I Live.

[John Kerry]

I live;
To laugh at the `rebels` who won`t applaud their bosses. .
For that moment in time that always fosters awkward pauses
For myself –
For occasions and subsequent lockets` sublimes
When my hands delve into the abysmal, harrowing pockets of time
For talent,
For balance, for the hope of aspiring past `hot`
For skylines and flowers: forums where I admire the back drops
For music,
For art, for the times when my kin can grow, unmet
For the watercolours & brush strokes behind each indigo sunset
For hip-hop,
For addicts who withdraw from their bar stools
& drown addictions in music and its flawless guitar chords
For summer,
For sun, for birds that will pillage verizons
For vacationers who cheerfully mingle and fill up the islands
For cleanliness -
For eclectics, for those that repress orgies. .
Of bad news, & for programs that close with success stories
For challenges,
For realizing, even for facing the bitch in me
For overcoming inner-cynics and for embracing simplicity
I live.

[Richard Parker]

this was one of the best pieces i've seen at RB - and elsewhere as well.
a few places however the flow was fucked up , other than that id have nominated this for legends.. (like you dont have enough in there? lol)

For art, for the times when my kin can grow, unmet
For the watercolours & brush strokes behind each indigo sunset
flow was forced...
For addicts who withdraw from their bar stools
& drown addictions in music and its flawless guitar chords
stools/ chords doesnt rhyme that well..

other than a few mis-rhymes quite dope..

[Illus']

Pretty nice piece here..
Flow was on point.
The topic was nice and you stayed on topic
With this drop..
Never seen you drop before..
Nice vocabulary usage for imagery purposes.
Like the paint brush line. You know the indigo
Sunset portion…that was a nice deep line..to me anyways.

Nicely done!! the structure nice and unique which makes
It an easy read..


Peace stay dropping ..

[GFunk]

this was an ill drop.. very very unique, structure wasn't the best, but the content was really original... I enjoyed reading this. Like the cat above me, some of the lines were a bit forced, flow and in rhyme, but there weren't that many flaws afterwards

For challenges,
For realizing, even for facing the bitch in me
For overcoming inner-cynics and for embracing simplicity
I live.

Nice ending, summed it up as to what motivates you and what you deal with, yet keep on moving...

Overall, you excelled, multis here and there, flow was very balanced, meaning behind each line(most important), and nice vocab.... good piece

return the favor and peak some of my drops

[John Kerry]

thank you all.

[John Kerry]

A wee bit more critique would satisfy my ravenous hunger; though, I don`t expect much any longer from this board.

[Knock Out Punch]

this is nice