neck.|
This Is Like Gamblin Kid..Wanna Bet.||
FataL LyriKzZ Will Be Tattooed On Ya Chest.|
Peckers.. Need A Dictionary To Increase Neverless.||
Cover Up Kid This Bout To Get Gorey.|
He Saw Mah Pic And Then Got Horny.||
Just A Quick Rap
fatal lyriks really need to stop comin at me,
im tired as fuck of wack nuccaz sayin K I D,
punk ass nucca tellin me "Just A Quick Rap",
wit dragons over back u not spittin hot rap,
FL, ima give u six lines once again i finished,
this a quick rap did it less than three minutes.
Da KiD iS iN dA FoRuM BUiLdInG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rap And Rap Dont Rhyme Kid Check The Bookz.|
He Not No Muphee Lee This Kid Needs Hookz.||
Kid Dont Start Dissin Dawg You Cant Even Rap.|
You Think Ya HArd..Well Yo Raps Are {Flat}.||
I LEave Him More Crippled Than Christopher Reeves.|
He Got Something...Wait Nicca Aint Got Sleeves..||
I send 'punches' to Fatal..watch him get socked and curl
This dude from 'Cali', Well i'ma 'Rock ya World'
Get dropped and hurled..stomped and pushed, flexxed and beatened
^^^^^*wack shit* Mods I would expect deleting
Get 'em checked for bleeding.. it's impossible to slay me
Call me the 'Plastic Surgeon'..having him 'changing faces' like his 'avy'
"Saying you cant beat me is a Hyperbole,
Anybody can beat you,and that my friend is a parole,
This guy is wack why does he even try blowing emcees,
I dont want to be a tease,I want to appease,but seriously I can beat you with ease,
I already know this cat`s style,but just to going to one of his battles isnt worthwhile,
He reads my disses,sits there amazed,finds out they are about him and acts dazed,
Its all over and your done,now its time for me to be sonned.
Its all over and your done,now its time for me to be sonned.
well your right about bout that, but im not "Big Poppa"////
right when u popped out, i looked at you then slapped tha docta///
i gave alotta sperm to ya momma, (comma), she should have swallowed///
she guzzled my bottle, left it hollow, holla////
im a role-model to follow givin a lecture///
like a naked "Apollo" astronaut, you cant handle this pressure///
bringing your sun based rhymes under horrible weather///
oral or whatever, wether you get soaked, its just reflects off my texture
Last edited by Unwritten Hazard; April 12th, 2004 at 05:58 AM
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Unwritten Hazard You Bout To Get Writ-On.|
As Mah FaTaL LyRiKzZ Give You Punches Ya Rhymes i Spit-On.||
Ill calll you collect but afta this call me ATT.|
Diss Me Back Cuz Yo Rhymes Got Nuttin On Me.||
Battling You... Id Rather Be The One Gettin Spittin.|
As I Erase You And Make You Liter|ally Unwritten.||
man once again this kat spits wack
should be slapped for those wack raps
the structure, wordplay its all the same
look at his avy cypher..damn wut a shame
ur TOO plain kid, ya aint got nothin
no skill, no ryhmes, & no girls 4 fuckin
so stop while u ahead, and quit the game
before u get known of being lamer than lame
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